Jiya's Poems Station-1..GOOD BYE ALL OF U

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1001

Originally posted by: jiya1
too good dby..u r also get
m getting faint today we got such a good poet today

1)Sunita

2)pricess

3)Monika

4)deby

5) Visrom

OMG 5..unbelivable...😲

hey jiya.. ye sab tumhari kavitaon ka asar hai.....😊

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1002

wow😛

bahut hi achi imagination hai jiya great... waiting for more...😊

jiya o jiya ye daya k bare mein kya suna dia..
baato hi baato mein dil ko dhadka diya,
kash aisi koi baarish ki raat ho,
hum tum aur daya sath ho..
kaise bhool payenge un lomho ko
jisne sapno ko bhi amar bana diya.... hahahaha 😆😆😆

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1003

lovely lines out there................. awesome job............... 👏👏👏👏.................. made the action hero daya........... look romantic 😳😳😳😳.................

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1004

Originally posted by: Puri_2711
lovely lines out there................. awesome job............... 👏.................. made the action hero daya........... look romantic 😳.................

hey purni is there any claps for me too. 😊

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1005

thanks guys appriciating my poems..monika again lovely poem..meine kuch nahi kiya e tum sab ko malum tha ki tum bhipoem likh sakate ho..😃 bus.keep it up guys

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1006

lovely poem di......
Par ghabraya kyu daya ko dekhke???

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: chinnu_manikyam
lovely poem di......
Par ghabraya kyu daya ko dekhke???

hey chinnu i'm not expert in writing poems like jiya. but at least i tried na kuch to comments do yaar... 😊

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Monika

@monika21

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1008

Originally posted by: jiya1
thanks guys appriciating my poems..monika again lovely poem..meine kuch nahi kiya e tum sab ko malum tha ki tum bhipoem likh sakate ho..😃 bus.keep it up guys

thanks jiya. but u motivated me for this. i don't know whether its good or not.. but m happy at least i tried. 😊 so happy. thanks for appreciating me😊

Edited by monika21 - 15 years ago

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1009

@ jiya aap ki imagination ke to kya kehne. Ab main kya kahun. you got opportunity, app dar gayi. It was direct from heart with lots of imagination. Can say this poem direct from your dreamland.

@ monika nice try you too have potential bas ab shuru ho jao. start imagining and writing.