Sideways FF - CB II - Part 18, pg.48

anusha sharma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Why... congs for starting the FF....loved ur first page and enjoyed the scene1.😆

my small request........if anytime Radh's heart goes out to her Dev plz include some of Radev moments. maybe they can have some Aaank micholi 😆same as when she used to be in PB as his saali.
and back ground music, Dev singing..."Ankhiyaan milaaoon kabhi ankhiyaan churaaoon, Kya tune kiya jaadu..........Kabhi ghabraaoon kabhi gale lag jaaoon Mera khud pe nahin qaabu Bina paayal ke hi baje ghunghroo........."

BTW a doubt.......Did she alrady leave her job already or just discussing with Kahna to leave?

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Putija

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

🤣 loved this new Pataka and liked ur Kanha so he slept at CMs office and then he is back to u to save him😆Do continue with this humorous ff

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misti73

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Angie loved your Radha Murti staying in another spot and then also moving away .😆😆

Also loved your idea of Kanha coming to you for help 😆😆...can you include the gendwa phool somewhere?

do you want a customised song for the duet?.....I can change the words a bit.

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Angie

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Gardes & Bee: Thanks for the Sanksar photos. I will choose the best and try to post them in the thread. I like Sankar as he is also somewhat vengeful. Bee, that is 12:30 a.m. I will edit it. Gardes, like your song. It will be included.

Misti: Thanks for the Vansh photo. I like the last one. I too find Vansh good looking and with a edge. I went to their forum and read some of the backstory (I know the basics, but hadn't looked at the updates of the recent episodes). So, Vansh is now total psycho. I will use pre-wedding Vansh for CN.

Everyone: Don't worry if Sanskar or Vansh are not to your taste. In my scene 2, you will see that any of your preferred actors can fit the bill (stay tuned). So, even that shirtless Avinash (Dg86 photo) can be used for Mr. KaamDev Pujari.

Misti: Thanks for reminding about the gendwa phool. I forgot about that one (could have given some new dialogues to Kanha). But, for my scene 2: I have stolen some of your ideas (to do something with pearls and dhanno), but need to look at your older commentaries to steal some dialogues. That brings me to another request. Can you please put your commentaries in one thread going forward as it takes a while to search for older threads and I am too lazy to do that. So, I may have to reinvent the wheel whereas some of your stuff really fits my scene 2 very well.

Please do send your duet. We can always do antakshari if there are too many good songs. Also, there can be multiple scenes of singing too (I will too use parties and samarohs when I run out of ideas). Dev is not going to be jealous only in one scene. From now onwards until he regains his memory, it is torment for him by Radhika.

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gardes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Now it is my turn to post pictures of Mr. Kaam*** Pujari, Radhika's new love interest....

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misti73

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Misti: Thanks for the Vansh photo. I like the last one. I too find Vansh good looking and with a edge. I went to their forum and read some of the backstory (I know the basics, but hadn't looked at the updates of the recent episodes). So, Vansh is now total psycho. I will use pre-wedding Vansh for CN.

Misti: Thanks for reminding about the gendwa phool. I forgot about that one (could have given some new dialogues to Kanha). But, for my scene 2: I have stolen some of your ideas (to do something with pearls and dhanno), but need to look at your older commentaries to steal some dialogues. That brings me to another request. Can you please put your commentaries in one thread going forward as it takes a while to search for older threads and I am too lazy to do that. So, I may have to reinvent the wheel whereas some of your stuff really fits my scene 2 very well.

Please do send your duet. We can always do antakshari if there are too many good songs. Also, there can be multiple scenes of singing too (I will too use parties and samarohs when I run out of ideas). Dev is not going to be jealous only in one scene. From now onwards until he regains his memory, it is torment for him by Radhika.

Angie I also liked the last photgraph of Vansh...he has got the softer look there. I didn't mention it since it is your story so left to you to make the decision....and he was much better before he turned psycho....
Do you mean commentaries or my scripts? The former does not have many dialogues. I don't know about making a single thread (like you I am lazy) but I can send all the msword files to you........I usually write them in ms word and then copy and paste them here.

Edited by misti73 - 15 years ago

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Angie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Misti, if you could PM me that, that would be great. Actually, you write some side comments that I am planning to turn into dialogues. Scene 2 involves KamDev Pujari meeting Radhika and coming to her house. He is a really lovely person (maybe even have some of your Mr. Darcy's qualities too - haven't read the classics for a while so I am little rusty on Jane Austen and Bronte sisters as of now). I am also looking at Vansh and Sanskar's characteristics. So far, both of seem good choices. So, Mr. KamDev may have some qualities of both even though he is golden hearted like our Dev (he will get happy ending too). He is just more possessive and jealous and less self sacrificing than Dev.

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Angie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Avi28,

I wasn't planning to give Dev any song. But, now that you have provided me the song and I did say that it was community FF, so I will incorporate that too. Actually, it is for my picnic scene (which was supposed to be scene3, but is now probably scene 4 as I have to give some backstory for one of my new characters and unlike chunnu munnu, I want my readers to know everything even before the characters do)

So, Dev would be singing this in his ok voice and would get really mad when KaamDev looks at him derisively and makes fun of him. Even Radhika would laught at KaamDev's jokes.

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N025

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

🤣 Depressed Kanha! 😆 Loved the convo between you and Kanha. Kanha drinking in CM's office ?!!😲 🤪No wonder he was hibernating for 5 years. Looking forward to your next scene.

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gardes

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: dg86
🤣 Depressed Kanha! 😆 Loved the convo between you and Kanha. Kanha drinking in CM's office ?!!😲 🤪No wonder he was hibernating for 5 years. Looking forward to your next scene.

We need to call Angake back to counsel Angie's Kaanha. Look what happened to Damodar in PR! 😆😆😆

Edited by gardes - 15 years ago

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