Sideways FF - CB II - Part 18, pg.48 - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chalhov

Angie the Abhay family part has been neatly tied up and very thing sorted out well Katyani Devi has been avenged Liked the way original Abhay only wanted Deepu and not the selfish Kanika,Vibha role as a quiet manipulator and working behind the scenes is too good and also Hanumans sifted loyalties should never underestimate the quiet types they r usually dynamites and very focused on their priorities and what they want. . looking forward for the bit for Abhay/Dev and Radhika clarifications

Chalhov, thanks. I only turned my spoof into FF because of non punishment of Katyani and Amma. Also, Dev did not punish Amma because he didn't know about the first burning, but here everything happened in front of him and numerous witnesses. So, it didn't make any sense that Dev would let go of Katyani.

Initially, I wanted Dev to send Katyani to jail, but to do it suddenly after two weeks didn't make sense. So, I decided to show that Dev was trying to bring down Katyani where it hurt most. Also, the cold blooded murder in that story did not gel at all. So, had to show punishment in the story.

As Misti said, Vibha was a blank canvass and she could be easily made a manipulator who was the smartest of them all. This would be Katyani's biggest punishment that she herself brought her successor in the house. Unlike Katyani, Vibha is the truly smart person who does not reveal her cards to anybody. She only did it to Dev because she genuinely liked him as he treated her with respect when nobody did. Also, she had to convince Dev in taking Rajjan's help who was only interested in gaining the power.

If they hadn't shown Abhay thinking of dumb things, the next part would be quite simple. But, now have to justify the stuff in Dev and Radhika's conversation.

After Dev and Radhika's vacation, I would focus on bringing out Amma's truth out to Dev.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neerjashingla

Angie you have done the good job, always wanted that story should have gone this way....When the Abhay,s track was going on it became very irritating to watch...Used to feel why he was behaving like a dumb person..He lost his memory does not mean he lost his brain...As Abhay he was shown quite intelligent person who was managing all the business deals, then why he became dumb where Radhika was concerned...Why he never tried to find out about himself, about his past life , no DNA test...How come he remembered the shalok at the time of RP ceremony....His needle was stuck to one line and that was really hilarious...This all caricatured Abhay,s character...Hope creatives would have gone your way and tied the loose ends your way show would have been still running successfully ....


Neerja, thanks. We used to have numerous discussions on this in Misti's threads about Dev as Abhay pretending or using his brains. Not sure at all why creatives wouldn't show something logical. The logic may be lame as it was in some cases in my version too, but at least show something that is palatable to audience. Tie the loose ends. I find it so unbelievable that these writers do a leap without thinking how somebody would become a part of another family. That part of the story should be decided before starting any track like that.

But, the PH and the channel take audience for granted. Why bother when TRPs are good. Anyway, am glad that you liked the logic of it. The next part would clarify everything from Dev's perspective as he owes his explanations to Radhika.
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Posted: 14 years ago
You tidied up Katyayani's story really well. Kanika ended up with nothing which she really deserves.Mousy Vibah became Dev's aide was really unexpected. She seems to me smart but poor thing didn't get to do any thing in the track. That's another character which the creatives totally wasted.
Lovely update. Can't wait for Dev and Radhika's conversation.

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