FF: No One, But You!! Part 22 updt on 15/Jan pg 36 - Page 6

beautiful april ....i read all the chapters in one go today and really loved it. These FFs are much better than the original CB story....so refreshing and hopefully not filled with lies and deceit.....keep up the great work...

Looking forward to the next chapters....what is the frequency of your update?

Thanks annie2212,

Well the first comment is that I know we are all heavily influenced by the CB story even if we are not in total agreement with it. For e.g, it is difficult to picture Amma or Mrinz as anything other than evil. And Rads to be anything other than timid. But I was hoping to see more shades of grey than black....you know what I mean. Because in real life, I believe people are mostly a mix of good and bad. Although looking at the newspapers I do agree that there is a shocking % of really "bad" people in the world. Also if Radhika can be a bit more self confident, yet be sweet and loving, it would be a refreshing change. 😊

I am not trying to influence your writing....just my thoughts. You are the creator and have absolute power over your characters...so mould them any way you seem the best.

Meanwhile, I will keep reading and post my comments about the parts.

Thank You for ur comments and suggestiosn annie.

I just love how Dev has control over Radz and Knows her inside-out. In the actual serial it seems that Radz always gets her way. I love you story. I guess that's what good about ff's, you get to create the character just the way you like it. Can't wait for the next part!

Thanks April.
I love the way you have shown Dev to be strong. He knows Rads very well.
👏

WOW...great part worth the waiting..!!!

nice.. very nice... radhs hand in dev's still when going to dinner table.. god.. goin to make ammaji and mrinalini angry... ahh... anyway.. very gd.. i love dev's character sooooooooooooo much... =).. update soon... thanks...

too good. cant wait for the next part.. please post soon! :)

hey enjoyed the part..

very nice..Dev is going to say something..that is going to be a turning point at this point... but may be he will not get an opportunity...
anyway..will find out soon enough....

love the story...