FF:Out Of Darkness *Part 29* (Pg 75) *Updated* 9/7 - Page 50

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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks dear for another nice update , the way radev interact & technique he use to calm her down r very touching .... her inner feelings about her pati & his family r very well presented by u , the manner in which your story is proceeding is really very impressive .
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome work...thx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Very nice update--So the therapy is starting to work; Dev's patience and understanding and he trying to help all very well handled.

Your Ff is so very different and like the different approach--
Psychology is so complex, and understanding human behavior is not so easy, especially the effect of abuse--and you have taken a complex issue and are doing an amazing job in bringing it out through your FF.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Angle... sorry for the late comment....really an awesome and touching update....keep it up👍🏼 include me to your pm pls...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved every line, thank u i love reading this so much
thank u
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Posted: 14 years ago
Angelskiss waiting for ur update and transfering ur thread to the new forum of CB2
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

Angelkiss it was a beautiful part !!! I really liked the way Dev is taking everything so slow to make Radhika talk and come out of her anguishness, it really takes a hell lot of patience and Dev is doing it properly. I am glad you are enjoying the slow pace.... Dev is definitely very patient with Radhika... let's see how long it will last before he losses his patience!

I know the credit should also go to Muskaan for suggesting the right therapy bt still Dev gets more credit as suggesting something is easy bt following that suggestion in true sense is very hard... I agree, although Muskaan is the one who is guiding him but still Dev is the one who is acting on the instructions...
Angelkiss I really don't mind how many updates u would take to make Radhika talk as I am really liking the way the story is being built, the way her theraphy is going.. It will really be unbelievable if u make Radhika talk instantly... thank you, that gives me big relief.... I think you will like the way things will go form here on.... the pace will still be slow and the updates will still be very detailed.....
The only thing which I am consisdered is the speed of the updates.. U write so wonderfully that it gets tough for me to wait till ur next update.. I am sorry to say bt I end up cursing u at the end of ur each update as it leaves me craving for more.😊 I am sorry... It just takes me time to write the updates... right now I just have a lot of scribbles on my journal and it takes me forever to edit the scribbles into a scene....
U really must be having a great knowledge on human pshycology as the way u write and explain it so properly... thank you, although I still have a lot to learn.....

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: billo77

Really liked the update..Especially with Radev 😳..Im glad that Dev is using a technic to calm RAdhika down with his caress on his hands thats making Radhika ticklish 😉...I really loved reading Radhika interaction with DAdima and Muskann and the rest of the family ..Its good that RAdhika likes her new family Very much ..Her father and brothers were so mean to her ..Wipping her when she wanted to talk .😲.I hope she gets rid of her fear of talking with the family and starts interacting with them with words and not with expressions ..I want dev to make her laugh and talk freely with no fear ..Im sure he will like her even more seeing more of her innocence 😉

Thank you so much for the wondeful update cant wait for the next part ..I wanted to read when dev asks RAdhika if she likes him 😳..But I guess with the new precap Dev will tell RAdhika that he likes her 😉



Radhika will soon start interacting with the family...... first it will be Dev and then Mrinalini and Muskaan and then obviously the rest of the family.... I am currently working on the scene where Radhika will speak with Mrinalini and Muskaan.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: gauranitai

oh em g!!! 😆 that was amazing! i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it wit all my ❤️!!! the radev scene wat mind blowing!!! i love how your concept is sooo innovative an it easily grabs my attention. the way u described the manner in which dev used to stimulate her senses was phenomenal!! i soooo happy that radz has accepted the family an is beginning 2 trust them. i'm eagerly awaiting your next update.........



Wow! If you loved Part 26 this much then i wonder how much more you will love part 27....😉 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

Owww..... I just love all the talks and the things that Dev did for her....Yaar, u excel..... Really, i just could visualize all the scenes.... 👏 thank you... 😳

Her Pain, her laughter, His anger and all the emotions came as a clear picture!!!!!😍 I am glad I managed to write the scenes rightly enough for you to picture the image i was trying to create with my words....

N yaar, don't make Siddy Widdy a Villain huh..... U know that if i love Ammy, i love Siddy too..... If i being a SR fan can respect AR's true love, so hope it will be reciprocal....lol 😆 Liashna! 😲 I can't believe you assumed such a thing! I loved Sid's character in DMG, I would never turn him into a villian in my ff..... I am an AR fan but I also respect and like Sid!

And Don't you ever make Sid remain alone.....hihihihi.... Find someone for him, if not Riddhima..... Isse Dhamki Samajh lo....😈 Lolz.... be patient.... I have something planned for AR and Sid.... but remember this is RaDev story... with a little of AR.... so Sid isn't really going to be there in this ff... maybe in a scene or two......

Hey, Joking huh, it's ur own Story, i have nothing to do with it, but read and comment!!!😃 Lolz.... you are welcome to give me ideas on how you want the story to proceed.... i might just use your ideas if I feel it will go with the story I have planned.... So please feel free to give me your suggestions... maybe you can even write a scene or two of AR and SR that i can add into my ff as a flashback..... 😉

And let me clear myself that am not so much in Fan Bases, i just love all of them, Be it AviNa/RaDev, JeRan/Siddhima, KaJen/KaSh/KaSu/ AR!!!😍 lolz.... I have always been a KaJen and RaDev fan but now I am obsessed with Maaneet! 😆

Hey, i can help you make the Character Sketch, in fact i can do it!!! Not a prob, u know na, Am always here to help my friends.... So no Kidding!!!!😊 are you serious? if you are then I am taking you up on your offer.... please make a character Sketch for my FF..... I would really appreciate it...

Yeah, but provided, u tell me what's there Character and Personality...lol😛 Hmmm... most of them are the same as in the show.... nothing is really different....

But one thing that i SERIOUSLY HATE, is when the Sanctity of Marriage is not respected!!!! 😡
😡Y make Marriage a joke????

That too twice.... Well, talking about DMG....😡😡 I think the CV's were bewitched by Ekta Kapoor hence the mockery of marriage!

U know What, i really expect that you don't do this..... If u intend to Separate SR after marriage, please do come up with a fresh and believable track..... I don't mind AR, u know that right? ❤️ Sigh! I was planning to keep the AR story close to DMG story.... only changing it after Armaan learns of Ridhima's marriage to Sid.... but honestly i don't exactly have a story penned down for them... because only Armaan will be seen in the ff because of Muskaan seeking his help in Radhika's therapy....

Thanks yaar for replying my Queries!!!!⭐️ I am always here to answer....

Wll Try to continue my AR FF, i have many friends waiting for that one, specially my bestest Buddy!!! She is a Great ARian!!!😃 lolz... let me know when you do post it....

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