ASOR-Abhi Sam's Organisation of Romance

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hello guys i m a new member but the same cant be said as a reader. u guys r simply fantastic writers all of u . i too want to write some fanfics which known as ASORs. this is the name my friend stuti and i have kept for the innumerable ASORs we thought and narrated to each and now is the time to share with u amazing people. R U READY FOR IT ?????????????????

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Posted: 17 years ago
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these ASORs r simply amazing and with ur support i think i can make them more and more interesting. ASORs may be short or long, funny or tragic, lovable or enviable but i am sure u guys will enjoy it. so what say guys should i start????????
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey welcome to CHA!
yh sure, dat would be gr8 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya plz continue......... i am dying to read ur asor's nd welcome to the forum .plz write soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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welcum to this forum i hope even ur a big abhi sam fan like all of us here ....... da asor's sound exciting do start writing them
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😊 ASOR 1 - Periodical Drama -this ASOR is a funny, amusing and an interesting one where Abhi Sam go back in the times of Raja Biharimal.

Aaaaaahhh!!! Abhi and Sameera were falling fast into the collosssal machine,the greatest time machine of all times. they had come following a deadly rogue Hiraka who had planned to go back in time and mess up our Indian history as well as steal the famous Rajshahi Sword of Raja Biharimal of Amber.But luck had something else in store for them and even after killing the treacherous Hiraka, Abhi and Sameera couldn't prevent themselves from falling back in time. An adventure they would truely remember! Even their most advanced guns and pistols couldn't save them from the unraveling future or rather the history.

Thud! They fell on hard ground, apparently unconcious. When they regained consciousness they looked up to find a score of soldiers surrounding them.They were pulled up on their feet and stared at fiercely.
Abhi- Where are we , Sameera ?
Sam- I don't know, Abhi.
Abhi- Why are these men dressed so and why are they staring at us so angrily??
Sam- Oh no, Abhi! I think we have fallen into the the time machine and we are in Raja Biharimal's territory.
Abhi- Oh God! How the hell are we to return?
Sam- No idea! I think we are gonna be stuck in here for a long time, at least till when we can find the way back into future.
Abhi- But that could be ages , Sameera !
Sam- I know but we have no other option.
The soldiers hearing them converse in a strange language asked them- Aap kaun hai aur kahaan se aayen hain?
Abhi- Hum aapke Rajaji se milna chahenge.
Soldier- Par tum ho kaun aur aise ajeeb vesh main kya kar rahe ho?
Abhi-Hum aapko sab kuch bataenge par pehle humko Raja Biharimal se milna hain aur unse ek zarrori baat karni hain.
Soldier-Theek hain.
They escort Abhi and Sameera to the palace where Raja Biharimal is holding a court session, thats when Abhi Sam have a grand entry into the court amidst all the gaping courtiers and sentry guards.

What an astonishing entry!


Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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So as we saw that Abhi Sameera have a grand entry into Raja Biharimal's court with all the courtiers and sentry guards wondering who are these people in this strange attire. One of the soldier narrates what had happened to Rajaji and then Rajaji asks-Aap kaun hain aur kis desh se aaye hain?
Abhi-Hum bhavishya se aaye hain aur issi desh, Bharat, ke hi log hain.Main Abhimanyu Adhikari hoon aur yeh hain Sameera Singh, meri saathi aur meri mangeter.Hum dono desh ke aur bhavishya ke vayu sena ke bahadur sipahi hain.
Rajaji- Kya! Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain? Aisa kaise ho sakta ki humare rajya mein koi bhavishya se yoon hi aa jaye bina humari ejasadh ke! Sipahi! En dono ko giraftar kar lo aur kaid mein daal do!
Sam- Dekhiye hum koi chor, dacait ya beherupiye nahin hain. Suniye, hum aap ko sab kuch samjate hain.
Sameera explains all about Hiraka and his plans. Rajaji is yet a bit doubtful but when Abhi and Sameera show and demonstrate their weapons he does believe them.
Rajaji- Yeh to bahut hi badi samasya hain jiska hal jald se jald doondna hoga. Tab tak aap humare Shahi mehman ban kar is jagah ka anand uthaiye.
Abhi and Sam are shown their "rajsi kaksh" and given "shahi bhojan" too after all its only once in a lifetime that one gets to live such a lavish life and Abhi and Sameera are enjoying it king size or shall we say "rajshahi zindagi".

After dinner with Rajaji, Abhi and Sameera are full to the brim and decide to take a stroll in the palace gardens.

To be Continued................................. 😉


Precap-A romantic stroll in the palace gardens is all Abhi Sam need but the events take an unnatural turn!!!!!
Keep giving response. I'd like to know if you guys liked my first ASOR and should I continue or not!!! 😊


Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its gud ......... plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The dinner is over and after such delicacies Abhi and Sameera are satiated and everyone retire to bed with Rajaji's promise to entour Abhi and Sameera around the palace next morning.
Abhi-(whispers)Sameera, lets go for a walk in the palace gardens.
Sam-At this time? No way, Abhi! It would be bit ackward here for us to roam around at this time of the night together. Remember we are in those times where all this prohibited!
Abhi- Its okay! No one will know and even if they see us then they know that we are from the future so its all right.
Sam- Okay, lets go!
So in the dead of the night our amazingly romantic couple set out for a little walk in the lavish palace gardens, hand in hand.They are talking about how to get back, or rather Sameera is talking and Abhi is simply staring at his wonderful fiance. A cool breeze ruffles Sameera's beautiful locks and Abhi, just so taken in by her beauty, suddenly grabs Sameera by her waist and pulls her close.
Sam-(shyly) Abhi, yeh tum kya kar rahe ho? Kisi ne dekh liya to problem ho sakti hain.
Abhi- Aaj jise dekhna hain, dekh le. Muje kisi ki parvah nahi, aur woh bhi to dekhe ki mein apni khubsurat fiance ko kitna pyaar karta hoon!
Sam- (mockingly) Achcha! Toh bata hi dijiye ki aap mujse kitna pyaar karte hain!
Abhi- Bata doon?
Sam- Haan, ab to bata hi do!
Abhi- Pakka?
Sam- Haan, pakka !
Abhi leans forward to kiss Sameera and Sameera closes her eyes. Just as Abhi is about to touch her lips, a spear is thrust between their lips.A guard is staring them with astonishing yet angry eyes.
Guard- Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain Raj Bagiche mein? Yaha to sirf Rajaji aa sakte hain.
Abhi- Hum Rajaji ke mehman hain aur unhi ki permission le kar aaye hain.
Guard- Permission?! Yeh permission kya hain?
Sam- Inka matlab hain ejasadh le kar aaye hain. Hum Rajaji se puch kar aaye hain.
Guard- Theek hain. Parantu aap yaha yeh kya kar rahe the, yaha yeh sab aap aise nahi kar sakte. Kya aap itna bhi nahi jaante? Kya aapke bhavishya mein aisa sab kuch hota hain?
Abhi- Yes! Mera matlab hain ki hume maaf kar dijiye, dobaara aise galti nahi hogi.
Sam- Hume ab chalna chahiye. Kaafi der ho chuki hain aur itni raat gaye hume aise yaha nahi rehna chahiye.
Abhi, Sameera and the guard leave and Sameera gives Abhi a flying kiss as she enters the zenana deori, the royal ladies' palaces .Abhi catches it and places it on his heart and so doing enters the khas deori, the mens' palaces.
Both of them go their rooms and wonder what would have happened had the guard not arrived. So thinking they both go into the balcony surprised (really????) to find their balconies facing each other.Abhi stares at Sameera lovingly and Sameera, feeling too shy goes back into the room and lies down on the bed thinking about Abhi all the time.Here Sameera is so and there Abhi is dying thinking about Sameera.

And we leave the romantic couple here to enjoy the night in each other's thoughts and dreams and next we shall see them in the morning accompanying Rajaji in the the tour of the palace and the first glimpse of the Rajshahi Sword of Amber...................................! 😉

Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its rlly gud i can actually imagine all dis infront of eyes continue soon............

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