ASOR-Abhi Sam's Organisation of Romance - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good Morning!!!
Its a pleasant morning in the palace of Raja Biharimal. All the royal ladies have woken up in the zenana deori and our dear Sameera too. the moment she wakes up she rushes into the balcony and a very pleasant sight meets her eyes.Abhi is waiting in the opposite balcony for Sameera and as soon as he sees her, his face lights up. he gives a flying kiss to Sameera who blushes as a bunch of red roses. Just then Sameera hears a voice calling her- Sameeraji! Sameeraji!
Sam- Mein yahan hoon.
It is Rani Parvati Devi!
Raniji- Aap savare savare yahaan? Sab kushal mangal toh hain?
Sam- Haan, mein theek hoon, bas woh..............
She blushes and Raniji looks towards the opposite balcony and smiles. Abhi sees them and turns to leave hesitantly.
Raniji- Toh aap isiliye itni subah yahaan khadi hain. Lagata hain Kunwarsa Abhimanyuji aapse bahut pyaar karte hain so suryoday se hi wahaan aapka intezaar kar rahe hain.
Sam- Ji haan. Aur main bhi unse bahut pyaar karti hoon.
Just then a daasi enters and says that Rajkumari Jodhaa is getting restless and wants to go for the royal bath.
Raniji- (to daasi) Hum aa rahe hain. Sameeraji kya aap bhi humare saath Rajsi Navak ke liye Shahi talaab main chalengi? Hum daasiyon se kahe denge ki aap ke liye kapdon ka intezaam kare.
Sam-Zaroor Raniji! Main aap ke saath jaana bahut pasand karoongi.
The daasi escorts Raniji and Sameera to the Royal pool where all the Royal family members go for bath. The pool is divided into two parts- one for the ladies and one for the men which is separated by a thin veil of satin cloth. Sameera is given a bathrobe which is almost like a long tube top till the knees.She accompanies all the other ladies to the pool and on the other side even the men are entering the pool for a bath.
Sameera has a lot of fun in the pool, playing with the beautiful 10 year old princess Jodha, splashing water about and chatting with the Queens.
Unnoticed by Sameera, Abhi is observing her closely and admiring her from the men's pool, loving and caressing her with his eyes. As if feeling Abhi's gaze, Sameera looks behind and sees Abhi looking at her, they have a long eye-locking session which is disrupted by Princess Jodhaa who splashes water on Sameera breaking her gaze from Abhi.
Abhi and Sameera regain their composure and leave the pool with the others, and after dressing they have to meet Rajaji. Sameera is looking dead gorgeous in a red embroidered lehnga and a matching choli with a long dupatta. She is looks just like a bride and Abhi in his traditional embroidered kurta and dhoti looks simply dashing.

And coming up next is their meeting and the tour of the royal palace........................


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry guys! I was supposed to be posting it right now but I'm running out of time right now. But I promise I'll post it very soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
its rlly cool wow ur imagination is way too gud i must say
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Posted: 17 years ago
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welcome 2 IF-cha
i m payal

ur ff is very nice 👏 👏
i loved it
pls cont fast 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its cool really very very nice and welcome to cha


Love works in miracles every day: such as weakening the strong, and stretching the weak; making fools of the wise, and wise men of fools; favoring the passions, destroying reason, and in a word, turning everything topsy-turvy.


Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys I m back! I m gonna write the ASOR in 5 min
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So last when we saw Abhi and Sameera, they were looking drop dead gorgeous. Now's the time for them to see each other and drool.
Just as Abhi enters the passage leading to the main court, he sees Sameera approaching, oooh.. in that red lehenga and dupatta, Abhi's mind is showing him images of his beautiful bride. Just as Sameera enters the passage, she stops dead in her tracks. Abhi is looking so dashing that any woman in Raja Biharimal's territory would just die to marry him. They both look at each other and are totally lost for words. Abhi opens his mouth to praise Sameera, but nothing comes out and here Sameera is blushing like anything 😳 , she too so lost for words. Both of them take a step towards each other and are so close that their each breath is united. Abhi leans forward and kisses Sameera on the forehead thinking at that very moment only if he could replace his kiss with a pinch of sindoor, right here, right now!

They hear footsteps and see Raniji arriving.
Raniji- Toh aap dono tayar ho gaye?
Abhi&Sam- Ji haan, hum bilkul tayar hain.
Raniji- Toh Kunwarsa Abhimanyuji, kaisi lagi aapko aapki Sameera is Rajsi vastra mein?
Abhi- (looking at Sameera) Beautiful!!!!
Raniji- Kya kaha aapne, Kunwarsa?
Abhi- Mera matlab hain atti sundar. Sameera bahut hi khubhsurat lag rahi hain!
Raniji- Ab chailye, hume Raj Durbar mein upasthith hona hain, aur Sameeraji aapko humari tarah goonghat rakhna hoga, yahi humara kanoon hain. Waise Kunwarsa ko thodi pareshani toh hogi parantu yahi yahan ka kannon hain.
Sam- Aisi koi baat nahi hain. Chaliye!
Raniji escorts them to the Raj Durbar, where all the ministers, noblemen, and Rajaji are seated. Abhi is asked to take a special seat and Sameera has to sit behind a thin veil with the other royal ladies.
Rajaji- Hume aasha hain ki aapki yahan theek tarike se khatirdari ho rahi hain.
Abhi- Ji haan Rajaji. Hume yahan koi pareshani nahi hain (silently looking at the guard who had caught them the previous night).
Rajaji- Hum humare chachere bhai Kishorimal ki pratiksha kar rahe hain. Jaise hi veh padharenge hum aapko mahal ki yatra karvaenge.
Suddenly there is a shrill voice heard emanating from Abhi. Abhi realises that his cellphone is ringing and surprisingly picks it up, avoiding the stern stare of all the people present there. A few guards advance on him but stop on Rajaji's orders.
Abhi- Hello!
Eesha- Hi Abhi! Where are you and Sameera and what are you guys doing? Kahi akele akle hi honeymoon to nahi mana rahe na, shaadi se pehle?
Abhi- (laughing) Shut up, Eesha! Hum bahut badi musibat main hain aur tumhe mazak suj raha hain.
Eesha- What happened Abhi? Tum aur Sameera woh Hiraka ke mission ke baad se mile hi nahi, to humne socha ki tum kahi gumne gaye hoge par tum jab 2 din tak nahi aaye toh we all got tensed.
Abhi- After killing Hiraka, hum galti se uss time machine mein gir gaye aur tabse hum Raja Biharimal ke Rajya mein hain. Waise toh yeh bhi nahi pata ki cell phone kaise chal raha hain yahan par, but we are in grave trouble now because we don't know how to get back!
Eesha- Abhi, yeh to really bahut bada problem hain par tum chinta mat karo, mein, Farhan aur Tanvi uss time machine vaali jagah par pahunch kar kuch karte hain. You don't worry, bas Sameera ka aur apna khayal rakhna, baaki hum sambhal lenge. Bye!
Abhi- Bye!
Abhi ends the call and at that very moment Kishorimal enters. Kishorimal- the villain of our ASOR!!!!!!

That is it for now, guys but I promise that I'll be back soon with the long awaited tour of the palace and the "noble" actions of our dear Kishorimal...........!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really anice update thank u for it
update it soon


Mohabbat wo nahi hoti jo "JAAN" deti hai, Mohabbat wo nahi hoti jo "MUSKAAN" deti hai, Mohabbat wo hoti jo pani me gira "AANSU" bhi pehchaan leti hai.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello! I m back with the next segment of ASOR!!!!!
Hope you enjoy it!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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We were at the entry of Kishorimal, the only son of Raja Biharimal's uncle(chacha). He is a sly fellow and is always devising plans to usurp the the throne of Amber. As he enters there are many uncomfortable and agitated looks but he walks in with sheer pride on his face. Although he bows before Rajaji, he has daggers in his heart. In this ASOR we will see him as a character of loose scruples and no respect for fellow beings.Anyways, Rajaji introduces Kishorimal to Abhi and they leave the court for a tour of the beautiful palace of Amber.
Rajaji, Abhi, Sameera, Raniji and Kishorimal are walking through the passage leading to the King's Palace.
Raniji- Sameeraji, ab aap chahe to apna goonghat utha sakti hain, yahaan sirf rajgharane ke hi log hain.
Sameera lifts her goonghat and Abhi is just prevented from a love attack by Rajaji.
Rajaji- Sameeraji, yeh humare chachere bhai Kishorimal hain aur Kishorimal, yeh wahi atithi hain jinke baare mein maine aapko bataya tha.
Just as our dear Sameera lifts her goonghat, Kishorimal starts eyeing her with intent eyes and clearly there is a trace of corruption behind the graceful smile, which apparently nobody is able to guess, except someone........!
Then, they proceed towards the entire Khas deori and then towards the Zenana deori ,and the palace gardens and fields. All of the palace is a luxurious dream house-beautiful intricate gilded walls and screens, the rich texture and colour of the palace walls and rooms and the bright coloured gold embroidered tapestry, clearly evinced the fact that Amber was a rich kingdom and the Royal palaces were just the place one always desires to be in. The royal Gardens which were restricted for the king and his family only were lavish and pleasant, with all the different types and colours of flowers, shrubs and bushes. Abhi and Sameera were simply stunned with the beauty and grandeur of the Amber Palaces.
After the Royal tour of the palace they all proceeded inside the dining hall for lunch. In all these affairs, one cannot think that anyone noticed Kishorimal vying Sameera with scruplesless eyes.
For lunch they had a grand affair of dal papdi, thith kumra, soham kurma, kaali dal, ghatte, pithode, sohan halwa and last but not the least- MIRCHI!!!!
Yes, mirchi, the very thing Sameera had an allergy for! But how would she explain this to Rajaji and Raniji? They might take offense as disrespect for their hospitality and things may go topsy turvy. But not to worry, when our dear Abhi is here to save Sameera from any situation as this.
Abhi- Raniji, agar main aur Sameera ek hi thaali se bhojan kare to aapko koi aapatti to nahi hain na?
Raniji- (smiling at Rajaji) Nahi, nahi! Hume kya aapatti ho sakti hain bhala? Aap bina koi rosh ke ek thali mein bhojan kijiye!
Here Sameera is blushing with joy and love, and there that Kishorimal is burning with anger and jealousy. So our dearest couple are having their food and Abhi no doubtedly eats all the mirchi and Sameera is left hassle-free. After lunch they all retire to bed for some rest. Just as Sameera is leaving for the Zenana deori Abhi holds her back in the dining hall and pulls her behind the tapestry.
Abhi- Sameera, I Love You!
Sam- I Love You too, Abhi!
Abhi- I don't want anything to happen to you because I don't want to loose you! That is why listen to me very carefully!
Sam- Kya hua Abhi? Tumhe itni tension kyu ho rahi hain? Kis baat ke liye?
Abhi- Sameera, muje nahi lagta ki is Kishorimal ke iraade nek hain!
Sam- Kyu, Abhi? Kya hua? Usne tumse kuch kaha kya, par maine to nahi dekha?
Abhi- Nahi, Sameera usne mujse kuch kaha to nahi par main observe kar raha tha ki woh kis tarah se tumhe gur gur kar dekh raha tha aur use dekh kar muje uske iraade nek nahi lagte.
Sam- Par aisa kaise ho sakta hain, Abhi? I mean, woh Rajaji ka chachera bhai hain, woh kyu aisa sochega?
Abhi- Woh sab muje pata hain, par phir bhi, just for my sake, tum please usse jyaada baat mat karna aur uske saath jyaada waqt mat rehna, please just for my sake.
Sam- Yes, of course Abhi! Tumhare liye to kuch bhi! (places her hand on his cheek) Tumse badh kar mere liye aur koi cheez nahi hai is duniya mein (kisses him on his cheek).
Sam- Ab hume chalna chahiye!
Abhi- (kisses her forehead) Haan chalo!
They both leave, unaware of the fact that at that precise moment Kishorimal was making a plan to assault Sameera. We leave the lovebirds and the villain here and in the next segment we shall see more of their romance and how Kishorimal tried to assault Sameera. Till then Goodbye......................................! 😊

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