ASOR-Abhi Sam's Organisation of Romance - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello guys! I m back with the ASOR I promised!
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Hello guys! I m back with the ASOR I promised! Coming up in a short while till then please bear with me!!!
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Periodical Drama
So now guys I m back with the ASOR!!!!!!
Last time we saw Abhi and Sam going for horse riding with Kishorimal, who had arranged for Sameera's horse to be given snuff which could, in excess quantities, make a horse very violent. And then, with adept ease, Sameera and Abhi had mounted their horses which surprised Kishorimal. Now to move on with our ASOR!
As Sameera mounts her horse, Jabaaz, it gives a violent jerk but Sameera, who is an ace horse rider knows how well to tackle it, unnoticing anything unusual about it. Here Sameera may be ignoring it but Abhi has too sharp eyes for anything and this does not go unnoticed by him and for him nothing matters but Sameera's well-being.
Abhi- Kya hua, Sameera? Any problem?
Sam- Nahi Abhi, koi problem nahi hain! Bas woh kuch……shayad pehli baar is par savari kar rahi hoon na isiliye aise react kar raha hain! Tum tension mat lo, main bilkul theek hoon!
Abhi- Theek hain! Then shall we leave now?
KL- Chaliye, hum prasthan karte hain.
Abhi does not like the look in Kishorimal's eyes and it strikes him as strange that the behavior of the horse did not surprise Kishorimal. Yet he does not speak anything but decides to keep a careful watch on Sameera for her safety and a more strict watch on Kishorimal for his intentions.
Meanwhile they leave for horse riding into the woods where there is a beautiful scene. Green and auburn trees, colourful flowers and chirping birds returning to their nests after their day is over. Amidst this Abhi, Sameera and Kishorimal are riding. We can't say its really dark since its just sunset, but slowly as they are riding deeper into the woods the darkness starts engulfing the forest.
Even though its time to return, Kishorimal insists that they ride a bit more; Kishorimal tries to hide his intentions through his sweet words but Abhi starts suspecting something fishy and rides close to Sameera. This no doubtedly raises a problem for Kishorimal, who evidently spots nothing thinking that this gesture of Abhi maybe as a fiance. But in his mind he is still formalising his plot, wondering how long would it take before Sameera's horse would start reacting violently!
As if reading his thoughts, Jabaaz suddenly gives a violent jump standing on its hind legs, Sameera is shocked and Abhi too is aghast but not surprised as he expected and suspected that something of this sort would definitely happen.
Abhi- Sameera….! Sameera…..ruko main kuch karta hoon!
KL- Sameeraji, shant rahiye Abhimanyuji aapke liye kuch kar rahe hain!
Kishorimal does try to console Sameera but his intentions underneath are nothing of the sort. Meanwhile Abhi is thinking what to do, he realises that horses react in such a way only if they are pricked in the foot or are smelled snuff powder.
Abhi- (thinking) Of course the only solution- to make the horse smell neem leaves!
He quickly goes searching for the neem leaves but its hard to distinguish the leaves in the darkness so it takes him quite a lot of time searching for them but he finally finds them near a tree. But, by the time Abhi is back with the neem leaves, the scene has completely changed and it leaves him surprised.
Kishorimal is helping Sameera dismount a calm horse, holding her in his arms! Seeing this Abhi is shocked at how the horse had become so calm and how Kishorimal was helping Sameera.
Abhi- Sameera, tum theek to ho na?
Sam- Haan Abhi, main bilkul theek hoon. Woh to achcha tha ki Kishorimalji ke pas neem ke leaves the aur unhone Jabaaz ko smell karva diye warna main to-
Abhi- Aisa mat kaho Sameera! Tumhe kuch nahin hota, main tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga! (Hugs Sameera) Shukriya Kishorimalji, aapne Sameera ki jaan bacha kar muj par bahut bada ehsaan kiya hain.
Abhi, is no doubt, polite with Kishorimal, but deep inside him his suspision is growing stronger by the moment, and even when they return to the palace Abhi is still thinking about it! As soon as they dismount the horses, servants come forward and take the horses back to the stable. Kishorimal informs them that dinner would be served shortly and takes their leave. As soon as he leaves Abhi pulls Sameera close and-
Abhi- Sameera, tum theek to ho na? Tumhe kahin chot to nahin lagi na?
Sam- Nahin Abhi! I m absolutely fine par tum kyun itne pareshan dikh rahe ho? Kya baat hain?
Abhi- Sameera, muje tumse ek bahut hi important baat karni hain, par yahaan nahin! Chalo tumhare kamre mein chalte hain.
Sam- Theek hain, Abhi, chalo.
They both go to Sameera's room and by the permission of Raniji, they are left alone to talk.
Abhi- Sameera, muje tumse ek bahut hi zaroori baat karni hain.
Sam- Bolo Abhi, kya baat hain? Tum kab se itne pareshan dikh rahe ho, akhir baat kya hain?
Abhi- Sameera, jo main keh raha hoon use dhyaan se suno! Muje is Kishorimal par shak hain, woh muje pehle hi din se kuch theek nahin laga. Woh jis tarah se tumhe dekh raha tha, baatein kar raha tha, usse muje uske iraade nek nahi lage. Aur aaj bhi muje us par bahut shak ho raha tha ki usi ne woh ghode ke saath kuch kiya tha, shaayad usi ne us ghode ko snuff powder smell karvaya tha aur usi ne yeh sab plan karke rakha tha. Maine tab hi use notice kiya tha jab tumhara ghoda, Jabaaz, pehli baar violent hua tha, uske chehre pe jo expressions the, use dekh kar koi bhi kehta ki yeh sab usi ne karvaya hain.
Sam- Par Abhi, woh aisa kyun karega, akhir hum uske bhi to mehman hain, aur phir jab jungle mein woh haadsa hua tab usne meri help bhi ki thi-
Abhi- Toh phir Sameera, tum muje is baat ka explanation do ki jab main neem ke patte doondhene ja raha tha kya woh tab muje nahin bata sakta tha ki uske paas patte hain? Sameera, yeh sab woh jaan bujkar kar raha hain.
Sam- Par woh aisa kyun karega?
Abhi- Sameera, muje lagta hain ki…..ki woh…… woh…woh tumhara……..tumhara faayda uthana chahta hain!
Sam- WHAT?
Abhi- Sameera, muje aise lagta hain, use dekh kar koi bhi yakin nahin karega par yahi sach hain, maine uski aakhon mein dekha hain, woh jis tarah se tumhe dekh raha tha…………..Sameera, please mere liye, tum please zara sambhal kar raho kyunki agar tumhe kuch bhi hoga na Sameera, to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahin kar paaonga. Aur main Rajaji aur Raniji se request karunga ki woh hume ek kamre mein rehne dein.
Sam- Itna pyaar karte ho mujse?
Abhi- Haan Sameera! (pulls her close in an embrace)
Sam- Sach Abhi, main bahut hi lucky hoon ki tum meri zindagi mein ho aur-
Abhi- Lucky to main hoon Sameera ki muje tum jaisi patni milne waali hain! Tumhare bina main ji nahin sakta Sameera aur yeh koi filmy dialogue nahin, sach hain. Sameera, I LOVE YOU!
Sam- Abhi , I LOVE YOU, too!
Abhi kisses Sameera on her forehead and both of them hug each other. And we leave them here, enlocked in each other's embrace while I'll return with some more romance, spice and fun. Hope all you guys enjoyed this part of the ASOR with the promise of more of the Periodical Drama, of course with Abhi and Sam!!!!!!
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Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt work karishma its simply awesome .........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So now guys, I m back with the ASOR!!! Coming up in a short while!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So last time we had left Abhi and Sameera in each other's arms sharing a truly delightful and romantic moment! Now we see ahead as a daasi comes to call them for dinner and interrupts them, quite annoying.

Daasi- Maaf kijiyega, Kunwarsa, par aapko Rajaji aur Raniji ne bhojan ke liye apne kaksh main amantrit kiya hain!
Abhi- Ji theek hain, hum abhi pahoonchte hain!
Sam- Chalo Abhi, ab hume chalna chahiye, they must be waiting for us.
Both of them go to the private dining hall led by the daasi. The private dining hall is reserved for the Rajaji, Raniji and their guests. Nobody could dine there without the invitation or prior permission of Rajaji or Raniji.
Abhi & Sam- Khambaganisa, Rajaji! Khambaganisa, Raniji!
Rajaji- Aasan grahan kijiye Kunwarsa!
Raniji- Bethiye, Sameeraji.
Rajaji is sitting at the head of the low table, Raniji to his left, Abhi to his right, and Sameera next to Raniji. Next to Sameera is seated Rajkumari Jodhaa (RJ).
RJ- Maa, hume pitaaji ke sang bethna hain.
Rajaji- Kyun nahin, Rajkumari? Aiye humare paas bethiye!
Therefore Raniji and Rajkumari Jodhaa exchange their places.
Just as they are about to start their dinner, Kishorimal arrives, much to annoy Rajaji who had not invited him there to dine with him and their guests.

KL- Maaf kijiyega, Rajaji, hum bina ijaasadh ke yahan aa gaye parantu humse raha na gaya isiliye hum aa gaye. Rajaji nods his head in approval but Raniji knows that he is annoyed.
During dinner, there is much talk going on between Rajaji and Abhi, and Sameera and Rajkumari Jodhaa, while Kishorimal is listening to every word said.
Then, he suddenly raises the topic of state affairs with Rajaji and Abhi not knowing much about it silences himself. Instead he gets another idea, he slowly carries out that idea. Very cleverly he stretches his legs which is quite difficult under the low table, and seeks Sameera's feet. Exactly right, he is trying to play footsie. But, with no due luck, instead of reaching Sameera's feet he reaches Rajkumari Jodhaa's feet, who at first realises nothing. Soon after, Abhi is giving Sameera all seducing looks, which Sameera finds very puzzling. Meanwhile, Rajkumari Jodhaa is feeling itchy at her feet since Abhi is, unknowingly, playing footsie with the 10 year old Princess!
RJ- Maa, hume paero main kuch ajeeb sa ho raha hain!
This diverts Abhi's attention towards Rajkumari Jodhaa and he also realises that Sameera is not responding at all. Suddenly the truth dawns upon him and he looks under the table, what he sees makes him contract his feet back and he continues with his dinner. Sameera is still confused with the way Abhi is behaving and decides that she will ask him later about it.
Meanwhile dinner comes to an end and Abhi requests Rajaji that he needs to talk with him and Raniji privately. Everyone leaves and only Rajaji, Raniji, Abhi and Sameera are left in the room.
Abhi- Rajaji, main chahta hoon ki aap muje aur Sameera ko ek kamre main rehne de.
Rajaji- Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain, Kunwarsa? Aisa nahin ho sakta, logo ko pata chalega to kya kahenge? Kya aap bhool rahe hain ki yeh aapki sadi nahin hain aur yahan ke kuch kayde hote hain?
Abhi- Main kuch nahin bhool raha hoon aur humari sadi main aisa nahin hota par meri is echcha ka ek kaaran hain. Main aap se kaise kahoon.....aapke.....!
Rajaji- Humare kya?
Abhi- Yeh baat main kaise kahoon aapko? Aapke.....aapke raj gharane ka koi vyakti Sameera par nazar rakhe hain aur muje useke iraade nek nahi lagte!
Rajaji- Mere gharane se? Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain, aap mere parivar par shak kar rahe hain?
Abhi- Ji nahin, main bas yahin keh raha hoon ki muje darr hain ki Sameera ki.....Sameera ka.....koi fayda na utha le kyunki maine aaj us insaan ki aakhon main woh junoon dekha hain jisse muje lagta hain ki woh kuch na kuch zaroor karenge! Kripa karke aap muje please Sameera ke saath ek kamre main rehne ki ijaasadh de, aur chinta mat kijiye hum aapke usulon ko nahi todenge akhir humari bhi shaadi nahin hui hain aur hum bhi aisa kuch nahin karenge jisse aapki shaan ko thess pahoonche! Please, hume ek saath rehne dijiye, please!

So for now we will leave Abhi and Sameera here for the time being but I will be back soon with Rajaji's decision. What do you think, he will allow Abhi and Sameera to stay together or not? 😊


Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So guys this is the next bit of the ASOR and I want a bit of response from you guys regarding Rajaji's decision!
So what according to you will happen? Will Rajaji give Abhi and Sameera permission to stay in one room or will they again have to spend the night away from each other?
😊 Please post your answers here!!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update please continue it soon

regarding staying together i don't think rajaji give permission 'coz they r in the past
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Posted: 17 years ago
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she should give d permission

pls cont fast.........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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he shuld give them the permission

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