The Flight of Love - FF Part-5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Guys,

Im a very big fan of FFs.i even write one in another forum.I usually visit the forum to read the updates and also the FFs.CHA is one of my most favourite show and im a bit dissappointed that there are not many FFs here.So i had this thought of starting my FF.Im posting the first part here.I will decide to continue or not based on your feedback.So plz do leave ur comments whether good or bad.😊

Also do tell me what do u think of the title.if u want me to change it please suggest some good ones as im not able to think of any.

PART 1- Page 1
PART 2-Page 2
PART 3-Page 3
PART 4-Page 5
PART 5-Page 8
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART-1


So,the hawks team set out on Mission Zodiac and are successful in finding Rashi.Before abhi cud reach Haider shaikh ,Samrat reaches him first.He takes his
father out from there to their hideout.Abhi is furious that their mission has failed partially.Samrat was sent to the base bcoz he fakes an injury during the encounter with Haider shaik.

Sameera who was not a part of this mission was getting better but was feeling restless.She cud not contact any of the hawks right now but came to know that Samrat has returned to the base due to some injury.She gets a bit worried for her best frnd and decides to pay him a surprise visit.There She happens to listen to the conversation between Jahaan shaik and his team.Sameera is shocked to the core.she falls on the floor numb.She gets flashes of all the moments spent with Samrat,her best friend.Her best Friend who was the traitor,who was trying to frame her all the time ! why? why did you do this to me Samrat ? Tears started flowing out of her beautiful eyes.

Samrat was eager to meet his father.He was not able to talk to him properly while rescuing him.His father didnt know that he was here in the base.it would be a nice surprise to his father if he could go and meet him now. Smiling to himself he set out locking his room. Sameera immediately sprung into action.though she was wounded by samrat's actions she wud never let her heart come before the country.She followed him to their camp taking precautions to go unnoticed.what happened there was even beyond the wildest imaginations of Samrat.

Haider shaikh turned out to be an international arms dealer in the coverup of a jehadi.He promoted the hatred only to improve and expand his business further.He was happily chatting to his confidante about how he had imbibed all the wrong notions in young jahaan and about how the young lad had eagerly taken up the work of destroying those who loved and cared for him deeply.The earth beneath was shaking.let it break and engulf me in it Samrat thought.Why? why me? why did this have to happen to me? with tears obscuring his vision he carefully made his exit lest someone would notice his presence over there.

Once outside on the road,samrat felt an emptiness,a weariness to walk.He was about to collapse when two hands came to his rescue.

"Samrat !! are you ok ??"

"Sameera? what are you doing here?"

"Ill tell you that..but first we need to go from here"

Samrat was shocked.Did Sameera know that he was jahaan? No,she probably doesnt,otherwise she wud have already shot him dead.He knew how much Sameera loved her country and wouldnt think twice even if a family member stood in front of her.

Time passed as a blur and Samrat shut his eyes tightly not able to face Sameera. His guilt was now heavily weighing down on him and he hated himself for all that he did.He was sitting on his bed clutching the edges with his fingers so tightly that it hurt.He opened his eyes as he felt a comforting hand on his shoulder.sameera was holding a glass of water in her hand.Samrat immediately looked away and stood up.

"Sameera..Plzz go away from here..plzz"

"samrat..whats wrong.."

"please Sameera..i need sometime for my self..please leave me alone"

"No..i wont..and why should i ? You are my best Friend and i will not leave you when you need me the most"

"Sameera..tumhe kuch nahi patha..whatever i have done to you..I dont deserve to be ur frnd..i dont deserve to be anybody's frnd"

"Mujhe patha hain.." Sameera replied calmly.

Samrat was shoked to the core.did Sameera know everything?

"i know that you are Jahaan and you helped haider escape from abhi and i also know that you made me look like a traitor"

Samrat sat on the bed with a thud unable to understand why sameera was so calm if she knew who he was.

"Mujhe ye bhi patha hain ki tumhaare saath kya hua hain.. even i was angry with you but after i heard your father's words,i know that whatever you have been doing is not your fault."

"He is not my father.."Samrat shouted hatred evident from his everyword.

"Samrat..Main jaanthi hoon ki tumne bahuth galthiyaa kiya hain..jinhe main shaayad kabhi maaf nahi kar sakthi.."

She took out a revolver she was carrying with her and placed it in front of samrat.sameera intended to shoot Samrat when she came to know that he was a traitor but then she followed him in the hope of getting more information.but what she heard at the camp changed her decision.Samrat was the victim of cruel antics and aspirations of his father.what was his fault in all this? for all the years she knew him she knew he was good at heart and would do anything for the poeple he loved.may be thats the reason he followed his father so blindly. But still he is the best in his field of expertise and can prove to be the best officer if he could be shown the right path.

Taking a deep breath,Sameera turned to face the window and was thinking about how could she make Samrat feel better.

"You have let us down"

Abhi hung his head down.the team Hawks were facing the defense Ministry board who were glaring at them.

"Mr.Abhimanyu adhikari..you have failed us and broke the trust that we have placed on you..do u know how serious this is? do you know what can happen if Haider is moving outside freely like that?"

Abhi tried to answer but was cut short and some papers were given to him which read that he was no longer the CO of the team.

"But Sir.." abhi tried to protest.

"We will talk to Veer Pratap Singh and request him to come out of retirement for us.Once he agrees he will be the CO of Hawks.You all may leave now" they said in a tone of finality.


All the other hawks left leaving Abhi alone in the room.

"Damn!!" he hit his fist on the wall hard.Raashi was safe but haider has escaped.He was a part of team hawks but no longer the CO.His country and his career were at stake.Anger was rising within him.If only he could find haider and his son,he promised himself that he wud kill them with his own hands.

"Samrat..Noooo.." Sameera shouted as she turned around to face samrat.

Samrat was holding her gun to his forehead.

"Sorry sameera..dont try to make feel me feel less guilty.. im not trustworthy and should not be forgiven..I do not have any right to Live"

"Samrat..no...Please listen to me.." Sameera panicked.

"Im sorry Sameera..jo kuch bhi maine tumhare saath kiya, is desh ke saath kiya woh maafi ke laayak nahin hain... Thanx for being there for me Sameera"

"Im Sorry" He murmured seeing Sameera who froze in her tracks.

Samrat pulled the trigger.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome too good....wonderful..no words to praise.....
....dont kill samrat in your FF... 😭 i love him tooooooooooooooooo much....
thankoo....do continue...you are superb......
it is more interesting than the real one.....👏
Edited by JINKTAK - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#4
UR title is awesome.....don't change it 👏👏
Edited by JINKTAK - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#5
Nice ff but you made my abhi sad 😭 and me too 😭 as u said that he was terminated from co post. 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really a nice one keep going 👏
👏

Rabb se aapki khushi mangte hain,
duaon mein aapki hansi mangte hain.
Sochte hain kya mange aapse? Chalo,
aapse aapki umar bhar ki dosti mangte hain.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!!
but ........
what happens next? 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
sorry friends actually i was writting on some other post but unfortunately i write it on this page
really really sorry 😳
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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