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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
In Part 31, Girish says...In our locality...i am really srry it turned out to be something else....its a typing mistake and not any swear word.
Also another grave mistake by me....I have typed Farhan instead of Samrat tuning into the microphone....please pardon my mistakes ...........Thank You!

PART 32:
Samrat now makes it a point to listen to the recordings on and off to know exactly where Sameera and Abhi are headed.

Girish after lunch....after Tilak sleeps off , comes to meet Sameera and abhi in their room. They will be joined by Tanvi too. Girish then tells them that tomorrow he will take them to the island where the criminal is being kept.
He then warns them that the plave is very deserted and that nobody wsa seen in that place for almost 5 years. Girish then tells tham that his duty is to leave them there....and that he will do no more than just that.
They have to fight him and he is not to be pulled in to the loop....and he admits to them that he is very scared of that criminal!

The hawks agree.Sameera then asks him why he acted so strangely in front on Tilak....But the old man Girish refuses to answer the question n lets the matter rest there and walsk out of the room.

Samrat on the other hand hears everything and makes his own planto reach that island first. He calls his men and his uncle and gets a boat ready for himself. When he talks on the phone , Isha hears him and immediately tells Farhan. Both of them decide that they will also accompny Samrat to keep an eye on him.

Samrat comes out of his room after the call and is suddenly stopped by Farhan ND Isha. They ask him:"Where are you going?"
Samrat answers:"Abhi just called me....he needs my help and I am going to go to the island he wanted."
Isha nd Farhan look at each other....in disbelief...how could Abhi do such a thing of calling Samrat...They realise that Samrat is lying.
Farhan:"Theek hain toh phir hum bhi tumhare saath chalenge."
Samrat:"Nahi...Abhi chahtha hain ki tum donon yaha hi rahe."
Isha:"Aisa hain toh phir main Abhi ko call karke dekhti hoon."
Samrat gets really worried now and finally agrees to their coming with him.

The three of them pack their bags and farhan calls up Abhi and informs him of Samrats' lie. Abhi listens and tells him to keep any eye on him 24/7 and keep telling him of Samart's doings.

Sameera and Tanvi are told about the change in the happenings when Sameera sks Abhi how could Samrat know of their findings....they think for sometime and Tilak comes out to give Sameera something he found fallen from her bag when he was claening the room.
Sameera takes it and shows both abhi and Tanvi the microphone.
The three of them are speechless.....Samrat has never changed and he will do evrything possible to save his father.

Posting the next part too.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
thank u for the update

Teri mohabat me khud ko mehfuz mante hai,Hum duniya me tumhe sabse aziz mante hain, Teri mohabat k saye me zinda hain, Hum toh tumhe khuda ka tabiz mante hai.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 33:
The next early morning rises and Girish is already on his way to reach the island. Sameera nd Abhi freshen up and pack their bags and come outside their room when Tilak serves them hot coffeee with bread and butter.
Sameera goes and wakes up Tanvi.....poor girl would be really tired after yesterdays' happenings.
The three of them menatlly prepare themselves with their plan.....also how they will face Samrat and his father.
Abhi takes out the weapons he has and checks their condition while Sameera nd Tanvi fill bullets into the guns. Each one of them is truly prepared but apprehensive about various things.

On the other hand, Isha and farhan and Samrat would have taken a boat to reach the island...it takes them opprox 3 hours to reach the island.
Samrat keeps checking his watch nad his cell ....awaiting a call from his uncle who was also going to reach there on the island.
Isha nd Farhan do their best to prepare themselves from Samrat's wrath....they would have already packed their weapons and loaded their guns....but both seem very withdrawn.....they never knew whether Samrat was actually taking them to the right place or whether Hyder Shiekh really existed.....Abhi had given Isha nd Farhan the update on their findings but it all seemed bizarre!

Sameera and Abhi and Tanvi reach the island and get down with a dtermined look on their faces....Girish takes the boat away. Abhi stops him and says that if this place turns out to be the wrong one then how will we go back home?
Girish then anchors the boat a few yards away from the island and asks Abhi to wave if he thinks it is the wrong place , otherwise he will take the boat away.

Sameera nd Tanvi proceed to know the place better when they hear a distant noise of a motor boat....Farhan and isha had arrived.
All the hawks now get down and meet on the island.
Abhi catches hold of SAmrat and shakes him hard....gives a good shouting asking him why he did all that stuff of acting as if he had changed.
Samrat doesnot answer....but waits patiently thinking in his mind when his uncle and his men will come and safeguard his father.

All the other hawks move in the island whilst Abhi and Samrat reamin together. Abhi has such a bad look of hatred on his face that Samrat unable to see it turns away.
Isha locates the passage to go inside to the cave. The 4 hawks take their guns and torches and move inside carefully.

they reach the end of the cave when they see a lock on a door made of wood....Sameera opens it and they see a stairway leading upwards...they climb and reach a prison.
Inside the prison, Hyder Shiekh will be present. The hawks see him as a fragile old human being with hardly any strenght and he will be lying on the ground as if some old body is.
Farhan tries to open the lock odf the prison when, Hyder immediately jumps up from his sleep.
He looks at them and then shows them a knife in his hand....and says something in urdu.
Then Sameera moves forward and says to him:" Hum aapko kuch nahi karenge...bas aapko yaha se bahaar nikhalne ke liye aaye hain."
Hyder then looks at her and sits down quietly thinking ...that this is an ideal way to escape from here forever.

But things dont happen as he anticipated...for the hawkls help him get up while Farhan and sameera carry him out of the cave.
Once he is bought outside , The hawks bind him to chains and attach them to a big boulder on the island.
Then Sameera calls Abhi and Abhi and samrat come running to see waht happened.

When Samrat sees his abbajaan, he is over come with emotions and falls at his feet...crying.
Hyder looks at the boy at his feet and when he sees his face , he is most shocked to see his own son.
Samrat tries to go and hug his abbajaan when abhia nd Farhan pull him away from there and also bind him with the propes to another rock close by.

Just as these things are done , Samrat's uncle comes in a huge ferry with almost 25 men.
When the hawks see thsi and hear Samart telling his abbajaan about His uncle......they are in afor a new twist in the story..................

Samrat's uncle reaches the island and shoots twice into the sky and points his gun at Sameera. Abhi moves in front of her to be able to save her when all the other 25 men come and surround them.
All of them point their guns at the Hawks who are forced to put their hands up.
Samrat's uncle frees Hyder and Samart and all the three of them hug...in reunion happiness.

Sorry but this is where I stop now.....right at the climax...will come back and surely continue.
But till then do read it and post your replies!!!

Thank you all for reading it......
Luv
Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
#64

thanks for updating very much

Love is like a golden chain that links our hearts together and if you ever break that chain youll break my heart 4ever!

With ❤️

Nidha

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
thanks 4 updating

i know i have 2 wait 4 15 days 2 read ur next update n that 2 whn it is going so interesting
but its ok

happy journey
will definately miss both ur updates

i want 2 say that u write very nice
ur story is very different n very positive 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
thanx alot btw i had a doubt in this fan fic abhi nd sam r not married as yet or are dey??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: akshayshenoy

thanx alot btw i had a doubt in this fan fic abhi nd sam r not married as yet or are dey??

they r not married but they show that they r husband and wife in the mission.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
plz update asap
cant wait
let it b an happy endin 😃 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Whoa Aranya, what an amazing story, yaar!! Tooooooooooooooooooooooo Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!
Plz continue soon!!
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Edited by luv_kdr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
Hi guys.......I am back 😊
Will post the next part tomorrow......just returned home now!!!

And once again thanks a ton for all those lovely replies......I do hope you all actually enjoyed reading it!!! 😆
Thankx
Luv
Aranya

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