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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
PART 34
Sameera, Isha , Abhi and Tanvi, Farhan look at each other with...worried looks....this should never have happened.
The girls stand in the front and the boys at the back.
Sameera points to Abhi who realises that Sameera si carrying 2 guns on either sides of her pant. Keeping both his hands up, Abhi has to find a way to take them.
Abhi looks at Farhan and makes him aware of the two guns.
While Abhia nd farhan are trying to find a way to pull the guns from Sameera, Isha goes bersek.

Isha keeps looking at Samrat...and finally gives out a cry. She pulls her hand down and goes to Samrat. There she pulls his shirt and starts sobbing into his shoulder. Samrat and his uncle and Hyder see this in an amazement.
This was enough for Farhan and Abhi to take the guns.
Samrat then asks Isha what the problem was....she replies:" Samrat ....kitne dinon tak main tumse yeh baat chipa sakti hoon? I have to say it....I really love you Samrat."

There would be the sound of two gasps....one coming from obvi Farhan and the other one from Samrat. Samrat looks up at Isha and then with disgust catches hold of her hair and pulls her....:" Kya khel khelna chahithi hoon tum? Mujhe bewakoof samjha yeh kya? Aap sab milke mera kuch anhi bigaad sakte."

In the meantime, Sameera would have taken out her mobile and called the base ordering for two Sukhio's 30 to be sent. Abhi and Tanvi keep their guns ready.
Farhan would be shocked to hear what Isha said......he loved her so much nd she loved this traitor?

Will cont soon........ 😃
Precap: The final battle.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

please update it soon



Ever heard the most beautiful music in the world? It's ur own heartbeat.It's an assurance tht u'll survive even when the whole world deserts u!

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
PART 35:
Farhan looks really unhappy hearing that....but then he makes up his mind...he cant love a person who is already in love with another person esp a terrorist. His expressions change from sadness to determination and now he is ready to fight for his country's sake if that requires him to give his life!
Similarly Sameera nd Abhi and Tanvi keep their guns ready.They all know in the hearts of hearts that it is very difficult to win this battle....only a miracle can turn the tables.....but that each one of them will fight to defend their country!

Sameera starts of the spark good enough for all Samrat's men to turn their heads towards them. Sameera takes aim and shoots directly at Samnrat's uncle's heart. He is spot on dead. This angers Samrat...he throws Isha from his shirt and hurls her to one side. Samrat takes his gun and aims directly at Sameera.
Sameera ducks and runs.....Samrat has eyes for no one except her....he calls her a coward and runs behind her.

This is a very good distraction for the hawks....it is very easy to finish Samrat's men now. Tanvi shoots at a few people and then hurries over to isha who would have hurt her head when Samrat throws her. She was bleeding and has lost her consciousness.
Tanvi places her upright and tries to dress her wound.
Farhan in the mean time on Abhi's orders captures Hyder and ties a rope and holds him captive and keeps on a watch.

Abhi finally does the thing that his heart would have been aching to do......go and find Sameera.Abhi would not have been able to follow her as finishing Samrat's men was more important. Abhi runs around the island shouting out Sameera's name in the context of finding her.

Abhi really need not have worried.....Sameera did a very wise thing that most of us would not have thought of.....she runs into the cave in which Hyder would have been held captive for so many years. Samrat follows her. She slowly leads him up the stairs and finally into the dungeon. Samrat just follows her.
Sameera finally acts as if she has got into the prison and immediately runs out. The cave would be full of darkness and it takes Samrat some time to get used to it. He sees the silhoutte of sameera going inside the prison and follows her.
He then goes inside and searches for her saying...." Sameera aab tum mujhse bach nahi sakthi ho."

Sameera immediately closes the prison doora nd locks it.
Samrat turns around realising that he has been fooled.
He catches hold of the doora nd starst pulling it ....he screams and roars.....all his anger and hatred \coming out of him.....Sameera killed his uncle, she locked him up nd by now tae Hawks would have surely captured his abbajaan too!

Sameera then walks out of the cave and runs directly into Abhi's arms. She tells him what she would have done nad they hug each other. Abhi salutes her raising his right hand to his forehead...in acknowledgement of the great thing and thinking she did.

Will cont soon...............do keep sending in your replies.

PRECAP: What about the bomb?

Luv
😛 Aranya


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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
PART 36:
The 2 Sukhoi's arrive right in time...along with 2 officers each. Abhi and sameera stay back whilst, FArhan and Tanvi take Isha and Hyder along with them ang go back to the base.
They promise to send the authorities to arrest Samrat.
Sameera nd Abhi are now all alone....and on an island very far off from the coast.
Sameera feels hungry and asks Abhi to get her something. Abhi searches all around the island but in vain,....finding nothing edible.
He returns back to Sameera saying that he found nothing.
Sameera now is extremely humgry and she decides that there is only one thing to control her hunger.....water....the sea water.
Deciding so , she takes a step to going there when Abhi hands her a big bar of Temptation.Sameera screeches and snatches the bar and starts munching it.

After having three bites she realises that Abhi also must be humgry and offers him a bite. Abhi accepts and they chomp the whole bar in just 5 mins!
Sameera then sits down and rests her head on Abhi's shoulder. Abhi places his hand over her.
Abhi then says:" Sameera everything is over in this mission.", happily.....sounding relieved.
Sameera looks up at him and then slowly says....:" No Abhi everything is not over.....we still have to find the bomb."

Abhi suddenly looks at her and realises the truth....yes they still have to locate the bomb. It is an even bigger task than having to find Hyder.They will have no one's help on this mission....its only the five of them as Samrat is no longer relaible.
The seriousness of the situation hits Abhi as if he has been hit by some thunderstorm. He immediately gets and pulls Sameera to her feet and wait for the arrest team to come.
They need to know everything they can before their mission to find the bomb starts. Abhi also calls Farhan and asks him to interrogate Hyder all he can about the bomb.
Very soon the team comes and takes Samrat captive. The look that Samrat gives sameera and abhi is full of deep disgust.

Will cont soon............do keep sending in your replies

Aranya

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Posted: 17 years ago
#75

really a nice one thank u for the update



Mere dil to tere pyar me itna pagal hai,
Jo sab ko chodke tere paas rehta hai,
Yaha tak ke muje uski zarurat hai,
Phirbhi mere paas ake usne dhadkan chodiya hai…

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
Thanks for all your messages.....just one thing do read my new FF...called Tum Se Hi......and tell me how it is!

Thankx
aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
nice work arayna but plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 37:
The hawks reach back to the base.....admit Isha in the hospital and then report to Veer sir at the base.
Veer sir applauds all of them and praises each one of them for what they have done.
Abhi then tells him about the bomb.....the very word brings back terror in everyone's mind.
Farhan tells the hawks all that he could get out of Hyder....which is nothing much at all....because Hyder is now very old and is finding it very hard to even speak...he craves for only one thing: his son and destruction of the whole country!

Veer sir looks at the hawks' tired afces and decides to give them a week off before their mission to find the bomb. All of them sound relieved and salute him and walk off.....when Sameera gets a call on her cell by the hospital people. There is am emergency and for that , they must rush.
All of them rush to the hospital.....thinking something is seriously wrong with Isha but to find sameera's mom admitted! Sameera gets a shock of her life....her mother admitted but how?

Isha comes out of the ward looking fine but witha patch covering her forehead.
Sameera's mom would have been admitted having fallen over a stool. She would have been trying to clean the room when she would have tripped over the stool ..lost her balance and fractured her leg.
Sameera rubs into the room to see her mother really very ill.....her leg would have awollen so much...it was hard to imagine her even walking!

The doctor comes in and tells Sameera that her mother has to have bedrest for the next 2 months at least.
Sameera agrees and decides that she will have to cancel her trip to saty with her mom.
All the other hawks ask Sameera also to come but she refuses. Veer soon arrives when he would have heard of Sapna's fall...
He hears all of them persuading Sameera to come too...who would be saying a constant no....Veer then tells Sameera...:" Main hoon na...main Sapna ka khayal rakh saktha hoon...tum fikar math karo!"

Sameera looks at him and for the first time she feels so happy to call him her dad....her dad...those words mean so much....she without thinking hugs Veer while all the hawks see them and start clapping.
Sameera says:" Thanks Papa."

Will cont soon......srry for the boring part....but the next parts will be a little fun and romance! 😳

PRECAP: The 1 week trip!

Aranya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
pls pls update soon iam waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 38:
The hawks decide to go to resort for the week. They all pack their bags and head for their 1 week trip...without Samrat....who was locked up in jail...praying for welfare of his abbajaan!
Abhi and Farhan take turns in driving the Scorpio to the resort.
Very soon,by tea time , they all reach the resort.

The hawks are shown their way into their rooms....the girls take one while the boys take another. THen they all meeta outside...in the lounge for snacks. Abhi then asks all of them to switch off their cell phones...saying this was a holiday and no one takes calls on a holiday! When Sameera decides to intervene to tell Abhi that if there was an emergency , he justs tells her that he will keep his phone on.

The whole evening goes in chatting....each of them shares something with the other about his\ her life.
Isha teela them about being brought by a lone father...without a mother and how her life was....she was always followed by boys!!!
Tanvi tells them about her family...one such family where they are 3 brothers and 3 sisters...and how her income is something that makes her whole family run.

Farhan tells them about how he is a compueter freak and hpow he spends his time doing nothing but sitting and playing games on the PC!
Abhi shres his experiences about how he was a prisoner o war and how he escaped those conditions to come back to India.
When Sameera's turns comes, she tells them about the life that she spent with her family....her town life and her love for children!
Everybody have dinner and soon go off to sleep.

The next day dawns early....they all meet in the girls room and order for bed tea. The server comes with a pot full of milk and the oanother full of tea water...along with a container of sugar.
Sameera makes a cup of tea and hands it over to Abhi...who takes it with a smile and then takes a sip and says that he feels really nice as the tea is full of love!!!
Sameera blushes hearing this and the others start teasing Sameera nd Abhi!

Will cont soon....more romance btw the two of them!!!

Aranya

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