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Posted: 17 years ago
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sona awsum..omg i;m hatin ash..shez such a vamp...yaar make saksham jealous take he also realizes his love 4 her...
yaar ekta ke creatives ko tumse classes leni chahiye...accha yeh to batao saksh vampire hai...kab bane ga...i cnt w8...omg...is it gonna b lyk twilight saga..i've eben bangin my head 4 soooo long.....man i;m impacient..luv ur story cont soon...and i luv how u color code it...mujeh to bohut tym lagta...lol..i tried tht whn i started but it never worked 4 me....lol....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanx alot yarr tish😳.n ur ff is still da best ⭐️i luv where ur takin it😍.u con. there n i'll con. here.😉
n abt saksh np u'll cum 2 know abt it very soon don't worry😉😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: psjiggy

thanx alot yarr tish😳.n ur ff is still da best ⭐️i luv where ur takin it😍.u con. there n i'll con. here.😉

n abt saksh np u'll cum 2 know abt it very soon don't worry😉😳

thnx hun ur alwayz soo sweet....accha....yaar jaldi kar...i really m gettin restless👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part~11

shila pulls p2 n goes 2 saksh who is wid ash

shila-saksham!

saksh-arre tum log yaha

p2-hume tumse kuch bath karni hai

ash-actually we're a bit busy

shila(showin her 😡 eyes)-sry u'll have 2 wait.....cum on saksham

she takes his hand but he pulls it away

saksh-shila ruko tum logo ko ha kya gaya hai?

p2-saksh its very important

ash-hey wait isse saksh sirf main bula sakthi hun ok

p2-just shut up

saksh-p2...

but thy pull him n go 2 a corner

saksh gets angry n pulls his hand away 4m p2

saksh-just leave me.....wht is wrong wid u guys

shila-hume tumhe ash ke bare main kuch batana hai

p2-han saksham woh ladki.....

saksh-w8,w8 tum log yehi kaho gi nah ke woh mere liye sahi ladki nahi hai.....she's spoilt,uska kisi aur ke sath affai hai......rite?

p2-tumhe kaise pata hai?

saksh-ash ne mujhe bataya hai.

shila n p2 r 😲 n 😕

saksh-ussne mujhe bataya keh tum aisa hi kuch bologe...i just don't understand tum log ko usse prob. kya hai?

shila-prob.!excuse me hume usse koi prob. nahi hai.we're just tryin 2 help u

saksh-4 wht?akhir tum log hote kaun ho?

p2-hum tumhare dost hai

saksh-just shut up tum jaise dost dushman se bhi bathar ho

p2 gets really hurt

shila-thek hai hum tumhare dost nahi hai kekin insaniyath ke nathe yeh hamara farz hai.

saksham turns his head n is abt 2 walk but p2 stops him

p2-ruko saksham hamare pas is bath ka sabhuth hai

saksham turns back

saksham-wht?!

p2-han.....ek minute

she leaves n gets a guy n brings him 2 saksh

p2-yeh hai ashish ash ka X-BF.ashish isse kaho ke ash kisthara ki ladki hai

ashish-she's da biggest playgirl

saksh is really 😲

shila(😊)-tumhe patha hai ashish saksh ko usse pyar ho gaya hai

ashish-boss!marna hai kya usse bhul ke bhi milne meth.woh tumhara dil tod degi.mein tho bach gaya thanx 2 p2 n her gang.ussne mujhe sahi tym par batha diya aur dekho aaj main apni GF ke sath bahuth khush hun.plz main keh raha hun get away 4m her.

saksh-tum log mjhe usse ke khilaf badkha rahai ho na......aur tum(pointin 2wards ashish)amne ap ko usska BF kehthe ho nah ek min yehi roko

he goes n gets ash

p2-yeh yaha

saksh-han any prob.?

p2 turns her head

saksh-ash meet him...ashish.....tum tho isse janthi hi hongi

ash is tensed

ash-han

saksh gets a lil 😲(i know this prt is full of shocks😆)

ash-hum ek hi class main hai

saksh get relazed n p2 gets tensed

ashish-hey ash its me ashish

ash-ya ashish i remember u tum mere class main ho

saksh-yeh log keh rahai the ki yeh tumhara X-BF hai
ash-wht?!saksh tum janthe ho nah ke main sirf tumse pyar karti hun
ashish-wow!kithne jhut.boss main keh raha hun she's just playin wid u
ash(crocodile-tears)-yeh log sab jhut bol rahe hai...u know nah i love u!
saksh goes 2 p2

saksh-so ms.p2 bajaj kar liya jo tumhe karna tha ab plz hume der ho rahi hai.v have 2 go

thy r abt 2 leave but shila stops thm

shila-saksham tum hume apna dost tho nahi manthe ho lekin is dunya main ek insan jo tumhe dost se bhi jyada manthi hai

p2 cums 2 reality n goes 2 shila
p2-tu yeh kya kar rahi hai
shila-main usse sab sach batha dungi ke tu usse pyar....
p2- tu usse kuch nahi kahegi
shila-lekin p2
p2-tujhe meri kasam
saksham goes 2 thm
saksham-tumhe kuch kehna tha?tum kya bologi.woh kehthe hai nah JHUT BOLE KAWA KATE.lagtha hai tuhe bhi wohi hua hai.n p2 here u go
he takes off da frnd-ship band she gave him.

p2-saksham yeh

saksh-isse main raktha aggar tum meri dost hothi lekin sayad......

he gives it 2 her n leaves.

n p2 runs away 😭
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after sumtym ash goes 2 p2 who is sittin in da class 😭

ash-p2!

p2 gets up

p2(😭)-tum kyun uske zindagi barbad karne par tulihui ho?

ash(😈)-bcuz he's an easy guy.uske jaise bali-ka-bakra kahi nahi mile ga mujhe.

p2-ash woh tumse bahut pyar kartahai plz uska dil math thodo.

ash-yeh main tumhe taklif pauncane ke liye kar rahi hun.

p2-wht?!

ash-tumne jo mere sath kiya hai sara collage mujhe apna dushman manthi hai

p2-tho tum saksh.....

ash-main janthi hun p2 ke tum usse bahuth pyar karthi ho.tho aggar usse dard hotha hai tho tumhe bhi taklef ho gi nah

p2-tum jaise ladki is dunya main ayi kaisi?

ash-tumhe isse kya....aur han main tumse abhi bhi kerahi hun jithna tum uske pass jaogi uthna hi usse dard hoga.so stay away 4m him.

n she goes away

p2(2 her self)-main kya karu i'll talk 2 mrs.kamina(da same teacher who helped wid da party) se puch thi hun

n she leaves

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so guys how's it i made it a bit long this tym😃

w8in 4 comments😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
sab margaye kya?😕
Edited by psjiggy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
SHONA jee aisaey nahin kehtaey!!!
Nywy wooooooooooooooooow this is jsut fantastic... HATS off 2 u babay gal!!! gr8 job keep it up welldone!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
sry*holdin my ears*
n thank u sooo much jaan u finally read it n don't worry da next prt is cumin up
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
My sweet heart its ok!!! N no need of thanks indeed thanks 2 u 4 writing such a fantastic FF m egarly waitin 4 the next prt!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49

how sweet n mehak here's da next prt

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar sona wheers the next aprt...omg saksh is bein such a jerk...i h8 ash......
hey mehak..long tym yaar...

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