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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey guys welcum 2 my very first ff on da very lovable jodi of

This is da story of a vampire who falls in luv wid this very beautiful girl n as thy true luv is eternal....well so is their luv story... n 4 a very special friend of mine i have sumthin special in stored...so watch out sid.So sit back n relax...no w8 u can't relax cuz i'll b keepin suspenses.Now i can finally say this DA FUN HASEN'T EVEN STRTED😉

Now let me introduce u 2 da characters;

P2:A very naughty,silly n fun lovin girl.she belongs 2 a small village chandni chauk, is da eldest 7 sisters n 1 bro, is very loved 1 by her teachers n knows how 2 get her own way.n is also lookin 4 her mister perfect but doesn't go 4 any dum guy

SAKSHAM:A very playful,naughty n handsome guy.he is a very big flirt.....but girls never seem 2 have a problem wid tht as thy 2 luv him lyk crazy.its lyk woh kahi bhi jata hai uska jadu cha jata hai but is also very sweet n respects ladies alot*i know its not lyk him na....lolz*.

Mr.Garewal:he is saksham's father his wife passed away whn saksh was lil....he is a very big business man n a very lovin father n never neglects his son.

Nihal:He's a spoilt bratt since he's da smallest but will do anything 4 his family especially his bros.He's called da KOOl DUDE out off all his frnds but whn his bros r around their called ARYNS*as thy always get things right*.

Varrdan:He is da eldest 4 his bros n is da most innocent 1 4m all n da cutest,girls luv him but he is a nerd.

Tara,Dara,Kritika.Gargi,Jwala n kanishtha:Their p2's sisters sum of their frnds think tht thy r p2's shadow.....but whn their widout p2 their impossible.

so guys who was da intro will strt da next part later😳

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pinal

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Posted: 17 years ago

ooooo 1st 1 2 comment🥳 sonalijii🤗 mwah 4 startin da osam ff vid a very uniqye concept😳 luved ur intro gal👏 wow mann al da characterz r here😳 sunny n nihak in freaky avatar, kewl😎 n p2 chulbuli sii like 4eva😛😳 n aww derz vardhaan 2😛😆 aakhir entertainment ke liye bandar toh chahiye na😉😆😆 lolz waitin 4 da 1st part dear😳

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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

thanx yarr u n sid always know how 2 encourage a person😃

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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part~1

Its da 1st day of collage after da holidays.

In P2's house,its a full haungama....

kritika-diii

tara-big p..

their walkin 2wards each other but not lookin where their going n bump eachother n fall down.....

n strt fightin..

tara-deke ke nahi chal sakthi😡

kritika-tum dekhe nahi sakthi......n strt their hatha-pai😆

thn a very beautiful face cums out n stops da fight

tara-p2 di ye dekho na kritika......

p2-arre tum loge unt jithne bade ho gaye ho fir bhi bacho ke thara ladthe ho..

kritika-di agar app nahi aate tho mein...

p2-kya mein

n hits her on da head

p2-abi tum loge jakar tayar ho jao varna collage keliye fir se late ho gaynge,n u know i don't lyk gettin late 4 anythin.

tara n kritika(2gether)-yes di.

n thy go 2 their room, n da mean while big b sees all this n goes 2 p2 n holds her ears n p2 showin a hurtin face

p2-ou...ou big p chodo na plz

big p-p22..tuje kya meri jaga lene hai kya...dadi ma bangi hai. n leaves her ear

p2-big p kya aap bhi na...app ki jaga koi nahi le saktha after all ur unique😆

big p is hittin p2 whn sneha cums

sneha-mama kyun marr rahi o meri bechari beti ko?

big p-acha...kal tak khud isse marr rahi thi...aur ab ye bechari ho gayi

p2(tryin 2 slip out)-mama ab main chalti hun

big p-rukh tu...

but p2 runs away.

big p-ye ladki bhi na...

sneha-apki parchai hai(laughs)

big p- hans le beta..tu bhi aisi hi thi

sneha-isliye meri beti hai

big p-sneha tu....

but she also runs away

big p-kash main bhi is umar mein bagh sakthi. n goes 2 her room

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In collage

Every1 is very happy 2 meet each other after such a long tym.There r many new faces there n out of thm a very new face is there...2 feet enter da collage he's just walkin his way n by mistake his leg hits a stone n trips n falls on a girl.

girl-bathameez...dekh ke nahi chal sakthe

n now da eves r shown-sry...who actually...

girl(interrupts)-wow pehle tho dakha dete ho aur upar se zaban bhi ladate ho

now da mouth-excuse me madam(wid attitude)...meri koi galati nahi hai in fact apko kisne kaha tha beech main kade hone keliye.n thy strt fightin,in da mean while p2 cums to settle da topic.

p2-excuse me whts da problem......arre shila tu hamesha jagda kyun karthi hai.

shila-yarr p2 dekh na ye ladka...

now da whole face is shown n gues who it is its our saksh

saksham-p2(laughs)wht kind of name is tht?????😆

p2-excuse me how dare u?😡

saksh-baby i dare many things

p2-tum....

shila-dekha meine tum se kaha tha na

saksh-look i'm gettin late,u ladies can sit da whole day n talk abt my sexiness but i gotta go....so(gives shila a hand shake n p2 a kiss on da cheek)bye.n goes

n thy look at him really angrily

p2-isse tho mein dekh lungi.n thy both flik their noses 2gether

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so guys did u lyk it😉

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pinal

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Posted: 17 years ago

luved da part gal👏👏 ishh sakshu iz so kewl☺️ so p2 n sakshu ke bich nok-jhok shuru😛 luved da way u've worked on diff characterz vid der diff style👏😊 keep it up gal, even ur 1st part made me addicted 2 it😳😳 continue soon😊

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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part~2

k its tym 4 da 1st class,hindi class,every1 is enterin da class, p2 n her frnds enter

p2- yeh ladka yaha?

shila-hey p2 kyun na hum isse......

p2-ur rite gud idea

thy r walkin 2wards their seats which is behind saksh.whn their walkin saksh stands up

saksh-tum loge yaha?......lagtha hai ki tum mere bina reh hi nahi sakte.

p2-excuse me! tum is collage akele nahi ho....even v study here.aur tum aapni yeh stupid se khayalath aapne pas hi rakna,samje mr.

n thy go 2 their seats

saksham(2 himself)-attitude ha.....i lyk nah i luv it.n gives himself a nice laugh

now da teacher enters(k guys do u remember da hindi teacher in da movie main hoon na,how she gets all smoochi wid srk well....sumthin lyk tht happens 2 our saksh)

her eyes fall on saksh

teacher-arre wha(n goes to saksh he looks at her all confused n all da girls r laughin)bada sona munda hai.....puttar twade naam ki hai(sry don't know tht much punjabi)

saksh(hesitatin)-ji saksham...saksham garewal

teacher-bada sona naam hai,my self ms.chaloo ms ha par tusi menu chalo bula sakthe ho.n taps him on da sholder

saksham(confused)-jii

n da whole class strts laughin includin da girls.p2 taps him on da shoulder

p2-so mr.i think i'm so sexy NOT! apki bolthi bad kyun ho gayi

n he gets angry while thy all r laughin.after da class ends every1 is leavin,p2 n her frnds r abt 2 leave whn saksh stops thm

p2(angry)-excuse me plz let us go.

saksh-wow tuhe plz bolna bhi aata hai n plz excuse me math kaho i have a very nice name saksham garewal,n i'm not askin much just say a simple sry thn i'll let u go

shila-wht did v do tht v have 2 tell u sry?

saksh-may b u didn't but she did(pointing 2wards p2).

p2(confused)-kya

saksh-yes! tumne mera dil churaya hai

p2(mad)-hey stay wid in ur limits

saksh-luv has no limits

p2-tum..

1 of p2's frnds-hey p2 kyun tum isske mun lagrahi ho

saksh-hey look here...i don't wanna fight....k if u wanna thn i think it shoudl b a fair n square fight

another girl-rite,so wht do u have in mind

saksh-hummmmm..how abt a basketball match,1 against 5, main bechara against tum 5 chulbuliyan.....whts say,DEAL! n put his hand 4ward

p2-DEAL! thy shake hands

saksh-tumhare hath....their so soft

p2 gets angry n pulls har hand away all da girls r laughin includin saksham n da girls leave,p2 is abt 2 laeve whn she stops near da door n looks at saksh.saksh looks at her n their eyes get locked but thn,shila,actin lyk a thorn in a bloomin bush calls p2 n she leaves.n saksh stands there hittin his head n laughin.

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baqi next tym guys😉,hope u lyk it 😊

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yulZ

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Posted: 17 years ago

sonaaaaaaaaaaaaa

gawd its realli superb👏👏 let me comment rgt frm the begining😃😆.. well abt the intro.. mann i loved the way u put the avi of p2 n shaks😳😳aww p2 looks so gorgeous

n shaks so hawt 😍.. n vardann the innocent one😕😆 chalo aise bhi we can see an innocent monkey😃 kukukakaka😆😆...

n wow shaks is too kewl yarr😳😳 n haila first meeting mein hee kiss😲 awwwwwwwwwwwww

seriously mann sona u r making me reach the 12th cloud

😆....

now back to the part 1 and 2..- totalli mindblowing👏 👏 👏 👏 yarrr tussi punjabi bhi bohot perfect lekhtehoooo 😉😆(mine is worse tehn urs😆) haha the teacher is damm funny😆😆.. haila i loved the shaks this dialogue-sry kyunki tumne mera dil churaliya.....

☺️

... n yarr p2 toh jaha bhi prob. ko solve karne pohoch jatehai😕😆😆mann she is a superwoman😳😆...

ok then cuttie is already addicted so m the 2nd one😃😳.. plz do continue ^^ loved ti alot ^^..woooo basketball match is gonna be kool😉 🥳

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pinal

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Posted: 17 years ago

saksham...☺️ attitude ha, i like it.. nah, i luv it😳 mann readin ur ff m luvin sakshu more n more, wo toh use bhi pata chal gaya coz 2 dinse m nt quarrelin vid him nymore😛😆 lolz apart 4m joke gud part👏👏 saksham toh hai hi flirty😉 bt p2 bhi kum nahi, she leave no chance 4 him den talkin😛😆😆 naughty gal😳😆😆 n wow BB match😛😉 lukin 4ward 4 it gal😳😳😳

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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

thanx guys really appreciate it😉

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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Part~3

k guys i'm bac so here's da next prt😉

its da day of da BB match all da girls r at da BB court.thy look at eachother wid grt attitude

saksh(2 himself)get ready my p2 baby.n laughs

p2(2 herself)-hans le bachoo jithna hasna hai....ab ke tho rona hi pade ga

sum guy says-yarr ashish lagtha hai ki yeh coll. mein naya hai

his frnd(ashish)-kyun

da guy-tu gantha hai na ki yeh ladkiya nahi ek puri army ki fogue hai

ashish- arre ha yarr...yeh tho gaya

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k da match has strtd da girls r in da lead but w8 whts this saksh takes da ball in gets a score(i know i'm doin lyk a commenteter rite)n he gets 3 straight scores n now p2 n saksh r dribblin da ball but whts this p2's leg trips but saksh holds n anjili gets da ball while saksh is still there starin at p2 n she 2 is not movin.n p2 cums bac 2 her senses

p2-plz chodo muje

saksh-ok

n leaves her n she falls down

p2-ouch

saksh-u told me 2 leave u.n goes bac 2 da game,v r in da last 3 secs of da game,anjili is goin 2 get da shot but saksh cums in between n missis her shot n wins da match.every1 is clappin.saksh's eyes fall on p2 who still on da ground n findin it diff 2 get up.he goes 2 her.

saksh(worried)-r u ok?

p2-ya i guess so

she is tryin 2 get up but can't.thn saksh can't c this n picks her up

p2-wht r u doin?plz leave me

saksh-tum phir se girna chathi ho........n this is 4m a height so....

n takes her 2 da benches while all her frnds r just starin at thm

shila-OMG!guys do u think tht....

1 of da girls-no way p2 is so not lyk tht

shila-lekin

all da girls-shut up shila

shila-kk

saksh puts her on da benches

saksh-tum thekh tho ho?

p2-kya tumhe lagtha hai ke main theke ho

saksh-ok ok (quietly)ms.khados

p2-kya kaha tumne?

saksh-kuch nahi

saksham slightly twists her ankle

p2-ouch

saksh-sry

n now all da girls cum

1 of thm-p2 tum thek tho ho na

p2-ya kinda

saksh-wht do u mean kinda....tumhari ankle puri thara se sprain ho gayi hai

shila-wht?OMG! agarr big p ko pata chal gaya tho

saksh-whose this bigp?

p2 she's my granny

saksh-oh

shila-ok mr. ab tum ga sakthe ho,gud game,v'll take it 4m here

p2-shila,tum ithne mean kyun ho rahi ho

shila-p2 tum....

p2-saksham thank u 4 ur help n it was a gud game

saksh-wow u know my name n koi bath nahi.......so does this mean tht v can b frnds

n he puts his hand 4ward

p2-sure

n thy shake hands.da girls r really shocked in cin this

saksh-i think tht u shld go 2 a doctor

p2-i'll b f9

saksh-no ur cumin.n thy again strt fightin again....saksham picks her up n takes her 2 his bike n da girls r just standin there n starin.

Thy reach his bike

p2-saksham kya kar rahe ho tum?

saksh-tumhe doctor ke pas leke ja raha hun

p2-but i'm f9

saksh-UFF!tum kithna behes karthi ho

p2-saksham!

saksh-ok ok,lets go

p2-isme!?

saksh-no madam main appko ek bade se lemo main lekar gaunga.

p2-ok

saksh-hello!i'm not tht rich k.....hum isime jare hai.

p2-lekin muje bike par betna nahi aatha

saksh-main bethaoo?

p2-no but...

but b4 sayin anythin he puts her on da bike,n thy ride off.

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so guys lykd it😕?sry😳 there r more of narration thn dialogues😳😆

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