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-IPK-Forever-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#311

Originally posted by: Sadh123
How about whispers and first meets? Rather than having it in the present continuous?

Yes I'm ok with this 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#312

Oh no such childhood stuffs.. I wish.. :( but I have none.. :P

Okay then Aru only should take the final call :)

Oh my comments were bordering rubbish.. too many useless guess

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-IPK-Forever-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: Sadh123
Oh no such childhood stuffs.. I wish.. :( but I have none.. :P
Okay then Aru only should take the final call :)

Oh my comments were bordering rubbish.. too many useless guess

Hahah... no problem... What if there's no childhood stuff you can get some now :P

No but you did mention every possible course the story could take 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#314

Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-

Hahah... no problem... What if there's no childhood stuff you can get some now :P

No but you did mention every possible course the story could take 😆

Hehe lol how? :O

Lol was any at least close to your story angle??

Hi btw darlings :* are you posting it today?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#315

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Hehe lol how? :O

Lol was any at least close to your story angle??

Hi btw darlings :* are you posting it today?

Aree don't tell me you don't have a crush 😆

Of course... Like I said you mentioned every possible course the story could take! Now I have to think very hard and come up with a twist to surprise you :P

We are not keeping a few updates ready then?

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Arunima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#316

Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-
Aru did you read the update??

Yeah I have read the update and I have a few things to suggest.
1) I agree with Sadh that a line or a question should be added at the end about their future meets.
2) Whispers and First Meets. I like it.
3) "We can watch dada and didi playing from here"
In bengali we call elder brother as dada but in Hindi Dada normally means paternal grandfather. It is better we change it into bhaiya.
4) Arnav is 3rd child of the Raizadas na? I completely love the way you have joined his parents' name to form his name but it is generally done for the first child na? (Lol I am sounding a bit too logical😆 just my personal view. it struck me.)
5) Can we post it after I have written my part? Since I have to update my story too and my routine has become hectic. So if you post the chappy now readers will forget by the time i complete the next chapter. In that way we will have a chapter ready at hand and Sadh will also get time to write her part.
There isn't much suspense in this storyAfter you reply to these, I have few more questions😆

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-IPK-Forever-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#317

I happened to be watching the movie taare zameen par while writing and I guess I just used the word dada for brother... Lol we can change that

Your logical question is right... I did think of it while I wrote it that how would they do it only for the third child ... But then I was thinking of giving some back story ... They couldn't name Anjali that... Aakash was suggested by their parents and they couldn't deny so they did it for the third child or something like that... There's no suspense at all... We can change that too if needed?

Hey I'm completely ok with it... I really think we can keep a few updates ready before posting

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Posted: 10 years ago

#318

Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-
I happened to be watching the movie taare zameen par while writing and I guess I just used the word dada for brother... Lol we can change that

Your logical question is right... I did think of it while I wrote it that how would they do it only for the third child ... But then I was thinking of giving some back story ... They couldn't name Anjali that... Aakash was suggested by their parents and they couldn't deny so they did it for the third child or something like that... There's no suspense at all... We can change that too if needed?

Hey I'm completely ok with it... I really think we can keep a few updates ready before posting

Okay I am fine with the back story 😃 Add that please.
Where is Sadh?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#319

Am okay with whatever you guys say ;) well this logic doesn't strike me at all.. since in our families no.such thing as joining names and all..so whatever you guys decide on that..

So we will.name.the chapter this way.. maybe we can have three updates ready and then post.. till.my part let us keep it ready!

Dada part and all...am.clueless!

P.S: was commenting on BTS! Became too long..that's why vanished..

And pavi..my senior fellow was a crush for few months.. that's all! No other..na romba nalla and innocent ponnu madam!