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Guys I slept again :D a very bad habit. I sleep without my kbowledge before wishing anyone. :D though you haven't talked anything about story.😆

Originally posted by: barsha_dash

Guys I slept again :D a very bad habit. I sleep without my kbowledge before wishing anyone. :D though you haven't talked anything about story.😆

Haha no problem... Then you wake up in the morning and search for your mobile and find it from under you right??

Further discussion about the story will need the first chapter I guess... I finished it btw... Around 1300 words... I hope it's good 😕

Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-

Haha no problem... Then you wake up in the morning and search for your mobile and find it from under you right??

Further discussion about the story will need the first chapter I guess... I finished it btw... Around 1300 words... I hope it's good 😕

Yeah right.😆

I will PM it to both of you now.. You can read and tell me how it is or if any changes are needed :/

Pavi I am just reading it.. Will be back soon with my comments :D

Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-

I will PM it to both of you now.. You can read and tell me how it is or if any changes are needed :/

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Okay I don't want any changes.. but I want an addition.. like the closure part.. a line or two regarding their future meet or something close to that which conveys that they might meet.. or probably a question..

Other than that this was absolute master stroke :D I loved it.. kaash I had some hero like this :(

Ok that can be done :-)

Sure this is ok?

What a (friend) from childhood?

Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-

Ok that can be done :-)

Sure this is ok?

What a (friend) from childhood?

How about whispers and first meets? Rather than having it in the present continuous?

Originally posted by: Sadh123

Yeah absolutely okay for me.. add the title we decided and the banner ofc..

Who wants friend from childhood? Lover chahiye.. sweetheart :D

Am now commenting on entangled :D finally..

Ok now will wait for Aru :D
Yeah all that of course!

Haha... So that's your fantasy huh? Lol or you have a childhood crush which you wish would turn that way :P

I read your comment .. Loved it :)