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Posted: 11 years ago
Toh didu ne siggies banaliya?
Vaise kya hum US time monday send karsakte hain?
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Posted: 11 years ago
IST hai re..
Isliye meko aaj finalise karne hai..
Hindi..we cant use Sana di's..768 words..
And lyrics hata kar bhi it will be more than 500 :(

To english kaunsa use karein?

Aaj 12 am se pehle if Tich di posts her hindi OS to choose karenge tera ya unka..
Nhi to tera..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Acha teek hain
Please US time karde
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Posted: 11 years ago
Pagal hai kya..
Deadline's 2nd june 5 pm IST
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Posted: 11 years ago
Maine bhi to likhi thi hindi wali??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Muskan di..usmein aapne english words use kar diye hain :P

Which english OS shud we use?
Sanaya di's cant be used coz of word limit
To phir kaunsa..
Mera ya deepkriti di ka?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sanyu, I'll edit Sana's OS to 500 words.
Because hers was the most unique one n could help us earn more points . What say?
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Posted: 11 years ago
lolzz.. pat me guys.. from 687 words to 489 words.. 20 kinutes likhne mein lagaa aur edit karne mein 2hours..
sorry for being late.. here is my OS.. please hasna mat.. This is my first ever in Hindi.. and it has no english words..
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Jaise Taani kamre ke andar aayi usse uss shaks ke honeka ehsaas hua. Aur hota kaise nahi. Woh uska rooh tha, wajood tha aur dhadkan tha. Lekin usskeliye woh sirf ek dost thi. Aur baat woh samajh gayi thi. Bina uski ore dekhe Taani zameen par apni angoothi dhoondne lagi.

"Taani?" Rey uske paas aaya, halke kadmon se uski ore badhta hua.

Na Taani ne jawaab diya aur naahi uski taraf mudke dekha, haan ye alag baat hai ki uska mann use dhokha dene lagaatha aur uska Rey se naa baat karne ki thaan pighal rahi thi.

"isse dhoond rahi ho?" Rey apna haath uthakar use dikhaata hai.

Jaise Taani mudhi uska dil kaampne laga. Rey uske sirf ek kadam doori pe tha. Uski annkhon mein bhi woh bechaini dikhti hai jo Taani ki aankhon mein hai. Taani ka yun use nazarandaaz karna use na manzoor tha aur na pasand. Har waqt uski kami khalne lagi thi usse. Taani ka makhmali haath bade hi nazuk se apne haathon mein lekar dheere se anguthi pehnaane lagaa.

"Kya kar rahe ho Rey?" Taani chillati hui apna haathe peeche leti hai. Rey hairaan ho jaata hai. "Ek ladki ko anguthi pehnaane ka matlab bhi samajhte ho tum?" aur wahanse jaane lagti hai.

Rey jaldi se darwaze ki ore jaakar uska raasta rok leta hai. Taani Rey ko hataane ki koshish karti hai jab Rey ghatt se uske haath pakkad leta hai aur apne paas kheenchta hai.

"Kyun rahi ho Taani ye sab. Mujhe yun nazarandaaz karke kya saabit karna chahti. Hum itne achche dost the aur..."

Taani ki aankhen aasuon se nam ho jaate hain aur Rey ka gussa shaant ho jaata hai "Main aapki dost nahi banna chahti hoon Rey" rote hue Taani keti hai.

Apna haath Taani ke gaalon par rakhkar Rey dheere se poochta hai, "Toh tum kya chahti ho Taani?" Rey ki har saans bas yehi umeed kar rahi thi ki Taani apni dil ki baat keh den.

"Main tumhari dostse jyada banna chahti hoon Rey. Apni har subah tumse shuru karna chahti hun, aur raat tumpar khatam karna chahti hoon. Tumhare kandhe par sirf haath nahi, sir bhi rakhna chahti hoon, Tumhare baahon mein kaanch ki tarah tootna chahti hoon, tumhare seene par kaan rakhkar tumhare dhadkano mehsoos karna chahti hoon. Dosti ka sirf peela rang hi nahi zindagi ke hazaar rang dekhna chahti hoon tumhare saath, tumhara pyaar chahti hoon Rey"

Rey Taani ke gaalon par gire aasuon ko apne hooton se dheere dheere peejata hai, Taani ki aakhen uss ek pal ko sametne keliye band kar deti hai. Apne geele hont taani ke honton par dabaa deta hai aur apna ek haath Taani ke ghane baalon mein daalkar use aur karreb laata hai. Rey jaan gaya tha ki Taani hai toh hi uski jaan hai, jahaan hai aur jaanat hai.

"Main bhi yehin chahta hoon Taani" apni haathon mein jo anguthi hai woh uski ungli mein pehnaa deta hai aur uski haath ko chuumta hai.

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Posted: 11 years ago
@TheDreamCatcher Awesome OS👏 Love Taani's feelings❤️ My vote goes to your OS👍🏼

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Posted: 11 years ago
Woohoo...
Hindi OS done..

You bowled me tich di..its

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