Dire Consequences I/O - Page 5

Originally posted by: ssyahoo

Thanks Anji!!

I like the changes you made :) good job!!

Lets see how the reaction is.. Have you read any story like this out there??

Originally posted by: A_BA

I read the prologue and really liked it so far. I think it's a really strong start!

Should we set up a schedule of updates?

Just thinking the same ! Great minds think alike. Aami do you have any upcoming vacations?

We can incorporate some flashback scenes Anji after the prologue.. 😊

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

Anji just read the change you made to the prologue, and I really liked it!

I'm about to fix the story thread now that I am home and on my laptop. Will only be online for about 30 minutes.

Originally posted by: ssyahoo

Just thinking the same ! Great minds think alike. Aami do you have any upcoming vacations?

We can incorporate some flashback scenes Anji after the prologue.. 😊

Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

I REALLY was waiting for Aarav to become attached to Khushi because that was just her nature! But her idiotic nature was just UGH!

So maybe we can back track a little and show a connection between Khushi and Aarav, like a adorable, friendly relationship Khushi easily forms with everyone especially kids.

And maybe since S still has to be a bad character (I think) we could show how Khushi finds out how uncared for Aarav really is hence his ASR like nature! (Because Arnav became ASR because the harsh conditions he was put through)

Then Khushi being Khushi gives Aarav the love he's always wanted.

All the while things are strained between ArHi, Arnav doesn't know why Khushi is cold with him and S, but is loving towards Aarav (Because Khushi knows S's reality and she's hurt by Arnav, but nowhere is this Aarav's fault)

Then something like since S works with Arnav, she tried tricking him or stealing some money, but Khushi catches her and saves Arnav like before but in a more sophisticated manner. (Can Arnav have had made Khushi major shareholder of the company or something?)

Throughout this NK can help... Maybe bring La back since she knows AR and Khushi called her for help for what I stated in the paragraph above?

Make sense? Good? Bad? Ehh?

Originally posted by: ssyahoo

Interesting.. We honestly didn't discuss anything further as we thought we would post the prologue, and see the response.

I'm cool with whatever the group wants to do and hopefully later Anji and Aami can add their input.

What weeks were you on vacation so we can set the rotation accordingly?

I really want Khushi to be a strong character in this story. Even though she was heartbroken about Arnav being Aarav's father in the show, she decided to quit her marriage hastily. I would suggest that instead of breaking down about it, she becomes a little stronger. I don't know if that makes sense, but I just really don't want Khushi to be down and out the whole time...what do you guys think?

I am not planning to be away anytime in the foreseeable future, my vacations are done!! So anytime is good for me.

Anji and Aami great ideas.. Will respond in a bit.. Slightly tied up and using phone...

Lets get the prologue up Nidhi and then we have time to discuss plots. I can see there are some great ideas!! 😊

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

I like this idea, but I wanted Sheetal to come back because she was in love with Arnav more then his money. Even though Aarav is really her kid but the father is someone she doesn't want in her life and always envisioned Arnav as the father.

What do you think?

I like Aarav and Khushi becoming friends, and him starting to get attached to her.