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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks Anji!!

I like the changes you made :) good job!!

Lets see how the reaction is.. Have you read any story like this out there??

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ssyahoo
Thanks Anji!!

I like the changes you made :) good job!!

Lets see how the reaction is.. Have you read any story like this out there??

Yay! :)

Not like this I haven't.. :)

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Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
Also Sami... What about the Aarav Khushi thing I mentioned?

I am cool with that definitely for future chapters.. Originally we all had decided each author would do one chapter a month..

Don't know how many chapters as it depends on response

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Originally posted by: ssyahoo

I am cool with that definitely for future chapters.. Originally we all had decided each author would do one chapter a month..

Don't know how many chapters as it depends on response

Alright, just asking so we can let Aami and Nidhi know soon as well! :)

Well, if we want we can discussed a rough plan here?

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sure what did you have in mind?? They can always peruse through the pages and add their thoughts to the posting format.

We are just waiting on ideas about story until its posted

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ssyahoo
Sure what did you have in mind?? They can always peruse through the pages and add their thoughts to the posting format.

We are just waiting on ideas about story until its posted

Um... How about despite it all Khushi gains motherly affection for Aarav or find out that Sheetal hasn't really cared for him all this time and just showed up again because she wanted Arnav's money?

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I REALLY was waiting for Aarav to become attached to Khushi because that was just her nature! But her idiotic nature was just UGH!

So maybe we can back track a little and show a connection between Khushi and Aarav, like a adorable, friendly relationship Khushi easily forms with everyone especially kids.

And maybe since S still has to be a bad character (I think) we could show how Khushi finds out how uncared for Aarav really is hence his ASR like nature! (Because Arnav became ASR because the harsh conditions he was put through)

Then Khushi being Khushi gives Aarav the love he's always wanted.

All the while things are strained between ArHi, Arnav doesn't know why Khushi is cold with him and S, but is loving towards Aarav (Because Khushi knows S's reality and she's hurt by Arnav, but nowhere is this Aarav's fault)

Then something like since S works with Arnav, she tried tricking him or stealing some money, but Khushi catches her and saves Arnav like before but in a more sophisticated manner. (Can Arnav have had made Khushi major shareholder of the company or something?)

Throughout this NK can help... Maybe bring La back since she knows AR and Khushi called her for help for what I stated in the paragraph above?

Make sense? Good? Bad? Ehh?

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG! We could have a scene like from the show where both ASRs hold onto Khushi's dupatta!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I read the prologue and really liked it so far. I think it's a really strong start!

Should we set up a schedule of updates?

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Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

Um... How about despite it all Khushi gains motherly affection for Aarav or find out that Sheetal hasn't really cared for him all this time and just showed up again because she wanted Arnav's money?

Interesting.. We honestly didn't discuss anything further as we thought we would post the prologue, and see the response.

I'm cool with whatever the group wants to do and hopefully later Anji and Aami can add their input.

What weeks were you on vacation so we can set the rotation accordingly?

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