||SwaRon FF: Broken Wings|| - Page 52

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
it was so emotional
jst loved it
finally swayam saw his baby first time
poor swayam sarah was scolding him when he was not at fault
at least now sharon should show him d picof baby's early stages

Sarah really beat him all left, right and center :v Sharon should but the question Would Sharon do that? Lets see!

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

such an awsm update... its so heart wrenching... 😭 do update soon...

Thanks! I will :)

Originally posted by: --lavanya--

Such a beautiful update 😭

Thanks.

Originally posted by: Lovestory55

This one was too emotional. You killed me with the last line. But what i meant with romance was really their interactions, they are so beautifully written that they made me smile at every word. I think Its time that Swayam clears out what really happened because he is aware that if he takes it any longer he will loose Sharon. And that would be catastrophic. Your writing manages to capture the subtlest of emotions.

Neet <3

Thank you Neet <3 Your comments feels good to me. Thank you for all your kind words. Humbled.

Originally posted by: rose1998

the update was sad,off course.
Can't write something more about it.But you proved once again as a fantastic writer.
Waiting for the next chapter.

Thank you for the comment. Will put up the update today.

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

This is awesome..
Loved it when Sharon go yo swayam
And tried to console him and wanna know the reason of his behaviour..

I think swayam should have told her the truth..

I don't think Sharon did a mistake by no letting swayam with her during check ups..

Its totally his bad luck..
Poor swayam..

Pia you are gonna be scrued up badly..

Thanks for the pm

Nobody is feeling sympathetic to Swayam. Mera baby :'(

Thank you for the comment. Glad you liked it..

Originally posted by: gofi

Omg..i just logged in and two updates from this ff!!

surely made my day

but they were soo sad!

Aftr all this i badly want to kno the truth

What is soo big that swayam can in no way tell sharon

even if this means staying away from her and baby!!

I really feel bad for him

and his last line..made me cry

Greedy for more

update soon😊

Swayam feels the truth is too huge to bother Sharon with it right now but yes things will berevealed soon.

Originally posted by: mythreyii

Chitra
Yet again a beautiful update.
The update was killer and I said it before.
The pain and emotions u bring in through words jus run in front of my eyes.
Now awaiting what is going to happen in the party and how are they going to come together.
Pls get them together

Thank you Mythreyii. It just makes my day when you all say such words ^____^

About Party! I am quite bad at writing many things so better dont expect much from me 🤣

Originally posted by: blunt..

ohso it was pia behind all the things. .that idiot. .but i do not think uve revealed everthng yet coz whoz amaira is still a very big questn. .nd most importntly y swayam hid this frm sharon. .im sure amaira is the reason. .but whoz this amaira exactly???? Ufff so many qs. .i cannot blame sharon for not showing dose pics of the baby to swayam coz poor soul dont even know whatz happening nd swayam refuses to say anythng so itz naturalfor a person lyk sharon to hide such thngs coz hez also hiding many thngs from her. .typical sharon 😛 nd last line broke my heart too. .till now it was only sharon who used to say she doesnt know how much more time she wil hav with him but now evn swayam is saying the same thing. .i dont want them to separate. .nd most importntly i want to know wat made swayam hide such thing frm sharon even wen he was not at fault. .love this story. .always makes me thnk what will happen next. .i lyk the flow of the story very much. .u do not reveal everythng in one chapter only instead u reveal in portions nd thats what keeps readers hooked to ua story. .amazing writing. .waiting for next chap

Thank you so much for telling your feelings about this ff. Your feelings are just right. I will try to clarify why Swayam said the last line. And about the suspense Patience is Virtue.

Originally posted by: blunt..

Also i forgot to mentn im excited for the party sequence. .ive a feeling dat somethng will happen there but this is ua ff so cant say anythng wid assurance 😛 . .i hope they dance togthr or somethng 😳 i hope im not boring u wid my bakbak but dis FF is really my most fav at d moment due to many reasons. .nd hence dis sort of craziness. .ufff eargerly waitng for next chap. .pls giv us surprise of a fast update dis time too 😉

Bold I can assure that is not going to happen :/ Two reasons, That is one thing that does not go with Sharon's condition right now. And secondly it happens in every movie and every ff :P And I try not to write cliches.

You can comment a hundred times and you still wont be boring me :P I am loving te craziness ^_____^