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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

SUPER FAST update. Yo.. Dancing me. I seriously love you for this fast, much detailed update. Loved that Swaron moment were Sharon calmed him. This angry Swayam - in a way am loving it. Swayam felt his baby for the first time. Man, I really wanted that to happen from a long time. He had missed out 6 months of his baby's growth. How unfortunate can this guy get? The Dr. even gave Sharon the pics of the baby but she didn't even show it to him. COLOSSAL IDIOT!! Poor Swayam, feel really bad for him😭 .

Why did Swayam speak like that in the end? You are not planning on ending this on a sad note, are you?

And you, woman, why do you have to write so frigging realistically that I can connect to everything that is happening, every single emotion. Nothing is over the top in your writing. Now, when a writer does that, that is KUDOS to the author. In this case you⭐️.

Between, Sharon's father is Shashank in the first para and in the third part its Gautam. You've really gotta stick onto one Chitra 😆.

PS: I so loved the banner.

Hoping for another super fast update. Can I wish for an even longer update next time plz😛

Thanks for the pm

Edited by aneesha93 - 10 years ago

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pri98.arora

@pri98.arora

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Super fast update...I like it :-)

Sharon comforting swayam was a bliss... was really wanting something like this to happen.

Felt bad for Swayam... he is literally suffering for something he never did... he was just caught in a bad situation!

His pain on loosing on so much in the 6 months... I was crying with him😭

I really want them to mend their ways soon...

Superbly written as always.

Waiting for the next update... do it soon like this one :-)

Edited by pri98.arora - 10 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#493

awesome update
it was so emotional
jst loved it
finally swayam saw his baby first time
poor swayam sarah was scolding him when he was not at fault
at least now sharon should show him d picof baby's early stages

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

such an awsm update... its so heart wrenching... 😭 do update soon...

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@--lavanya--

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Such a beautiful update 😭

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Neet

@.writtenletter.

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

This one was too emotional. You killed me with the last line. But what i meant with romance was really their interactions, they are so beautifully written that they made me smile at every word. I think Its time that Swayam clears out what really happened because he is aware that if he takes it any longer he will loose Sharon. And that would be catastrophic. Your writing manages to capture the subtlest of emotions.

Neet <3

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ROSE

@rose1998

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#497

the update was sad,off course.
Can't write something more about it.But you proved once again as a fantastic writer.
Waiting for the next chapter.

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

This is awesome..
Loved it when Sharon go yo swayam
And tried to console him and wanna know the reason of his behaviour..

I think swayam should have told her the truth..

I don't think Sharon did a mistake by no letting swayam with her during check ups..

Its totally his bad luck..
Poor swayam..

Pia you are gonna be scrued up badly..

Thanks for the pm

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gofi

@gofi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#499

Omg..i just logged in and two updates from this ff!!

surely made my day

but they were soo sad!

Aftr all this i badly want to kno the truth

What is soo big that swayam can in no way tell sharon

even if this means staying away from her and baby!!

I really feel bad for him

and his last line..made me cry

Greedy for more

update soon😊

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#500

Chitra
Yet again a beautiful update.
The update was killer and I said it before.
The pain and emotions u bring in through words jus run in front of my eyes.
Now awaiting what is going to happen in the party and how are they going to come together.
Pls get them together