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Beautiful <3

Chitra...
Girl u had all plans to kill me with this update
I have no idea how much I scrolled up and down and read the update again and again.
Am still in the trance of ur update. It was jus beautiful amazing wonderful all in one.
The first part where u had written the reactions of swayum and Sharon on the clinic scene which was jus great.
The next scene were swayum interacts with gautam was sweet. This is the best line of the update "SHE IS SHARON RAI PRAKASH AFTERALL. YOU CANNOT IGNORE ANY WORD OF HERS".
and the way he made swayum realise that she is still living with him was very sweet.
Swayums fear and shraons fear could jus b connected to with ur words.
The party was interesting. U had written it really well as usual. And swayum adorning her too
The way she said that she felt a kick made me excited. The way all jumped in too feel the kick was funny and at the same time swayum made me sad.
The best part their convo the much needed one.
I really thank u for making Sharon slap swayum for his words. Though he was right in asking her To trust him over the photos but his words made her flinch.
Such an emotional update with a perfect end to the update.
The way Sharon shouted to the hug to their kiss all was superb. Hopefully they stay together after this till forever and beyond .. :)

Standing ovation please!!!

You made me cry...
But still I love u🤗

Ye update
Awesome
Finally!! Ah! I Love U!! Swayam Baby!!

!!Update fatafat!! *ordering*

Take Me Home...

Not just Swayam, even am choked with emotions. What an update Chitra? It was awesome blossom. From the beginning to the very end - mind blowing. Swayam Gautam convo - much needed and genuine. Swayam expecting Sharon to tell him that their baby is kicking (that was heart breaking), then their convo and finally Swayam feeling the kick of his baby. Just loved it. The flow of this update was P-E-R-F-E-C-T. I fall short of words to describe your talent in writing and this update.

omg this was actually amazing update
i was smiling n my eyes had tears in it at a same time when i was reading update
yeee finally atleast mu clear
ab pia ka jo bhi krna hain woh nxt update main
bt now im so happy my swaron r bck

Awesome writting still can't believe dt i got tear while reading awesome awesome do update soon

That was so good :)

Speechless 👏