!!SWARON OS: LOSING MYSELF TO YOU!!

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

such a sensuous os i must say... its very nicely penned... keep writing moreee...

& ur poem is amazing... 😊

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Shailja

@Kshailja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

[B][/B]This OS was a treat to read...
SwaRon madly in luv with each other...
They r just perfect together...
Nd the Poem was also awesome..
Thanx fr pm...
Nd Keep Writting.

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Reserved.

^Unreserve^

Knock!Knock! Is that my friend there? Are you sure My SHINU has written this?

My bad!I shouldn't have asked you to read that triology! 😛

My seedhi saadhi gaon ki chokri lost!

What is this?

Swayam going all *gulps* sexy. *fans herself*
The scene was too romantic and hot to imagine!

Swayam was so lost in Sharon and she pushed him before time. And then she came teasing him by wearing ONLY a Tee!

Dude!Swayam takes revenge *smirks* and How 😉

I loved it completely!I myself was going to ask to write something! And you came u with this *H2H*

Lovely work shinu 😊

Chitra ❤️

Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 10 years ago

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

The poem was beautiful :)

Romantic and so beautiful :)

You always write lovely poems :)

My multi talented girl :)

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

loved dis os..it was nice..

n poem is beautiful..liked it..

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dvrushu

@dvrushu

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

i actually loved this os...
it was cute yet naughty...😆
swayam when comes to romance is unstoppable...😳
n i also liked the poem...it was really nyc

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Extremely beautiful. It was so well thought and penned down.
Enjoyed reading the lovey dovey SwaRon after so long.
Thank you for the PM.
keep writing.

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Piyu

@piyu_swaron

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

this OS is hot.. Tired swayam getting romantic😳 loved it shinu

nd d poem is beautiful

keep writing

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Dew..

@Dew..

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

the story, the poem ... loved it!!
Thanks for the PM :)

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Astonishingly beautiful dii!
Every single element was present here!
The love that swaron have formed...
The trueness and purity of SWARON!!
U have written absolutely amazingly!
Its just tooo good!
Finally, after ages am reading ur os..
Feeling good!
The idea was splendid!
The execution even better!
Sigh! What do I say!!
It was unbelievable!
The poem i have no words!
Me is totally speechless!!
Each and every word completed each other!
Every single sentence bloomed...
It was magical!
Loved loved loved it didu!
Great great job!
Thanks for sharing this.