!!SWARON OS: LOSING MYSELF TO YOU!!

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@riachawlalko

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

such a sweet os n an amazing poem :)
very well written
luved it
keel writing more
n thanks fr d pm :)

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

heya shinu

really nice os

starting from the start

swayam entering the house

they sitting together wid each other

swayams naughty harkatein

sharon the responsible wife

romantic swayam

they feeding each other

swayam being impatient

taking sharon in his arms

their love ...so pure

really nice

coming to the poem' i knew that

you wer an aesome storywriter

but the poem was really nice tooo

thnx 4 the double treat

thnx 4 d pm

keep writing

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Fatima

@HSFA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Shini are you for real?

I mean seriously, girl

This OS was out of the world. Mind blowing.

Firstly because you kept it simple and you portrayed the real passionate and hungry side of SwaRon ☺️

I enjoyed reading and hats off to you for making me engrossed in it. 👏👏 I did not wander for a second and read it imagining SwaRon <3

To top it the poem that you wrote really made me your fan. A true one<3

The precision and the words used to portray the emotions 2 lovers have for each other is just commendable.

Do write more poems<3 You are just amazing in them.

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