SWARON OS : some mistakes cost a lifetime - Page 4

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avya98

@avya98

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Posted: 10 years ago

The os was awesome . Actually awesome and the ending was the best it could be !!!!👍🏼

Great work👏

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Diya

@diyaswaronholic

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Posted: 10 years ago

What the hell diduuu!
*throws 500 tomatoes*

LO chalo khao itna tomato sauce!!
Hayee it was endulging!!
Mai toh padti hi gaiii!
GOddd! Aap kitna acha likhte ho!
Ek min heartattack aagaya!
Kabhi toh haye diabates hogai!
Aap plz doctor mat banna!
Kissiko bhi maardaalogeee 😛
hehe but this os was really really beautiful!!!!!

Swayam's feelings..
The way he felt!
His regrets..
Sharon!!
How well she understands him..
Oh god! those lines, those convos!
Haye maar dalaaa!!
Amazing Amazing Amazinggg"!!

Loved loved loved this os sooo much dii!
Love u mroe!

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

first of all thanx 4

considering our requests

and writing the second part

their dialogues were well written
oh my!

sid was shaons bil

thank god sharon and

swayam are together

really well written

thnx 4 d pm

keep writing

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