SWARON OS : some mistakes cost a lifetime

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

wow finally gud ending...

nice os.. loved it...

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meenal singh

@swaron_arshi_07

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

u have completely changed the plot by this chapter
and i still loved it
it was nice and all happy happy
it was well penned

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Heyyy ani,...

it was super...

nice os..great job...

keep writing...

small cmt sorry

Have to cmt in many stories so...😉

with love

keechu di😃

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Superb ending dear
Loved it
Thanks 4 d pm

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sanchiswaron

@sanchiswaron

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Thousand apologies for unresing so late :(

I'm so glad you gave second part for this ^_^ just love happy endings :D the first was beautifully written making swayam realize his mistake and the pain of losing Sharon ^_^ but second compensated for all the pain :') bacl together, making each other realize what mistakes they did rather he did.

Thanks for this one

Edited by sanchiswaron - 10 years ago