Swaron os: You are mine - Page 4

Originally posted by: akira223

Loved it, awsome

Do write more and pm me

Originally posted by: Krazzy4u786

WOW😊

Awesome OS

Loved it...beautifully written!!

Thanks 4 the pm

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR

Awww...really sweet and cute OS 😳

Sharon confessed but he refused...and that stupid boy finally realized that he loves her...

He remembers exactly how long they were apart for 😊

Loved their confession ❤️...it was super!

Keep writing ⭐️

Originally posted by: aishu3003

amazingg os⭐️⭐️

lovedd ittt😊

Originally posted by: Vani20

Hey dear...

Its very well written OS...😊

Start was nice..😊

Boths POV, was nicely written..😛

Swayam realizing his feeling later.. But Sharon was gone till then..

Finally they met after years... And confessed their feelings...😊

Both's Emotions wer beautifully penned down..😊

A sweet , simple and beautiful piece of work...😊

Thanku so much for the PM..😊

And keep writing more... 😊

Originally posted by: shiningshannu

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ill comment soon

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heyya keechu

ua second work wow

dat was really lovely

the monologues were written beautifully

swayams guit and shrons longing was heart touching

all in all a very well penned os

do write more

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

nice one

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

Ahh.

I luvd this so much.

lovely, short, sweet confession it was aftr longing so much...

loved the last bit naughtiness n first kiss.

keep writing more

love,
Sakshi.

Originally posted by: ritz15

beautiful os dii

loved it

keep writing

Originally posted by: varshanakshiran

veryyy beautiful os keechu😊

chooo chweet😛

keep it up😊👍🏼