Swaron os: You are mine - Page 3

Originally posted by: lunia

wow!!!
superb!!!!
loved it 😳

Originally posted by: ujwalv

👍🏼

nice..loved it.

Originally posted by: Rajeshwari_KR

Beautifully written

I loved the monologues

Their wait, love, longing and eventual joy was beautifully shown

loved the way you expressed their emotions

Keep writing more

Originally posted by: alisha_arsha

wow keechu

its awesome

loved it

do write more

Originally posted by: Princess.S786

Great os keechu
Do write more

Originally posted by: pooja123456

Nice os

Originally posted by: pooja123456

Nice os

Originally posted by: Mansi98

res

unres

wow diii

it was ur 2nd work

m glad u r nt stopping 2 write after 1 os

also thank u dii fr dedicating it 2 me

coming 2 d os

it was really awesome

i loved it

swaron as bf

bt she loves him

bt he doesnt

he realised his love

bt he left

dere fate is really bad

after she left he was in pain all dis years

finally she back

n he confessed

thanks 2 u dat dis time sharon didnt rejected him

at last dey both confessed n kissed

it was cuet 1

very well penned

keep writing

n thanx fr d PM

Love

Mansi

Originally posted by: vrushan143

beautifull os keechu, love it brilliant superb fantastic. I can feel swayam's loneliness in this 5yrs without sharon

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserved.

Unreserve
Thus took a lot of time to unreserve but thats because my cell was not working properly. . .Anyways Greeshma this OS was cuteane beautuful. . .The confession was kind if unexected and unpredictable for me as I thought it to be a emotional one but their convo was well written. . I really liked it :)

The kiss was beautiful and Swayam's May I especially :)

Good work :)