Swaron os: You are mine - Page 5

Originally posted by: HSFA

Beautifully written.

It was a complete package of emotions.

Keep writing.

Originally posted by: ShailjaShan

Awesome OS yaar...
I knw I'm late...Bt finally read it...
Thanx fr pm...

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Omg!!!
Beautiful diduuu
the concept is sooo unique!
each n every word completed eachothher
those astonishing p.o.v.s made it perfect!
the way u bloomed through ..
writing .. portraying emotions was lovely!
How could they stay incomplete?
And the end
U nourished it up to romance
Swayams outburst killed me in the starting
Sharons break down broke all hearts
But their togetherness
when they became one..
it was the best time ever
those conversations stole my heart
all I can say was it was khoobsurat!

Diduuu ur an amazing amazing writer!
Ur tooo good!!!!
Hehehe am sooo proud of u!

Loved loved this os
love u even moree

Continue writing!

Love,
ur cutie

Originally posted by: -Charu-

Beautiful os! 👏

Originally posted by: roysanjana2

awwsome .. swaron ...

Originally posted by: princess1926

Lovely os dii..

so cute...

Swayam was so guilty...

but happy ending..

loved it👏

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

sweet story...