SwaRon OS: Coming Back To Life

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Dew..

@Dew..

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This is a briliant piece of work...
I've always loved intense & emotional SwaRon. . .the way u writing this story is simply Amazing. .loved the song...
God bless u dear...keep writing..
Plz pm me ur next work

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

wow it was wonderful...

awesome os dear...

i loved the end...

we can imagine anything there...

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautifully penned feelings <3

Loved every bit of it. Amazing.

Felt each and every word. And the song chosen was just fab.

Well done!!

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

I wish the track was as logical as this OS!:(

Great job! Lovely depiction! Beautiful emotions!

Honestly it's heart wrenching to see Sharon cry, it's enough! All she does is cry these days. Put an end to this, someone ,please.

Loved relations of the cold November to their damp lives!:)

Keep it up!

Jiana.

P.S. The song! <3 Floyds! _/\_

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

nishu😲😲😲😲😲😲😲🤪
oh god... u are such a brilliant writer!!
your words❤️ so beautiful!!
this was so brilliant and beautiful <3
hayee nishu .. i llove you yaar...
this took my mind away from the physics i have to study😆
amazing yaar and the song is beautiful too <3
perfect!