SwaRon OS: Coming Back To Life

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Posted: 10 years ago
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AUTHOR'S NOTE-
Please play this song in the background before starting the Story. Please.
Coming Back To Life


Misunderstandings. That's all that was left between them. Both of them held their ego high, refusing to bend down, refusing to acknowledge the string which kept them together. They refused to talk even though the anger had subsided.

Swayam sat on his window pane staring into the night, random thoughts scampering around his head. Not that his life made much sense to him now. Things had gone haywire in the past few days and he couldn't even analyse what went wrong. He sighed. If only he had kept his calm and acted like a decent human being. Maybe things could have been slightly better.


Where were you when I was burned and broken
While the days slipped by from my window watching
Where were you when I was hurt and I was helpless
Because the things you say and the things you do surround me


Sharon was confused. Was there any base to their fight? Yes maybe. Swayam believed a third person over her and had the audacity to pick a fight based on what he heard. Didn't he realise how it would sting her? Did it not matter to him?


While you were hanging yourself on someone else's words
Dying to believe in what you heard
I was staring straight into the shining sun


Sharon knew Swayam would have realised his fault by now and might probably be feeling guilty about it. Well, he had to do something about it, take a step or else she was sure things wouldn't get sorted between them.


Lost in thought and lost in time
While the seeds of life and the seeds of change were planted
Outside the rain fell dark and slow
While I pondered on this dangerous but irresistible pastime


Sharon was lost. Lost without him. The world felt strangely cold to her without him. Not like she hadn't faced this before. For a long time she had had the walls around her, obstructing the coldness from freezing her heart. Stone was any day better than ice. But this was the story before Swayam barged into her life, weakening her defences as he did. A drop leaked out of her eyes like those from the clouds outside. The cold from the November rain was getting to her. Reminding her of the void which had formed in her life. Only one thought resounded in her mind. Why wasn't Swayam here now?


I took a heavenly ride through our silence
I knew the moment had arrived
For killing the past and coming back to life


Swayam wiped the tear which had made its way out of his eyes without his knowledge. He was incapable of doing this anymore. The division between them was eating him from inside. The communication gap between them had opened his eyes to the truth and had paved a path for him to come out of this misery. He was infallibly in love with her and yet had ended up hurting her. Now he had to bring back their relationship on track. Apologize and get back together. Come back to life.


I took a heavenly ride through our silence
I knew the waiting had begun
And headed straight...into the shining sun


Sharon's phone beeped. A message from Swayam "Why are we doing THIS?" she smiled a bit. She knew it was time. Time she let the walls drop back again. He was going to come soon. The wait had begun, the wait to complete each other once again. Did she forgive him? Didn't matter, for it was him over any grudge. As the bell rang, she jumped up and rushed to open the door. There he stood, drenched head to toe, his wet eyes boring into hers.

The November rain didn't feel so chilly anymore.


Edited by Nishi.Kss - 10 years ago

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.nerfherder thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello People.
I am so annoyed. Like really.
One time i decide to attach a song to my OS and all the music players decide to crash that day. 😳
I hope you guys played the song along and hope you enjoyed the read.

Regards
Nishi

P.S. PM's tomorrow.
Edited by Nishi.Kss - 10 years ago
ritz15 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dis was really really very beautiful
Although there was no swaron convo bt still it was amazing
Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nishuuu ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
i am a biggg fan of ur works and this is sooo

sooo sooo toiuching... please never

ever give up writing dear ..i just love this swaron... emotions intense... i dont know what iam

blabbering and i love you for writing this...


p.s: you love emo swaron na...jaise hi dard dikha screen pe dimag mein scenes and haath laoptop

pe apne aap...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this was simply beautiful heart touching & emotional piece of work...
They way u describe their POV was superb...
I've always loved emotional & intense swaron & this OS contained every bit of emotion & intensity...
Loved it just loved it...

P.S. one request plz write an OS or rather SS on swaron current track plz...
As you r one of my fav writer..& ur works are tremendous so plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome OS
omg the song fits so perfectly on swaron
love the emotional swaron
coming back to life so perfect title
" November rain didnt feel so chilly anymore"❤️
you r a fab fab fab writer😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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what an awsm piece of writing. superb... 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
What if I hadn't open this???? :s

Nishi. . .its good to see u back :)

The OS was beautiful. . .Like beautiful :)

Sharon and Swayam gets so incomplete wothoit each other :)

The song suited the OS perfectly :)

I loved the feel it provided. . .Messed up thoughts. . .November Rain and a Happh ending. . .Awww its so good :)

I loved how in the ed Swayam was standing at her door. . .all wet in the November Rain ^_^

Lovely Nishi :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres
sorry fr unresing it late
coming 2 d os
it was beautifully pen down
i so love it
both r in so much pain
hope dis wall soon breaks down
keep writing
n thanx fr d PM
Love
Mansi
Edited by Mansi98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nishi.. this was beautiful..
i always love emotional nd intense swaron..
loved it alot.. keep writing

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