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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

dis is brilliant... superb awesome update... plz update soon...

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Lady you make me bawl my eyes out.
What was that??
Gosh gosh gosh.
Can this get any better.
This is just bliss. Swaron the characters whom I actually know.
Love how your works have SwaRon so true to their characters.
Such beautifully the angst is written.
You are one helluva writer. _/\_ So intricately and minutely detailed the whole write up.
Each and every POV of both of them is so beautifully written.
The plot so beautifully handled. This part comes in a November after a year. But the connection is so well there.
My favourite part of this one would be that kiss. :p
How do you write such stuffs man. Sheer brilliance.
This will be one of my most favourite kiss written on SwaRon.
Its beyond beautiful. Its not easy to focus writing on each thought through a kiss.. But you put forward the feelings of BOTH of them behind every last touch so beautifully. Hats off. _/\_ That longing that they gonna feel and savouring the last moments of togetherness so beautifully written.
Its visually beautiful as well as to amazing in reading too.
One beautifully written moment ie.
Part one and part two. Both had parting. Hope to get to see some happiness in the November ahead. :p
Brilliant write up. Great work.

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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

this is so so beautiful and well written...
loved reading it... the emotions just came popping through the words...
beautiful
plz do update soon!

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Komal

@koms_vrushan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

superb ss, read the two chapters loved it please update next update yaar.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

I read both your chapters, and I really like'em. What's gripping bout this story is the way you scribble it. Your penmanship skills are commendable. You know how to weave in the angst of the story with the characters.

I like the changes you have made in the script. Though, you hold on to the essence of the characters, especially Sharon.

Keep me in the loop whenever you plan to update next.

-N

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i.am

@i.am

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Just loved it... it's a master piece..
Update asap

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Try to make the next one soon. :)

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i.am

@i.am

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Pleaseee update asap...
Loved it... waiting for the story to unfold...

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QueenofGreen

@QueenofGreen

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: pooja123456
Nice!! Update super soon

Thanks.

There is an update coming up - better sooner than never right?

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QueenofGreen

@QueenofGreen

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: dvrushu
it was soo beautifuuly written👏
both the parts made my eyes wet...😭
sharon going to london😲
sharon wan him to yeel at her...and stop her from going
she thinks swayam is losseng his own identity behind her
and swayam want her to be happy...even if they have to be apart for no matter what time
he wants to stop her but cant as she was fullfilling her dream...her passion,ambision for which swayam was fallen for... he cant come between her n her dreams
dont know how they are gonna live without eachother for whole one year
n swayam's last promise...😭

Thank you so much.

I'm sorry for making you cry though!