SwaRon SS | November [Updated P16] 23/11 - Page 6

Originally posted by: cutelove

Wowww!!!! Mahhh eyes were ready to tickle down d tears after reachingg at d endd...very emotional n fantastic ...u hav written it beautifully wth utmost love infact pure love reflected in dis writingg...i so so loved it...plzz update soon n happy wala plzzz

Originally posted by: Candour.

*sniff sniff*

No, not because they are seperating, but because I am so happy with the characterization of Sharon and Swayam. Very few writers have been able to capture that. But you do that with a tinge of your own freshness, the lost freshness which we felt in the beginning of SwaRon.

November 2015 is painful. November 2016 has hope.

Kudos on how you are writing. Brilliant detailing with ample logic. The flow of the story is perfect.

Loved it to the T.

Would love to read more from you :)

Jiana.

Originally posted by: SanskritiS

Awesome update

Sharon going to London 😔

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Nice update

U hv written it really very well

Loved the concept

Want to read more of it!!!

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan

dis is brilliant... superb awesome update... plz update soon...

Originally posted by: ujwalv

this is amazing..

Originally posted by: --Destiny--

Lady you make me bawl my eyes out.
What was that??
Gosh gosh gosh.
Can this get any better.
This is just bliss. Swaron the characters whom I actually know.
Love how your works have SwaRon so true to their characters.
Such beautifully the angst is written.
You are one helluva writer. _/\_ So intricately and minutely detailed the whole write up.
Each and every POV of both of them is so beautifully written.
The plot so beautifully handled. This part comes in a November after a year. But the connection is so well there.
My favourite part of this one would be that kiss. :p
How do you write such stuffs man. Sheer brilliance.
This will be one of my most favourite kiss written on SwaRon.
Its beyond beautiful. Its not easy to focus writing on each thought through a kiss.. But you put forward the feelings of BOTH of them behind every last touch so beautifully. Hats off. _/\_ That longing that they gonna feel and savouring the last moments of togetherness so beautifully written.
Its visually beautiful as well as to amazing in reading too.
One beautifully written moment ie.
Part one and part two. Both had parting. Hope to get to see some happiness in the November ahead. :p
Brilliant write up. Great work.

Originally posted by: .Vrushanholic.

this is so so beautiful and well written...
loved reading it... the emotions just came popping through the words...
beautiful
plz do update soon!

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

I read both your chapters, and I really like'em. What's gripping bout this story is the way you scribble it. Your penmanship skills are commendable. You know how to weave in the angst of the story with the characters.

I like the changes you have made in the script. Though, you hold on to the essence of the characters, especially Sharon.

Keep me in the loop whenever you plan to update next.

-N

Originally posted by: i.am

Just loved it... it's a master piece..
Update asap