SwaRon SS | November [Updated P16] 23/11 - Page 3

Originally posted by: ...CryBaby...

I have read something so beautiful and heart-touching after a LONG LONG time. Please do continue. Would love to read further. =)

Originally posted by: LaalIshq

Jst Amazing...

Originally posted by: hamsini1234

Amazing very heart touching please do continue

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

really nice...

Originally posted by: shaaz23

Amazing
The emotions were like a hurricane
Loved it to the core
Update soon

Originally posted by: Candour.

This is an amazing story!

Beautiful characterization!

Loved the way you picked up nuances of Sharon and Swayam. To the'T'.

Though SwaRon proposal has been aired, it would be a delight to read you version!!

Please update soon!! :)

Originally posted by: cutelove

Amazingg portrayal of emotions... Likeee really great wrk donee!!!!! Such a smooth floww wth exotic touchh...plzzz update it soon...wld like to read further.

Originally posted by: dvrushu

it is one of the best writeup i had ever read...
it seems really intresting...
swayam confusion,pain,fear...n sharon's pain,frustration was well written
plzzz do continue...plzzz
n pm me tooo

Originally posted by: nida.swaron

its so heart touching

sharon was sharon and swayam was swayam in this

emotions and thoughts were so perfect

Originally posted by: --Destiny--

Another beautiful piece.
So minutely written about every aspect of the plot.
And so highly intense. And emotional.
I loved the minute details in the POVs of both Swayam and Sharon.
Great work there. Looking forward to read the next part.