SwaRon OS: Maybe.. Its still not time

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AMAR_LOVE

@AMAR_LOVE

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

nice story...thnks for the pm

but plz try to continue your unfinished stories

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

So glad to see your wrote up after so long Tanvish..😃

Beautiful writing..amazing descriptions and superbly penned down emotions. Thats your strong point you know? the emotions you display go straight to the heart of the reader..

I loved this OS..This completed the incomplete story in the show..😳

Keep Writing..

Cheers

Nishi

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

hey tanvish gosh u write yepiee OK now back to os girl it just awesome finally khi PR to ye track complete hua show main hone se RHA I loved it swaron's emotions very well penned

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anubhutijain

@anubhutijain

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Awwwieee...juz an awesome oss...you potrayed sharon s feelings so welll...n even loved d sharey wala part ...thanks fr d pm 😊

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Straight heart touching...ur swaronish touch i jst really love it ...simply wow detailing of swaron wth inclusion of rey ...i love it always ...amazing...!!

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awesome os
loved it..
thnx for the pm..

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964103

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

You write SwaRon amazingly. Never have I seen somebody depicting them with such justice to the actual sense and characterization. Language is simple, concept is know but the impact is HUGE!

One of my Favourite SwaRon writers out of the very few favourites of mine!

Enough said! You rock!:)

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

awesome and rather sentimental!!

beautifully penned.

sorry for the link confusion and thanks for the pm.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Really liked the way you used rey in this OS. The rey in the show is damn irritating.
Felt so happy after seeing the old Swayam back. The one who can do anything for his Sharon. Unlike the stranger swayam in the show.
Loved this OS so so much.
Thanks for the PM. Keep writing.