SwaRon Three-shot: when it gets hard to handle *Replies added page-6* - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey rinku,
Just loved the way you have described Swayam's inner turmoil i havent read Swayam's emotions

this way for long...lovely attempt dear... his love..his pain...helplessness.. loved it..please update the last last part waiting eagerly for it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow rinku
its too gud
read both the parts dey were fab
swayams feelings were penned beautifully
and u completely justified it
wanna read the last part so update soon

love
shini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unreserved on pg3 like finally...Extremely sorry for keep you waiting *Embarrased*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nida.swaron

loved it...i can completely imagine swayam and sharons expressions

and their emotions...swayam's inner turmoil and his feelings his care towards sharon...love, love, love the feelings of swaron

waiting eagerly for the nxt part😃



Thank you. . :)
I'll update soon. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: diyaswaronholic

Wow!
Ur amazing!!
love the story..
The corridor scenario was perfect.
I love u was just too good
Just loved it
great job!
update soon ..


Thankyou and yup, I'll update asap. .😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..

Reserved.Unres in Night hopefully :) 😃
^Unreserved^

Hey Rinku!This one is so amazing.I love reading write ups from Swayam's pov. . .You wrote such deep emotions so casually without letting go the hurt and pain Swayam must have suffred. . .The flow in your writing was amazing.I seriously loved Part 1 like hell. . .Swayam taking break from college,and no no i m prfctly fine thing. . .N Part 2 Sharon confessed in front of everyone but Swayam has turned unsure. . .Ah!And he still carries that inhaler with him...Loverboy can never be changed :)

Updatw soon :)


Thank you. . It was not possible for me to let go of his lover boy personality . . It was necessary to keep his image and his perspective in very same situation. 😳 I loved your comment. . I'll update soon. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: varsh-mayur

Hey rinku,

Just loved the way you have described Swayam's inner turmoil i havent read Swayam's emotions

this way for long...lovely attempt dear... his love..his pain...helplessness.. loved it..please update the last last part waiting eagerly for it😊


Thank you. . I'll update soon. .😊 Your words are appreciated. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shalomshini

wow rinku

its too gud
read both the parts dey were fab
swayams feelings were penned beautifully
and u completely justified it
wanna read the last part so update soon

love
shini


Thank you shini. . I loved your comment. . I'll update soon. .😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is great and nice ... do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part-3

So, here I'm once again - Heartbroken but happy somehow. She never left me but I had to do so instead. I made her leave me. You must be wondering how on earth that is possible but the truth is she desperately needed to come in terms with her past and what is her present. I think somewhere she was forced to confess her love or like, whatever it is. First when she confessed that she wanted to give us a chance - that time she came to know though sources that I was going to confess and she denied but when she saw me going away she couldn't help but confessed, the point is she was used to my presence - it was not literally forced confession though but it was also not natural. Second time she confessed because she couldn't see me going through all this with my dad - it was also not forced but somewhere she was. I know she love me but now I want her to sort out all the things by herself without any guilt trip, not under any given circumstances but naturally when she feels like she can never live without me like I feel. I want her to feel the love she have for me, feel the urge to touch me, and desire to spend time with me. I want her to feel special when I take her name, I want her to feel tinge when she hears my name. I want her to feel proud having me by her side not fear of what world will think about us. I want her trust me enough that to tell me all her problems. I'll wait for her even if it takes my whole life. I'm not in any haste. I don't want her to regret any thing in future that she decided something because of some pressure given by circumstances. I don't want her to regret that she could have got someone better than me. The reality check was need of hour.

So, here are we now. Sharon is busy settling up for her own dance academy and I'm going to Europe for internship programs for 6 months. Though I loved to dance but I deliberately didn't pursued it as my carrier because I danced for Sharon. I didn't give up on dance just because I want to forget her or something, in fact I never ever gave up on dance in first place - it isn't in my nature just like forgetting her. I won't give up on dance. I will dance whenever I get chance to. It is my best escape to Sharon world. I want to dance for her; I want to dance when she is with me. I don't want to dance for world.

So, here is me swayam shekhawat signing off with a hope of getting her back - oh I just know she will come back to me and it will be for forever. If she won't I will just die happily waiting for her.

P.S. I Love Her and will continue to do so.

"If someone really loves you, no matter how many other people they meet; their feelings for you wouldn't change. A real lover can't be stolen."



Hey People. here is the update and last part of this three shot. I know it isn't what you all would have expected but don't know why but I'm satisfied with this because I can relate it to a normal person's life. I don't like high drama build-up, sugar-coating etc. My funda is keep it as simple as less-dramatic as you can. 😆 :P Hope you all like it. And healthy criticism is welcomed.

P.S. A very big thank you to all who have read the shit I've written and even commented on it. Thank you so much guys. You all definitely have appreciable stamina to bear it. 🤗 You all are amazing people.

Edited by rinkubathija12 - 10 years ago

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