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rinku bathija

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien
this is great and nice ... do continue soon

Thank you😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

heyya rinku

nyc update

swayam z ryt sharon vl come back to him

i want u to ryt d next part of it how sharon realise dat she cant live with out swayam

love

shini

Edited by shalomshini - 10 years ago

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Chitra.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

You ended it beautifully and I dont think it could have a better ending than this. . .Hopefully she will come back to Him and realise what he actually means!SwaRon equals Hope i feel and you just kept that here. . .Awesome!Having said that these endings look beautiful in fiction only.Congratulations This was worth reading 😊

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

I was expecting a happy ending like swaron together..

bt ds is good too..
swayam is right... sharon had to accept it without any guilt trip..
loved it..
thanks 4 d scrap...
nd thanks 4 updating..finally

Edited by Rockingbhardwaj - 10 years ago

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

it was a very heart-wrenching update

swayam's pov was so emotional n intense

i cud understand his pain n longinness to reach out to her

tat section was very well written

do update soon 😊

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shalomshini
heyya rinku
nyc update
swayam z ryt sharon vl come back to him
i want u to ryt d next part of it how sharon realise dat she cant live with out swayam

love
shini

Thanks Girl. . I can't promise writing next part as this was on swayam's POV solely. . If I could, i'll write a sequel Os to it but for now I'm going to have my exam so I'm not planing on writing any thing. . 😊

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: shaaz23
Nice one
Do write more

Thank you. .

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
I was expecting a happy ending like swaron together..

bt ds is good too..
swayam is right... sharon had to accept it without any guilt trip..
loved it..
thanks 4 d scrap...
nd thanks 4 updating..finally

Thanks for reading it buddy. . As I already mentioned it's not what you might have expected but it's the way i think it should be. . sorry for disappointing you.

Pleasure is all mine!😃 This one for so much thank-you-s. 😉

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
You ended it beautifully and I dont think it could have a better ending than this. . .Hopefully she will come back to Him and realise what he actually means!SwaRon equals Hope i feel and you just kept that here. . .Awesome!Having said that these endings look beautiful in fiction only.Congratulations This was worth reading 😊

Thank you bud. . Your words are appreciated. There can be ending like this in serials also, If you don't believe me watch hamsafar. Its a Pakistani drama and doesn't have an ending like that but that drama was my inspiration to write something like this. Hamsafar portray what a person would feel if your partner doesn't trust you enough and doesn't respect you anymore. . Watch hamsafar if time permit and you would know what I mean, it have only 23 or 26 episodes only I think. .

Thank you once again buddy. .

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rinku bathija

@rinkubathija12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
it was a very heart-wrenching update
swayam's pov was so emotional n intense
i cud understand his pain n longinness to reach out to her
tat section was very well written
do update soon 😊

Thank-you. . I already ended it buddy. .It was last part. 😳