The Unbreakable Love (Kriyansh) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Thnk god vihaan didnt go to sangeet
Awesome update
Want kriyaansh to be together sooon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
vry nice update...
Furthur comment to b continued...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
acha tell me one thing ki kahi tum sach mein kria ki shaadi kisi or se krva dogi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
just read the last two updates
and they were amazing
love the way that you describing how both of them are feeling at that time
please update soon
can't wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
the function are go on and the gang are help it out and rey and kriya are in
remember their old time how they used to do it for each other and one is jealous
and other is have a cry remember that time... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Update was awesome...

Kriya Rey ko chodkar kisi aur se shaddi kaise kar sakti hai...aur kyon kar rahi hey...

Koi Rey ko sach be batha do plz...

Teen din already ho chuke hai...kya shadi be hojayega ya hamare hero dulhan le jayaga????

Really curious to know wat next...update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
It was cute... Update soon. Me waiting!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome Update...

Loved it..

just love rey..
bechare akele ne pranthe khaye...

uske bad vo sare moments...

Lovely..

pls update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Awesome update
Update next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
My birthday is coming soo uski khushi mein here is the update:)
Enjoy
Chapter 4
4 th day
It was Mehnadi..right now it was Kriya's chance.. It had been a while that she was sitting there. No one was with her everyone was busy for the marraige day after tommorow..
Kriya- Bhaiya.. Idhar aao
Kriya- Areee... Bhaiya
Rey was passing by when he saw the tensed Kriya.. He went to her and...
Rey-Kriya.. Kya hua tum inte pareshan kyun ho?
Kriya- Rey actually woo maine subha se kuch nahi khaya hai aur abhi mujhe bohut bhook lag rahi hai.. Koi hai bhi nahi
Rey- Sab to padso ki tayariyaan kar rahe hai.. Ruko.. Mein tumhare liye khana lekar ata hoon
Rey brings food for her and sits next to her..
Rey- Lo kha lo
Kriya-Rey ummm mere dono hath maine mehnde lag rahe hai...
Rey- Umm..mein tumhe khila deta hoon
Rey made her eat food.. He got lost in her as she went on telling yeh khilayon nahii yeh...
Rey was giving her a bite if food but then suddenly..
Kriya-Rey aapne subha see kuch Khaya?
Rey- Nahi.. Mein padso ki tayariyon mein busy tha ki khane ka time nahi mila
Rey gives her a bite of food but she refuses to eat it..
Kriya- Jab tak aap nahi khayoge tab tab tak mein kuch nahi khaong.
Rey- Acha madam mein khata hoon
Rey eats food and Kriya is enjoying looking at him.Rey gives her a bite and suddenly..
Kriya-Rey.. Rey.. Mirchi lag gaye ... Mirchii.. Ahaaa
Rey was drinking water when he took out the glass from his mouth and made her drink it...
The woman putting mehandi was watching them smiling..
The woman-Aap dono kitne cute lagte hoo ek sath .. Aap dono agar aise hi rahoge to kabhi zindagi mein koyi mushkil nahi ayege
Rey and Kriya look at each other.. But no one says anything.Finally Kriya ki mehndi poori ho jati hai and rey helps her to go till her room.
They reach the room and there he says a pic of Vihaan with Kriya . He gets angry and is about to leave when..
Kriya-Rey please Vihaan ko bula doi na bohut important kaam hai
Rey could not refuse seeing her cute face.. He called up Vihaan but vihaan refused to come saying that he us busy..
Kriya-Rey kya hua??
Rey-Vihaan busy hai too vih nahi aa sakta.. Waise tumhe kya kaam tha?
Kriya-Voh.. Mujhe decide karna tha ki shadi mein mein konsa lehnga pehnu.. Too fir maine socha ki Vihaan ke pasand ka pehan lungi.. Par vohh idhar hai hi nahi
Rey- Tumhare liye itna important hai to tum mujhe dikha doo mein Vihaan ko pics bhej kar de doonga
Kriya goes and trys the first one. Rey thought she looked preety cute but the colour was too dul for a girl like her.. She then went to try the other one..
Kriya(perps from the door)-Rey vohhh... Meri blouse ki dori band nahi ho rahi
Rey comes in
Rey-Umm.. Mein band dooo if u don't mind??
Kriya-Yes
Rey ties it.. He took her fragnace in.. Ohh how he missed it soo much..
Rey is done.. Both feel awakward now.. Rey says that the second one is better and leaves.
5th day
It was Kriya's last night soo the whole team decided to play truth and dare at night..
They all were sitting in a circle when the bottle points it at kriya. She is given a dare to propose Rey..
Kriya bents down and proposes him.. She could not do this anymore.. Her eues were full of tears.. Swayum noticed it and told her to sit..
Time passes by many things happen.. Now the bottle comes on Rey.. He is asked to tell the person whom he hates from this group and why..
Rey-Mein Kriya ko sabar zyada hate karta hoon!!
Everyone including Kriya was shocked.
Sharon-REY.. Are u mad?
Rey- Nahi.. Maine Kriya ke jaise selfish ladki kabhi nahi dekhe.. Tumhe hamesha see mujhe problem danee thi naa isleye..wapas a gaye.. Iti ghatiya ladki kabhi nahi dekhi maine.. Bichara Vihaan.. Kaise ladki mil rahi hai usse..thankfully Bach gaya mein
Tears flowed down on kriyas cheeks.. She could not bear it anymore..she got up and shouted
Kriya- Baas Rey baas.. Apko pata bhi hai ki maine us din jo bhi kiya voh kyun kiya?? Mujhe financial problems ki vajha see dehradhun vapasjana tha! Aur mijhe pata tha ki long distance relationship nahi kaam karegi.. Aap yeh sunne ke baad toot jate aur kabhi move on nahi kar bate.. Isliye maine yeh kiya.. I LOVED U REY
Kriya ran from there. Rey was left numb.. He fell on his knees and cried
Rey-Kriya... Kriya.. Baatcuter please mere sath aisa mat karoo
Swayum consoled him and droped Rey at his home.BUT he had to talk to Kriya. He went to her hotel.. There he saw the most shocking site.. Vihaan and Taani were kissing. He went to Kriyas room to tell her. There Kriya was on her bed Crying
Kriya saw Rey and told him to leave..
Rey- Please Kriya ek baar meri baat to sun loo..Vihaan ek acha admi nahi hai.. Voh tum par cheat kar raha hai..yeh shadi maat karoo
SLAM Kriya had slapped Rey
Kriya- How dare you.. Sab janbuchkar kar rahe ho.. I luv Vihaan and he luvs me back..
Rey(in an angry tone)- Shadi Mubarak.. Mrs.Raichand
He left a howling Kriya behind.. The whole night passed.. Both could not sleep
6th Day
Finally the day of marraige came.. Kriya was getting ready.. What happend yesterday was still in her mind.. She was calling Vihaan but no respond..
She got ready.. And went in search for Vihaan.. When she went in his room she saw..Vihaan too close to Taani..She understood what rey said yesterday was true. She felt guilty for slapping Rey when he was protecting her.
Kriya went to sharon..
Kriya-Sharon aapne Rey ko dekha hai?
Sharon-Rey ummm voh to shadi mein aa hi na raha..
Kriya was shocked.. She searched for Rey..finally she found him sitting in the garden. Kriya went to him.
Kriya-Rey aap meri shadi mein nahi ayoge?
Rey did not respond
Kriya-Agar aap meri shadi mein nahi ayoge too shadi nahi hogi.. Pucho kyun?
Rey was still sitting without any response
Kriya-Kyunki I LOVE U REY..
Kya chabilal ...ramira ka ho sakta hai??
She put her hand in front..
But Rey did not accept it.. Kriya had tears in her eyes..She got up and was about to leave.. When Rey puled her..She banged into his chest. He took her in a passoniate kiss..
After sometime he bent down..
Rey-Chabilal to hamesha see Ramira ka tha voh uskeliye hee jee raha tha.. Par kya Baatcuter Rey ki hogi?
Kriya- Yesss
Rey-Par ek problem hai..
Kriya-Kya
Rey-Mere pass ring nahi hai
Kriya took out a box and gave it to Rey. Rey opened it and saw that it was the same ring which Rey had bought for Kriya.
Rey-Yeahh too vo hi ring hai..
Kriya-Haan.. Apne kya socha mein ring ko aise hi fail datee..us time se yeh mere paas thi.. Ab jaldi karo warna shadi se bhag bahi payenge
Rey puts the ring in Kriya's finger and picks her up and takes her till the mandap..
They get married
To Be Continued...
Thanx for all the comments
Luv u all
Take me as far as possible dis time plz

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