The Unbreakable Love (Kriyansh)

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The Unbreakable Love
Chapter-1
It was just a normal day in st.louis. As always the most cutest and the hotest couple were sitting in the fire exit. They were none other than Rey and his Baatcuter ooppps Kriya!
In the fire exit-
Kriya on Rey's shoulder both holding hands
Rey- Yaad hai tumhe baatcuter hum kaise ek sath aye the?
2years back
The weakling captain Kriya was in the Dazziling captain Rey's arms.
She had fainted but before she could fall rey caught her. Rey thought how cute she looked when she spoke nothing and wished that he could just kiss her but he took her in his arms and took her to his home.
Rey's home-
Kriya wakes up and sees Rey sitting Beside her
Kriya- Mein yahaan aur aap..??
Rey-Wohh tum faint ho gaye thi too maine socha ki mein tumhe ghar le aaon!
Kriya- Mujhe pata hai yeh sab apka plan hai apne janbockar mujhe faint karvaya aur fir yahan le aye! Mein wapas ja rahe hoon!!
Rey-Thike. You are most welcome!
Kriya got down but was not able to walk and fell in the bed. She saw that she had a crape bandaged on her leg and realized that she might have injured herself when she fainted.
Kriya- Thike.. Sorry and Thank you
Rey smirk
Kriya-Aap college nahi ja rahe??
Rey-Nahi! Tumhe meri wajah se lagi hai.. Agar mein sahi time pe tumhe pakad leta to aj tumhe lagti nahi. Isliye mein ajjj pore din tumhare pas tumhare madad karoonga.
Rey helps Kriya! Makes food for her .. Entertains her etc etc
Kriya(in her mind)-Rey itne bhi bute nahi hai jitna maine socha tha! I think he us preety cute!
Days passed by kriya got fine.. Finally the day came when kriya had to go back. They both were really sad. That night they realized that they could not stay away from each other and the were in LOVE.
Next day in college-
Kriya-rey
Rey-kriya
I love u (both together)
They hugged n hugged like there was no tommorow and it ended up with a passoniate kiss
Flashback Ends
Kriya-Kaise bhul sakta hoon! Apne itne pyar say mere care ki thi! Rey...
Rey- kya kriya?
Kriya- Aap mujhe kabhi chodkar nahi jaoge na! You will always be there with me na?
Rey- sssh!! U r mine only mine my baatcuter!Mein kisi aur ke pas kabhi nahi ja sakta after all marna nahi hai na mujhe!!
Nex Morning..It was their second anniversary and both were really excited to meet each other
Kriya was going to college wen..
Smriti-College se jaldi aa jana hum dehradhun wapas jaa rahe hai
Kriya-Kyun maa?
Smtiti- Kuch financial problems hai isleye
In the college (fire exit)
Rey(practicing) In one hand a box and other choclates-Baatcuter kya tum puri zindagi meri baat katogi? I luv u baatcuter! Ab ek pal tumhare bina nahi bitana cahta!
Kriya was seeing this and felt really bad.. She went inside
Kriya- Pagal ho kya rey itni subha subha kya bakwass ke liye bulaya mujhe?
Rey confused and thought that she must be irritated about something but what he was just going to do will make her happy actually the happiest girl on Earth.
Rey bent down and proposed her as he practiced.
Kriya- Hahahaah!! Apko sachi mein laga ki mein KRIYA GHAI aap jaise looser se pyar karrongi!
Rey(shocked)- Kriya...??
Kriya-Maine aapka use kiya hai! Apki shakal dekho hai koi apse zyada bada bewakoof nahi hai! Mujhe laga tha ki bohut mushkil hoga but yeah too bohut easy tha! Mein kisse aur se pyar karti hoon!
She took the gifts from him and threw them..
Rey(criying)-Thanks Miss Kriya Ghai for making me realize my true position... Mein yehh kabhi nahi bhoolunga!
He banged the door and went away
Kriya broke down-Rey i m really sorry! Aap hi mere true luv hoon! Aap looser nahi mein looser hoon!
Rey crying in the basketball court hits his head with the net and gets a bad cut on his hand
Rey- I hate u Kriya.. I hate u.. Hate u
Kriya told everyone why she was leaving and made a promise to them that they wont tell it to rey.
Kriya was leaving when she saw rey in the basketball court crying and his hand bleeding. She wanted to just go hug him and tell him why she did it but it was too late.. Controling her feelings she went away from there forever.. Leaving Rey alone...
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aYASHIKA thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept...
Continue soon...
And please pm me if u can...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was fabulous and great start... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 2(The Unbreakable Love)
After 3 years
Everything had changed.. Rey had moved on with taani. He had somwhat fogotten her..
Everyone except taarey were there when sharon gets a call and after that everyone is budy preaparing for something..
Rey returns after a day out with taani..he sees everyone busy and trys to ask the but bo no one answers
Rey(stops swayum)- Yehh sab tum kya kar rahe hoo? Koi mera javab kyun nahi de raha??
Swayum- Vo actually hum kise ke shadi ke tayarri kar rahe hain..
Rey-Kiske?
Swayum(hesitates a little)-Kriya ki.
Rey was numb..
That night he sat in the garden talking to himself and telling that this time he is strong and it does not borther him if Kriya is getting married to someone else.
Next the whole team was in the garden(except taani and rey). Thats when they saw a girl coming with a guy whos hands were on her waist. She none other than Kriya!!
Kriya- Hi guys
Gang-Hey Kriya! How ru ?
Kriya- I m fine! Meet him he is Vihaan.. Vihaan Raichand my fiancee
Gang- Hi.. Nice to meet u..
Sharon- Vihaan too bada cute hai par i m sure tumhari love story aur bhi cute hogi!hame bataoo ki tum kaise mile aur yehh sab kab huaa haan??
Kriya- Wooh actullay hum New York Dance academy main mile the and we became dance partners.. Then friends and den eventually we fell in luv and finally he proposed me so... I sed YES
Sharon- Ohhh
Kriya hugged everyone but still her eyes searched for that one person
Kriya- Ummm... Rey nahi hai?
Swayum- Voo actually... Rey.. Taani ke sath date par gaya hai
Kriya was shocked to hear this she controled her tears. She thought i should not be sad even i have moved on then ofcourse Rey should move on tooo. He has all the rightss
They all sat down and chatted Sharon told Kriya everything about how were these 3 years and how were taani and rey..etc etc
At night
Rey came from his date and saw in the garden that a girl was on a guys shoulder and he was stroking her hair..Rey felt as if the girl was Kriya and he remembered the way he used to do that in college..
Thats when Kriya turned and saw Rey.. Rey then saw Kriya and both got lost into each other as if they were only each others
Kriya- Hi... Rey
Rey- Hi.. Baatcut.. Kriya
Kriya-Rey meet my..
Vihaan holds kriya by her waist and gives her a quick kiss..
Vihaan- Fiancee.. I m Kivis fiancee Vihaan Raichand
Rey was watching all this but he had to control himself. Thats when he saw taani coming and he called her to the garden.
Rey- Taani meet Kriya Ghai and her FIANCEE Vihaan Raichand
Taani- Hi nice to meet u
Rey- Aand Kriya n Vihaan she is my GIRLFRIEND Taani
Taani-Aap aur Vihaan bohut cute lagte hai eksath
Kriya(looking at rey)-Thanx but tum aur Rey are the best couple.. U are just made for each other..
Taani and Rey were going when Kriya stopped Rey.. She had noticed that his hand had a scar which she knew that he had got it that day in the basket ball court.. Kriya took Reys hand and..
Kriya-Rey yehh apko kaise lagi?
Rey-Kuch ghaav kabhi jaye nahi hain aur vapas laut ke atte hain
Rey left Kriya's hand with a jerk.. Held taani by her waist and left
Kriya just stood there.. She knew what Rey meant.. She just wanted to die for hurting rey.. NO she thought I am strong and I cannot be sad.. She then went to her room with Vihaan.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update...
Bt kriya is going marry someone else...
Both moved on on their life...
How dare vihaan kiss zoya...
Are u going to give us sad ending?????
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its going to be a happy ending! Don't worry 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg kriya have talk to gang and told them everything what had happen and why she left too...
and finally all had a look and thing have changea lot... interst and fabulous chapter...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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love the first chapters
please do continue and PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!!!!
So dis is a fairytale romance turned into nightmare!!!
Naah!! I knw it'll turn into fairytale once again!!!
So its taarey 😡 🤢 😕 nw!!! 😭
Every1 knws d real reason y kriya left!!! 😃
Vihaan seems nyc!!! Does he knw bout kriyansh 😃 past?!
Taani ko bhi nahi pata hpga kriya k baare mein!!!
Kriya ki shaadi??!!!!
Krisha r talking normally!!! Dats news!!! 😉 😆
D wound wala dialogue was nyc!!! Bt painful at d sametym!!!
Hope everythng goes on d ryt track!!!
Continue soon!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeh kya tha?? 😕
Bring KriYaansh together soon!

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