The Unbreakable Love (Kriyansh) - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Update soon...
When will u update??? We are waiting. ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Oh no what is happening
I cant bear that t****
Pls bring kriyaansh together soon
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Nice progress in story but achaaanak marriage???
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome concept...

loved it...

first part reminded me of pre valentine...

second part mein sidha marriage.. :o

i think kuch to hai..

continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome concept pm me wen u upgrade
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
ausome...

lovd both the chapters...

ausome concept...

do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Today I am really happy i m getting my new phone so here is the Chapter 3 Enjoy:)

Chapter 3
The week of the marraige started
1'st day
It was morning time and today Kriya had to cook breakfast for everyone. All were sitting on the table waiting for Kriya to bring breakfast.. After sometime Kriya came outside with parathas all her face coverd with dry aatta! Rey thought how cute she looked! Kriya served it to everyone and sat down next to Vihaan!
Everyone picked up the parathas and saw that it was half burnt and half uncooked!
No one ate it and made an excuse and left BUT Rey ate the parathas without stopping.. Kriya was just looking at him and she rememberd that the last time when she cooked pasta for him and added too much chillie sauce still without any stop Rey ate the pasta! Rey had eaten 4 parathas till now.. He suddenly realized that he was alone and now even Kriya had gone back to the kitchen. Rey came to the kitchen to keep his plate and saw how kriya was trying hard to wash the plates.
He took the plate from her and...
Rey- Mein tumhare madad karta hoon
Kriya- Thike
Rey was washing the plate when he saw that kriyas hair were coming on her face and she was annoyed but could not do anything as she had soap all over her hands. He picked his hand and was about to remove the strand of her hair when Vihaan intrupted.
Vihaan- Rey tum jaoo! Mein kivi ki madat karloonga.
Rey looked at Kriya and saw in those that she did want him to leave but he had to go.
Rey went outside he stood there and watched as Kriya and Vihaan ran behind each other putting soap on each other! He rememberd the water fight they had after she had cooked pasta for him!
That afternoon everyone decided to vist their college St.Louis.
In the college
Sharon- So Vihaan aab hum tumhe dikhate hai ki humara dance kya hai..
The whole team (includind Kriya) dance on Bezuban
Sharon- Ab humare college ki best jodi Kriya n Rey perform karenge
The lights went off... The song In Lamhon ke Daman mein started
They touched each other.. They could feel what they felt when they were together..they were close to each other sooo close that they forgot where they were..
Sharon- Achaa so aab humne tumhe humara dance dikha diya hai aab tum aut kriya dance karo...
This time rey could not do anything he was just so jealous..
The song Kabhi Jo Badal Barse started and they dance just lost into each other. Rey could feel the fire burning inside him.. How could he let anyone else touch his baatcuter or dance with her..
The dance got over.. And everyone dragged Vihaan with them to show the college BUT Kriya left them and went to the Fire Exit.
In the fire exit
Kriya rememberd each n every moment she had spent with rey here and tears rolled down her eyes
Thats when rey came indide and saw Kriya crying
Rey-Tooh finally apko yaad aa hi gaya Ms. Kriya Ghai or should I say.. Mrs. Raichand?
Kriya could not handle this and left. Rey was deeply hurt as he left her crying but he had to do that.. He was not the old rey anymore..He was strong..
2nd Day
It was Saanget.. Only girls were allowed No Guy. They planned to sneak in! All were climbing up the pipe and Vihaan was the last one to climb. As he was climbing Taani caught him and told..
Taani- Itni bhi kya jaldi Kriya seee millena kal!! Chalo yaha see if u dont want to be beaten up by girls!
As Rey reached up.. He saw the most amazing site. His baatcuter wearing the most beautif Blue lhenga was dancing in middle of all the girls on Perdesi Girl.. The guys sneaked in..
They all were seeing the girls dance when one of them pushed Rey so he could reach Kriya! Kriya turned and starred at Rey.. Punjabi wedding song started.. She could not do anything soo they danced and later the group joined them.
3rd day
It was haldi! Kriya was sitting smiling at all those people who came and put haldi on her..
It was now Sharons turn. She came took loads of haldi and smashed it on Kriyas face. Next was swayum he came and put haldi on her face(exactly the same way in yjhd as ranbir puts in kalki)
Now only Rey was left..He was standing alone in the corner admiring Kriya..
Swayum shouted-Rey aab baas too hi baccha hai aa kriya ko haldi laga
Rey- Aata hoon
Rey came to Kriya.. He took some haldi and gently put it on Kriya's face
They both looked at each other.. Rey rememberd the first time he had touch her.. How good did he feel .. It was the same feeling now.. They both were just lost into each other.
Hope u liked it:)
Give reviews plz:)
Next update only if u take me till page 20
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rey..Kriya ko uttavo aur bhaag ja. ...
Kriya vihaan see kyu shaadi karli rahe hai...
Nice update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Diii... Its awesum.. Plz continue soon.. Dou u sed its gonna b a happy ending.. Unabl to ctrl d excitement to no how Kriyaansh r gona realise deir luv especially wen both taani and d new idiot vihaan r der wid dem.. 😡 ... Waitin 4 kriyaansh confession.. 😊 😊 ... Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc update..i wnt kr to b together soon..plz jaldi se milvado unhe..
thnx frd pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update...
Rey and kriya are dying to be with each other...
How ray eaten four parathas was soo cute...
Now they should confess how much they love each other...
Updare soon...
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