BabySteps| A Swayam-Sharon SS| Part 2, Page 4 updated! - Page 4

Originally posted by: So_Naley

OMG !! That was an incredibly touching and heart wrenching update !!
Loved how you explained Swayam's psyche...you captured the essence of his feelings beautifully and explained his inner turmoil with such clarity !! 👏
I am so in love with this Swayam and this Sharon which youamazingly potrayed in your story !!
Their polar approaches to love is what makes me adore them and you expressed that precisely!!
AMAZINGLY WRITTEN !! :)

Originally posted by: Shan_swayam

Damn u I'm bowling lyk a baby reading dis😭

Dis is hw I always wanted Swayam to b shown post everything,I cn feel each n every emotion dat he's going through, evn today I do bt da difference is in da show its left fr us to imagine

God I wish something atleast as half beautiful of dis was shown in da show,incredible piece of writing 👏

Originally posted by: d3isLife

Beautifully penned!

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

my God, this is brilliantly written dear... loved it... swayam's pov is awesome nd emotional... song 'lal ishq' is apt 4 ds situation.. just can't see swayam in pain... plz make them patch up.. update soon dear. nd do pm me

Originally posted by: .Destiny.

Bachche ki jaan legi kya? Aaja, jhappi lele! Shukriya, shukriya! 😆*jhappi back*

Did you feel it, Rai? The reality seep into your heart while writing this? Did you feel the heartache? Because I did while reading it and it was so intense that my tears broke the barriers. I have been crying alot lately, have you realized? 😆 The movies and novels..god I have turned into a hopeless idiot! Actually, I did. When I was listening to this song, I didn't even know what to think. Before it, I was totally blank and had NO idea where to begin, what to write that would be appropriate. But as soon as I listened to this song, words flowed. And then I put it on repeat. I have been too, don't worry. 😆

This was beautiful Rai, and even more beautifully penned down! We are perfect friends because of this. I can't convey my emotions, while you are so phenomenal at doing so! It is amazing! I loved it! Thank you so much Prach. It means a lot! I always think so much when I'm writing that I never realise kitna saara I wrote! Yes! I've always said that when I read RI or any other story that you penned down! 😆

I can see Swayam in this, the lover boy Swayam who doesn't know what is right and wrong anymore. Who wants Sharon to guide him because he is so clueless as to where this will all lead. He still loves her, but something has changed in him, and he is resistant to be the same loverboy he used to be. What could have changed? Sharon has showed her hidden warmth to him, and he has experienced it. He has seen her beyond her bitchy image. But Sharon saw him beyond the puppy in love too, and I think that is where it all cracked. They fell for each other's imperfections. But then they realized that the perfections in them came along and they weren't ready to handle the change. AMAZINGLY described. That's exactly what I was going for and I'm so glad you picked up on it. I mean, right now, people are blaming Swayam but come on. He's been so hurt he doesn't even know what to do. He's hesitant. I love how they both fell for each other's imperfections and I'm trying to portray that here. I'm so SO glad you liked it, honestly, means a lot! 😳

I don't know if I am making any sense at all, but I loved the update Rai! I am not a DHATING NAACH! commenter like you, but I try! 😆 YOU ARE MAKING SENSE! 😆 LOVED the comment! 😆

Nike it Rai! Nike it! 🤣 🤣 🤣Accha jee, meri hee line mujh par? 😆

Love you! Mwah! <3 Love you tooo <3