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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: So_Naley
Beautifully written !!
Its so relatable on so many levels...every girl goes thru this phase where she is oblivious to the entire world and lost in a world so pure so perfect...it offers escape an release from the mundane life that she lives...
And coming to the Swaron...i loved the simplicity with which u sorted all thwir problems...just one effort to push aside your ego,to bow down for the person you care for so much goes a long way...
I love the way you write...makes me feel damn connected to the story...
Swaron just added to the magic to the tale...love them and hope this actually came true on the show...would be simply perfect !!
Guess i got a lil too senti !! Sorry !!
But you were amazing !! 😳
Update soon !! :)

Thank you so much! And yes, it is true. To escape the mundane life that one lives, sometimes, movies provide the best solution. A Walk to Remember is one of the purest movies ever.

I was afraid that I would completely screw up her character cause she has so many levels that I don't even know what to write. 😆 Main khud confuse ho gayi!

Thanks once again! Senti waale comments I really love, cause it makes me feel ke the readers actually connected with my work! So, don't feel bad! Thank you! 😳

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Shaz

@..DamonCrazy..

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

RAEEE :* :* :*

Yus...I will read this. SwaRon hai toh kya hua...likh toh tu rahi hai 😳 Besides...I. Love. The. Beginning. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

I loved A Walk To Remember movie though I usually dislike all love stories #zsheepishsmile . Especially tragedies. And those lines connecr so well well to Swayam. BTW...Sharon need to loads for Swayam pleej <3 Make him super super super wala happy <3<3<3<3

Loved it Rae. Your wriring has changed thoda & I LURVE it!

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Anam Fatima

@Shan_swayam

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Omg dis was so beautiful oh god hw I wish something lyk dis was followed in D3 as well

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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Okay dude this came in like the sight of water in a desert. 😳 This was good, it was really really good. :'( I've suddenly become very emotional and started missing SwaRon in a magnitude of tons and its all your fault. 😳

You need to continue this fast, okay? Pretty please? :(

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

it was an awesum update

very beautiful ki kya bolu

i was already in luv wit tis muvee

but ur material made me fall for tis story all over again

sharon 's emotions were beautifully emoted

n the signature dialog tat you used was majestic

it completely blended wit the situation

waiting to read more

do update soon

n dont forget to pm me

i wud appreciate it 🤗

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Amazing Start!!

pls update soon and do pm me..

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

welcome dear..
this is gonna be awesome..
loved sharon's pov..
update soon..
n do pm me plz..
sending buddy request, plz accept

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

this was amazingly beautiful

i really loved reading it

it was so well thought and so well penned down.

please do continue and do PM me

would love to read more works by you 😳

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CutielovesChocs

@CutielovesChocs

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ..DamonCrazy..
RAEEE :* :* :*

Yus...I will read this. SwaRon hai toh kya hua...likh toh tu rahi hai 😳 Besides...I. Love. The. Beginning. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3

I loved A Walk To Remember movie though I usually dislike all love stories #zsheepishsmile . Especially tragedies. And those lines connecr so well well to Swayam. BTW...Sharon need to loads for Swayam pleej <3 Make him super super super wala happy <3<3<3<3

Loved it Rae. Your wriring has changed thoda & I LURVE it!

Shazzzyyy! You know I love you na? Tu kinni awesome hai! 😃 *jhappi paa le*

I know, I loved A Walk to Remember, and I HATE tragedies. But then, this movie and the book, both have a special place in my dil. And yeah, Sharon needs to take charge idhar. Swayam is wayy too hurt right now. Next part will be Swayam's POV. 😳

Thank youuu so much! And since you love it, I hope it's changed in a good way! 😆