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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
really amazing update
superb
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Hey careless dreamer!!
Now u gonna make me dream abt this story!! Lol!
Well i jus luvd the way u explained the whole situation!!
And the small intimate moments wer also explained reallly nicely!!
Hmm though i hv a confusion..
They introduced each other by sayin their names..
But the last two lines which wer d best!! And i luvd them.. Told me tht they had met b4..
Well u know wat.. Jus let it be!!
I just luvd reading this story!! And thats wat matters to me!
U see i like a bit of mystery! 😉
it was again a marvellloouus write up by u!!
So way to go dear!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awesome OS dear
Simply luvd it
keep writing more
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
nice one.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
wah ji wah kya baat...

hayee.. kya os hai...

bahut pyaara...

just another one...loved the concept...

superbly penned down...

keep writing..and keep smiling...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: anjali22

amazing os

plss continue

I don't think I will.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
superb os...both just have a one night stand feeling...no emotions nothing...y did u end it...i so demand a part 2 for it...it is soo incomplete without part 2...
chng d topic frm os to ts...n do write nxt part...
i vl wait...
diz one waz tooo cool...man...lovd it...thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
U seem to be a pro in writing yar...i was reading slumber party thrice...nd got another pm...
U r hell amazing...one night stand..described with so ease...aah...it killed man...the points caught my attention were...
How u descriped rey's focus on her...
Her appearance..
Frst touch...
Location change..
Nd limited intro while heating up...dat was brilliantly amazing...kuddos...
Mind it...it wasnt a random one..bt was very thrilling...
I wasnted to ask u for continuation bt u hv already refused so...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha

U seem to be a pro in writing yar...i was reading slumber party thrice...nd got another pm...
U r hell amazing...one night stand..described with so ease...aah...it killed man...the points caught my attention were...
How u descriped rey's focus on her...
Her appearance..
Frst touch...
Location change..
Nd limited intro while heating up...dat was brilliantly amazing...kuddos...
Mind it...it wasnt a random one..bt was very thrilling...
I wasnted to ask u for continuation bt u hv already refused so...

I love you for understanding...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
goddd this was soo awesomee👏
beautifully written👏👏
loveeddd itt❤️

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