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Mahnaz Gul

@NoMoreUsing

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Edited by CarelessDreamer - 12 years ago

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

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Unres:D
Should i kiss u or hug u?? Kya karu btane ke liye i can't believe, you can write in this way too
woho girl,this is amazing.. Never thought u would write something like this
Rey being totaly pevert 😆 N Kriya the sexy caller 😆
I So enjoyed it
But but how dare u??
How can u even think to end it like this, it is like complete yet incomplete
Work on the other part,really want to c how u would continue it.
Take it as request,plz write the next part na n if needed can tell u how to start but i want to see what u would write
Plz make it 2 shot n make them fall in love
Way to go girl, U write so gud
N I Love U for this Muahh... 🤗

Edited by RiyaArShaKapoor - 12 years ago

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Ankita

@anki_22

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

awww...😳😳
Totally loved it.. it was Fun yet Hot.. too bad it's an One shot.. would love to know if it will stay just an one night stand or be something more..!😆
should be considered of continuation..!!😉😳

Edited by anki_22 - 12 years ago

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Tisha

@Jiana.ArSHa

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing os!!

Description of club was lyk Mind blowing!!

Sexy Kria, Aroused Rey.. What else we want??

One night stand!! ..

"To him, she was just another one.
And to her, he was the exact same."

I luved that line..

usage of words jst osumm.

totally loved it!!

do write more!!

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..Re..

@..Re..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Shit!

Let me control my emotions.

Trying to control my emotions

Still trying

Trying

f**k I can't control my emotions. This was so hot! Am I rubbing off on you? 🤣 kidding. Anyways, I loved it and damn! You can write girl 😃 detailing was perfect. And last scene where they answer unspoken questions. Oh damn my favourite scene.

This cheered me up. Thank you so much 😉

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow!! Dis was smthng v hot!!
Bt d last lines were smthng i didnt expect!!!
I mean it was really good bt last lines were hypnotic!!!
For a moment or two i was just dazed!!!
It was really grt effort!!
N u do write well!!
Continue!!
Want a continuation!!!
*sad face* its an os!! Continue it if possible!!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

fabulous and great os... loved it

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

aahhaan kya baat kya baat kya baat love it supab

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

Mereko last line ka matlab nhi samjha...

But loved it...

You know just loved how you described the casual encounter... :)

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Mahnaz Gul

@NoMoreUsing

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Riya- hug karlo, kiss Kuching zyaada Ho jayega :P
And I just tried writing something different... Never underestimate the power of Mahnaz... 😆

Anki- thank u for ur comment means a lot.

Tisha- thanks for the valuable comment.

Andrea- thank you but control babes... We'll happy I cheered you up.

Kreya204- thank you I was shocked too when this idea came in my mind.

Darshita- thank u.

Kriapatel- shukriya lady mithunda... Mein dhanya Ho gayi ke aap ok yeah pasand aaya.

Vaish- Kuch nai yaar. It meant that they are probably never gonna meet again and that they have casual encounters vey frequently... :P

And for all those who wanted another part to this, sorry guys but I have no idea how it can go further than this... But yeah kabhi idea aye to Pakka likhungi... Thank you once more

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