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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sachi123
Thanxxx fr d Update! Sorry fr pressurizing u! U dnt need to b sorry! Nice one! Update soon :)!

nahi nahi you don't be sorry either...i'll upload the next part soon...glad that you liked it😊😊

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Sharon calls Vicky
Vicky:but sharon yaar aisa kaise...how can you be so selfish...
Sharon:toh tum bana do na reports...phir toh main party chalungi...
Vicky:nahi yaar sharon we were supposed to go together...
Sharon:but Vicky...
Vicky:Fine. tum hamesha hi api marzi chalati ho...abhi bhi wahi kar rahi ho...

Swayam calls Ruhi.
Swayam:hey ruhi i am really sorry yaar...party mein nahi ja sakta...I am sorry Ruhi...
Sharon to herself:ittna kya sorry bole ja raha hai...
Swayam:i hope you understand...
Ruhi:uh hmm umm okay...
Swayam:I hope you don't mind..i am really sorry...
Swayam disconnects the call...
Swayam:humare wajah se ruhi aur Vicky party mein nahi jaa pa rahe hai...it's bad ya...
Sharon:idea...Ruhi aur vicky couple banke part mein chale ja sakta hai...what say...
Swayam:yea great...main Ruhi ko bol deta hoon ki woh Vicky ke saath chala jaye...
Sharon:main Vicky ko bol deta hoon woh Ruhi ko pick kar lega...
They inform them...
Sharon:Done...
Swayam:yea...chalo ab jaldi report khatam karte hain...

Scene Shift. at the party
Kriya:Rey woh log toh aa hi nahi rahe hai...I hope plan work karein...
Rey:karega of course karega...Reyaansh singhania ka plan hai...
Kriya:ussi ka hi toh darr hai
suddenly they notice Ruhi and vicky entering...
Ruhi and Vicky reach the party...
Rey:Sharon kaha hai Vicky? tu aur woh toh saath aane wala tha...aur Swayam aur Ruhi...
vicky:ha Swayam sharon kuch college kaam mein busy hai...toh woh log nahi aa rahe hai...
ruhi:haa aur issliye un logo ne hi suggest kiya ki hum party mein aa jayein...
Kriya:kya woh log nahi aa rahe hai...
vicky:nahi...
Rey:what??? party mein nahi ayenge woh log...
Ruhi:nahi
vicky:chhod na..hum toh aa gaye...
Vicky and ruhi go to the gang...
Rey:shit shit shit...party mein hi nahi aa rahe hai ...disgusting...plan flop...Kriya ab?
Rey notices Kriya grinning...
Rey:lagta hai plan flop ke shock mein pagal ho gayi hai...Kriya it's okay...ek plan flop hua toh doosra banayenge...ittna shocked mat ho...aisa hota hi hai...failure success hi toh zindagi hai...
Rey holds her to comfort...Kriya snubs
Kriya:pagal ho kya?bol kya rahe ho????yeh toh acha hua...
Rey:acha hua...kaha se...???
Kriya:Swayam sharon saath hai...abhi un log ko bolo ki woh party mein aa jayei...option nahi hai...ab woh log couple ban jayenge...
Rey:kya peeya tumne??? chadh gayi lagta hai...
Kriya:shut up...aur call karo Swayam ko...main Sharon ko call karti hoon...
Rey:ha ha kyu nahi..Sharon toh baithi hai na tumhari baat maan ne ke liye
kriya:maanegi woh..aap Swayam ko call kar rahe hai ki nahi??
Rey:nahi...please...mujhe maaf karo...
kriya:nahi karungi...maine aapka plan maana tha na...ab aap bhi maano...
Rey:tum iss liye maani thi kyunki...plan acha tha...tumhare plan ke tarah vahiyaad nahi...
Kriya:haa issliye flop hua...ab chup aur call karo...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Rey gives in and calls Swayam..
Rey:aggar woh nahi maan atoh...
Kriya:emotional atyachaar re...
Kriya calls Sharon.
Kriya:Sharon...party mein kab tak aa rake ho?
Sharon:sorry yaar kriya..party mein nahi aa rahe hai...
Kriya:kyaa??? nahi aa rahe ho???
Sharon:Vicky ne nahi bola kya?? ab tak toh Ruhi aur Vicky ko pohoch jaan achahiye...
Kriya:kya Vicky toh tumhare saath aane wali thi na Sharon...
Sharon:haa woh kya hai na...reports...ke wajah se...
Kriya:acha woh sab chodo party mein kab aaogi...???
Sharon:kriya i am really sorry...
Kriya:koi sorry vorry nahi chalega you have to come..please...ab hum dost hai na..plase sharon...aur agar tum party mein nahi aa rahi ho...to main bhi abhi ghar chali jaungi...
Sharon thinks for a while...
Sharon:okay Kriya main aa rahi hoon...par couple
Kriya:Swayam hai toh...ab no bahana jaldi se taiyyar ho jaao...and aa jao...
At the same time Rey calls Swayam...
Swayam:ha rey bol
Rey:party mein kab tak aa raha hai yaar?
Swayam:Rey woh party mein nahi aa paunga...
Rey:what..p...pa...party mein nahi aa raha hai...kyu???
Swayam:woh reports...
Rey:sun woh sab chhod...party mein aa ja...please...warna warna main bhi chala jaunga...party se..
Swayam:okay...par party mein nahi aa sakta...
Rey:kya okay? tujhe apni dost ki koi parwah nahi hai na...tu aisa kar raha hai...mujhe tujhse yeh ummed nahi thi...Swayam tu aisa kar raha hai...
Swayam:acha ab apna yeh nautanki bandh kar...
Rey:tujhe aana padega tujhe meri kasam...
Swayam:Rey??? Kasam??? really??? pagal hai kya??
Rey:ha kasam de diya maine ab aaja...sharon ke saath...
Swayam:Sharon ke saath...?? tujhe kaise pata main Ruhi ke saath nahi aa paunga...??
Rey:bbye..jaldi aa ja...aur kasam hai mera...
Rey disconnects...Kriya:kittna overacting karte ho aap...btw Sharon aa rahi hai...
Scene shift.
Sharon:party mein jaan ahai...
Swayam:ha...
Sharon:reports are almost done...baki bhi khatam ho jayega...abhi let's move
Swayam:yea..
They are about to leave ...
Swayam:Sharon...hum saath chal rahe hai na...??
Sharon:yea couple entry...main tumhe raman ke ghar ke bahar milungi...
Swayam:yea okay...
Sharon and Swayam reach home...
Sharon gets ready and is about to leave when suddenly her cousin Jia calls...
Jia:hey Sharon, kya tum apni car mere ghar bhej sakti ho??? actually my car has broken down aur mom dad apne cars leke nikal gaye hai...and it's very urgent...mera aaj boyfriend ke saath date hai i have to go...please please please...
Sharon:okay Jia...itni baar please bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai...u can take my car...driver bhaiyya aap Jia ke ghar chalein jao
The car leaves
Sharon:ab main kya karoon...??Swayam...ussi ko bolna parega...
Sharon calls Swayam...
Swayam:tum pohoch bhi gayi...???itni jaldi??
Sharon:no..uh..umm actually ek problem hai...
Swayam:i knew it...it's fine..
Sharon:baaat toh suno...can you just pick me up...woh mera car meri cousin ko chahiye tha...
I hope it won't be an issue...
Swayam:no not at all...see you in 15...
Sharon:hmm yea...thanks

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ANMOL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

nice update loved it.

loved kr in it...

nd swaron come together...

plzz update soon

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Sachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Thanxx! Swaron Patchup Patchup Patchup :)! FF me toh karado! Nice one haa! Party ! Update soon :)!

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sachi123
Thanxx! Swaron Patchup Patchup Patchup :)! FF me toh karado! Nice one haa! Party ! Update soon :)!

ruk ja behna kara denge patchup...😛😛

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Swayam picks Sharon from her house and they both reach the party venue. They look for Rey and Kriya but they are nowhere to be found. A gang watches them and shouts Hey look...Swayam Sharon couple hai...They come towards them.
Girl1:Hey tum dono couple ho?
Swayam:uh..huh...na..i mean...
Sharon:he means hum acquaintance hai...and in any case you shouldn't be bothered.
Meanwhile they spot the gang and move towards them.
Kriya:hi Sharon...thank god tum aayi...
A hug hug session is there. Music all around and they dance their hearts out
Raman to his friend:yaar college end hone wala hai...aur mera ek dream hai...
His friends:kya???
Raman:D3 gang ka member ban na...
Friend1:achanak se aisa kyu? dance karna hai...ki un log ke jaisa friendship ka epitome ban na hai...
Raman:dude in mein se kuch bhi nahi...
Friend2:phir?
Raman:dekh na un logo ke hi gang mein saare hot girls hai...Sharon, Kriya, Ruhi...saare ke saare...
Friend3:wah bhai...yeh baat sahi hai...toh kuch kar na...
Raman:kya karoon???
Friend4:ab itna bhola mat ban...
Raman:you mean...??
Friend1:yes dude...now go...
Raman:par target...Kriya aur Rey couple hai...aur Sharon
Friend3:usse bhool hi ja...ek gang mein hote huye bhi Swayam ko ghaas nahi deti...tujhe kya ghaas dalegi...khali fokat mein insult ho jayega tera...
Raman:chhod yaar...
Friend1:Ruhi yaar...
all of them smirk.
Raman:Hey Ruhi...one dance...
Ruhi reluctanty agrees.
raman while dancing:shall I get you a drink.
Ruhi:no you don't bother..I'll get it myself
Raman:Relax. party ka host hoon...
Ruhi...okay...fresh lime soda...without ice.
raman:sure..

Scene Shift.
Swayam:Sharon ruhi kaha hai?
Sharon:pata nahi...main uski bodyguard nahi hoon...
swayam:tumhe pata hai na Ruhi humare gang ke ilava kissiko ache se nahi janti...
Sharon:toh main kya usske peeche ghoonoo...ittna shuq hai na toh tum ghumo...
Swayam:God you are impossible.
He notices Ruhi dancing with raman. Even his gang goes away dancing..Rey-Kriya and all the respective couple...
Sharon stands there. she is happy for her friends rey-Kriya, nil-simmi...
Swayam:tumhe floor mein dance karna hai...???
Sharon:no...I am fine.
They see Rey and Kriya calling them.
They are happy seeing them happy...
Swayam:chalo sharon...nahi chalogi toh un log ka moment kharab hoga...dance floor chhodke woh log bhi yaha aa jayenge...
Sharon:yea...chalo...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Sharon and swayam are at the dance floor. Sharon remembers all the good moments spent with Swayam.
swayam notices Ruhi feeling dizzy.
Sharon notices Swayam looking at Ruhi.
Sharon:I'll just come.
Meanwhile Swayam senses something wrong with Raman's intentions
Swayam:raman kya hua isse...
raman:kuch nahi you enjoy...she is enjoying...
But Swayam is not convinced...
Swayam:yaar Priya tujhe bula rahi hai...(Priya is one of their batchmate). Tu ja..I';ll take care...
raman:oh..ohkay...
Ruhi is now almost on swayam...
Sharon sees this...She can't take it anymore.
Swayam picks up Ruhi...Sharon calls him an he does not listen...
Sharon tries to call him...he does not even receive the call...
Sharon:Swayam has moved on...woh Ruhi ke saath khush hai...main usse rokungi nahi...we weren't meant to be together. Swayam ke liye yeh toh over ho hi chuka tha...abhi kuch nahi ho sakta...mujhe ghar jaana hai..i'll ask Rey to drop me.
She sees Rey and Kriya and the rest of the gang having a great time.
Sharon:main ittni selfish nahi ho sakti...meri wajah se un logo ka moment kharab hoga...nahi...main akele hi chali jaungi...
Sharon moves out of the party...she is pale...and broken down...tears are rolling down...
Scene shift.
Swayam drops Ruhi at her house.
swayam:main Sharon ko call kar deta hoon...He sees his mobile and sees 8 missed calls from Sharon...shit...i'll call her...but her phone is switched off...woh abhi party mein hi hogio...I'll go there...
Swayam goes to the party and asks everyone...about Sharon
Rey:Sharon nahi mil rahi hai...par woh toh tere saath thi na...
Swayam:ha lekin maine Ruhi ko ghar drop karne chala gaya...aur abhi woh nahi mil rahi...
Rey:Ruhi ko ghar drop??? bol kya raha hai????
Swayam:i'll explain lekin baad mein...perhle Sharon ko dhoondo...
Nil:dhoondo kya? koi kumbhmela nahi hai jo Sharon kho jayegi...ghar pe call kar..I am sure woh ghar chali gayi hogi...
Rey calls up:kaaka...Sharon
Kaka:Rey baba Sharon bitiya toh ghar pe nahi hai...Swayam baba toh aye the unhe lene kuch hua kya? Sharon bitiya theek hai na???
Rey:kya Sharon ghar pe nahi hai...
Swayam snatches the phone...
kaka:nahi aur unhone aaj ana pump bhi nahi liya...aajkal woh zyaada beemar hone lagi hai...
Swayam:kya??? acha aapko pata hoga Sharon abhi kaha hai...
kaha:nahi baba...
Swayam:acha kaka jab sharon ayegi toh humein inform kar dena...
kaka:ji...
Swayam:rey sharon ghar pe nahi hai...kaha jaa sakti hai woh...
Rey:let's spread out aur hum Sharon ko dhoondte hai...
Vicky-Nil-amar- Bhatrat- simmi-Rinni -Ashi all leave in different directions...
Rey:hum tere saath aate hai Swayam...
Swayam:nahi...i'll manage..tum doposre taraf jaao...
they look for her every where but she is nowhere to be found...
Swayam is in mid way when his car breaks down...
Swayam:dammit...bharat ka garage paas hi hai...wahi se kuch karna padega...
Swayam calls Vicky:jaldi se bharat ko garage aane bolo...
Vicky:par kyu?
Swayam:jo bol raha hoon woh kar ittna sawaal mat kar...
Vicky:okay...

Vicky:bharat tere garage jaana hai
Bharat:lekin kyu??
Vicky:ittna sawaal mat kar chal...

Amar Nil Asshi and Rinni is together...They notice Vicky's car...
Amar:abbe look look yeh dekh kaha ja lahe hai...
Vicky calls Nil:hum bharat ke garage jaa rahe hai...
Nil:theek hai dude hum bhi aa rahe hai...
amar:Ley ko bo de...

Scene shift Swayam reaches the garage...
After sometime he hears someone crying...he looks around only to find Sharon
Swayam:Sharon tum yaha ho???pata nahi hum sab tumhe kaha dhoond rahe hai...samajhti kya ho tum apne aapko???? aise bina batayein party se kaise aa gayi tum??how could you Sharon how could you?
Sharon:why do you even care...tum Ruhi ke saath khush ho...and I don't to hold you back...
Swayam:shut up Sharon just shut up...tum woh soch ti ho jo tumhe sochna hai...kissi aur ke baarein mein kabhi socha hai tumne
Sharon:ha socha issliye party se chali aayi...
Meanwhile the gang reaches the garage...
Rinni:yeh dekho Sgharon toh yaha hai...Swayam kittna smart hai na...
Simmi:shut up rinni...
Rinni:Sha...she is about to shout when Rey and Simmi...stops her...
Rey:chup..let them talk...
Bharat:koi talk nahi hoga...ghamasaan hoga ghamasaan...
Sharon:please jao yaha se...you have moved on Swayam...tum usske saath khush ho...
Swayam:chup...I 've tried moving on..par nahi kar paya...i'll always love you Sharon...main bass tumhe
Sharon:mujhe kya? yeh realise karwana chahte the ki main tumse pyaar karti hoon ki nahi...
Swayam:I love you Sharon
Sharon: I love you too Swayam. and I am sorry...
Swayam:Don't be...
They hug
Simmi:aah finally...
They break the hug and notice the gang...
Vicky:isska matlab???
Sharon:matlab hum couple hai aur humesha rahenge...
Group Hug..

End...😊😊😊😊
Hope you like it...tomato...eggs joota chappal...all welcome...but thoda tareef bhi kar dena...😛😛😛😛

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

It was fab!!!👏

Luved it yaar...

Enojyed how you wrote down each update... liked it...

Aww...Swayam n Sharon... patch up was sweeet!!!! They hugged ! N Simmi ka reaction "Finally" perfect!!!👏

Actually wish ki ye kabhi khtm nhi hota !!!!!😳

I just hav a reqst ki ek new FF likho na...plzzz SwaRon FF... plzzz related to some mystery..plzzz!!!!😊

Tomato n chappal to nahi but A HUG to you fr writing the FF..🤗

Luv,
Sakshi.

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: sakshibshah
It was fab!!!👏

Luved it yaar...
Enojyed how you wrote down each update... liked it...

Aww...Swayam n Sharon... patch up was sweeet!!!! They hugged ! N Simmi ka reaction "Finally" perfect!!!👏
Actually wish ki ye kabhi khtm nhi hota !!!!!😳

I just hav a reqst ki ek new FF likho na...plzzz SwaRon FF... plzzz related to some mystery..plzzz!!!!😊

Tomato n chappal to nahi but A HUG to you fr writing the FF..🤗
Luv,
Sakshi.

thank you thank you thank you... i'll surely try to write another one...😊😊😊😊

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