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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Next day. College canteen...
Nil:hey Vicky bol na bol na...iss black shirt ke saath red tie pehnu????
Simmi:Nil tum mere saath jaa rahe ho...Raman ke party mein koi fark nahi padta tum black ke saath red pehno ki white...koi dekhega hi nahi tumhe...
Nil:ha tumhe toh jaise bohot saare ladke check out karne waale hai...koi bhi fa...(he stops...Simmi leaves)
Bharat:banta tujhe kya chinta...tu toh Simmi ke saath jayega...chinta toh iss Vicky ka hai...usse toh dhang ka kapda pehen na padega na...Sharon ke saath jo jaa raha hai...
Vicky:haa yaar...mujhe tension ho raha hai...
Bharat:abbe gaali...gaali kisko...
Amar:gali nai le...tentun yaani tinta...(tension yaani chinta)
Rey ,Kria and Sharon are in the RH. Swayam and Ruhi comes ...
Swayam:Sharon Vp sir ne humein cabin mein bulaya hai...we need to go...
Sharon:hmm...turning to Rey and Kriya...I'll see you guys...

VP sir's cabin
VP:guys...thank you...Ruhi ko poora college dikhane ke liye aur apne team mein include karne ke liye.
Sharon:no problem Sir
Swayam:yes Sir...hum bohot khush hai aapne hum logo ko capable samjha iss duty ke liye...
Vp:hmm duty...toh tumlog apna duty kaafi ache se karte ho iss liye...you have more duties coming up...Last week NGO visit ke report...it's done I believe
Swayam:yes Sir...almost...
Vp:Is it done completely?
Sharon:no sir in the process...
Vp:good. woh aaj khatam karke mujhe submit kar dena kal along with your SOP(statement of purpose) ki tumlog apne academy kyun open karna chahte ho aur affiliation kyun chahte ho...
Both of them are shocked...
VP:i know i know...tum log surprised ho...but tum logo ka hardwork aur talent dekh kar...i thought of just helping you...
Swayam:but Sir woh toh Rey aapko better tarreke se bata payega...aur report bhi wahi better bana payega...
Sharon:yea Sir...yeh toh Rey...
VP:Good then, toh Rey ko bol dena mujhe reports dene ke liye kal subah tak...so I am done...get to work.
They both leave. Both of them receive Rey's text... "Guys basketball court in 5".
Swayam:Rey ka message...
Sharon:basketball court 5 mins mein...i hope sab theek hai...
Swayam:chalein?
Sharon:yea...
They reach basketball court...and see Rey pacing up and down...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Sharon:Rey humein tumse kuch kehna hai...
Rey:great mujhe bhi...so pehle tum bolo...
Swayam:tune bulaya hai...tu bol...i am sure woh zyaada urgent hai...
Rey:okay...Swayam...i know Kriya jab Mumbai aayi thi maine usske liye ittne saare problems create kiya...toh main...main...
Sharon:Rey what is the point...????
Rey:Swayam tu...tu na humesha se hi sahi tha...main kabhi Kriya ko bhoola hi nahi...mujhe toh bas Kriya par gussa tha...
Swayam:bol ka raha hai tu...
Sharon:Rey tum theek toh ho na...??
Rey:ha guys...I have realised mujhe usse pro...propose karna hai...
Sharon:Kriya ko...?? you sure???
Swyam:ek minute ek minute...ekdum achanak se kaise?
Rey:tum dono khush nahi ho...bada best friend fbest friend kehte ho aur yeh sunnke itna thanda reaction...???
Sharon:nahi Rey...hum bass yeh pooch rahe the tum sure ho ki nahi...I mean aise achanak se...Kriya ko ittna bada baat bolna aur phir...
Swayam:Congratulations dude...ja bol de...
Rey:yess...aaj hi party mein...waise tum log bhi kuch bolna chahte the mujhe...
Sharon:ha woh rey...
Swayam holds Sharon's hand and makes a gesture saying no...
Swayam:yeh important nahi hai...tu jaa aur bol de Kriya ko...all the best...
Sharon:all the best Rey...
Rey:tum khush toh ho na...
Sharon:of course main khush ho...now go...Romeo...
Rey leaves...
Sharon:tumne mujhe rey ko bolne kyu nahi diya...
Swayam:tumhe dikh nahi raha tha...rey kitna khush hai...aise main tum usse academy ka baat bologe toh woh sab chod ke reports aur SOP leke baith jata...
Sharon:yea...you are right...anyways reports ready karne ke liye...
Swayam gets a call...
Swayam:ok Ruhi main aata hoon...
He disconnects the call.
Swayam:Ruhi ko kuch books chahiye...toh main...
Sharon:main Rh mein hoon...tum apna kaam khatam karke aa jana...reports ready karna padega aaj hi...saying this she leaves

Scene Shift.
Rey calls someone and says:kaam ho gaya...
Flashback:
Kriya:rey aapko nahi lagta...Swayam aur sharon bas pretend kar rahe hai sab normal hone ka..
Rey:sab koi tumhare tarah nahi hota humesha drama...
Kriya:Rey...
Rey:okay I am sorry...
Kriya:mujhe lagta hai humein kuch karna chahiye...
rey:kya?
Kriya:wahi toh socho na...
Rey:Idea...main Swayam aur Sharon ke saamne jaake bolunga ki main tumhe propse karne wala hoo...aise unke dil mein ek doosre ke liye jo pyaar hai na woh jaag jayega...
kriya:you wish Rey...yeh bohot hi wahiyaad idea hai...koi fayda nahi hai...
Rey:acha...tumhe toh jaise bohot achche ideas aa rahe hai...
Kriya:sochne toh do...
After a long thinking...Kriya gives in and agrees to Rey's idea.
Flashback ends.

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Sachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice one! Pr chottu sa tha! Pls update lil longer next time! Eagerly waiting fr SWARON'S CONVO!

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Read al lchaps in one go...
Lovely writing..interesting! Updae soon plz

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Trisha paul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Awesome update..

update the next part soon...

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Sachi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Pls UPDATE! Ur FF is increasing my anxiety level! Ur writing style is quite intriguing!Pls UPDATE n dis time SWARON CONVO n 2-3 parts pls! I know thoda jyada h,Bt U CAN DO IT!

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: sachi123
Pls UPDATE! Ur FF is increasing my anxiety level! Ur writing style is quite intriguing!Pls UPDATE n dis time SWARON CONVO n 2-3 parts pls! I know thoda jyada h,Bt U CAN DO IT!

sorry for the late update...😕😕

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Rehearsel Hall.
Sharon:yeh Swayam itna kya Ruhi ka bodyguard banta phir raha hai...Vp sir ne hum dono ko usse accompany karne ke liye kaha tha...aur Swayam toh uska bodyguard ban raha hai...relax Sharon...tumhe koi fark nahi padta...tumhe reports banani hai...so relax...breathe in breathe out...yes Sharon...Swayam aur tumhara kuch nahi hai abhi...
Saying this Sharon sits to begin with the report writing thing...It has been sometime and Swayam has still not come...
Sharon:yeh ittna time lagta hai kya...khud books khareed ne gaya hai kya...uff...no Sharon no...tumhe koi fark nahi padta...
After sometime Swayam comes...
Sharon:kaha the tum ittna time lagta hai...agra apna duties nahi karna chahte ho..then resign kar do...
Swayam:Relax...ittna kya bharak rahi ho...I'll explain...
Sharon:listen I don't care...just get to work...
Swayam:okay...as you say...
They get to work.
swayam:I think yeh jo repoprt iss mein we need to give our point of view also...tabhi toh experience ke baare mein pata chalega...otherwise yeh bohot factual lag raha hai...
Sharon:hmm ok...will do that...but jo bhi karna hai...jaldi karo...isske baad NGO wala report bhi bana na hai...
It has been long... Sharon feels uneasy...She keeps all her stuffs and sits cupping her face.
Swayam:you okay Sharon ...tumhari tabyat toh theek hai na...
I think tum rest kar lo...main manage kar lunga...
Sharon:suno tumhe mere guardian ban ne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...tum kuch nahi lagte ho mere...
Swayam:yeh tum mujhe yaad dila rahe ho ki khudko...
Sharon:yaad nahi dila rahi hoon Swayam...bass koshish kar rahi hoon jaldi se accept kar loon...
Swayam:kyu kar rahi ho tum yeh sab..??? why???itna forcefully???
Sharon:you know what I just don't get it... tum nahi chahte hum friends rahe aur main wahi kar rahi hoon...abhi tumhe problem hai...
Swayam:Sharon please...bar bar baat wahi mat laao...we need to make the reports soon...party bhi jaana hai...
Sharon:oh yes of course ruhi ke saath jaana hai tumhe...chaho toh tum abhi ja sakte ho...I'll do it on my own
Swayam:Sharon:just stop it...humein kaam per dhyaan dena chahiye...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

they are so engrossed in their work, Swayam and sharon don't even notice the time
Scene shift.
Nil and Vicky are over the phone...
Vicky:yaar pata nahi Sharon kab aayegi...it's laready 6 woh boli thi 5:30 ko usse call karne ke liye...maine usse phone kiya toh bola half an hour baad woh call karegi...yaar call bhi nahi kar rahi...pata nahi jayegi bhi ya nahi...
Nil:dude teri toh lag gayi...abhi main simmi ke saath party mein jaunga aur hot girls check out karunga...tu beitha rahe sharon ke intezaar mein
Vicky:hey tu dost hai ki kya hai...meri yaha lagi pari hai aur tujhe flirting soojh rahi hi...agar Sharon ne aane se mana kar diya toh...main kya karunga??? meri bhi party cancel...shitt shitt...
Nil:okay bye vichy...Simmi call mein hai...bbbye...see you...or not see you...
Vicky:Nil Nil...ruk na...ruk...
Scene Shift.
Kriya:Rey Rey...you sure na plan work karega...I mean jaha tak main un dono ko...
Rey:tumhare paas better idea toh tha nahi...toh jo idea hai...ussi mein khush raho...samjhi na...
Kriya:aap hamesha mere baat kyu kaat te ho...baat cutter main nahi aap ho...samjhe aap...
Rey:okay meri maa...tum ab please ready ho jaao...
Kriya:15 mins...
rey:matlab half an hour...
Kriya glares and leaves...
Rey gets a call...
Vicky:yaar sharon..kab aayegi...kab party jaunga...
Rey:sharon ko tune abhi tak pick nahi kiya...
Vicky:nahi yaar...
Kriya:Rey I am ready chalein???
Rey:sun Vicky..I don't know anything...Sharon ko leke party pohoch...
Vicky:Sharon phone nahi utha rahi hai...
Rey:Vicky BYE...
Vicky:rey rey...hold on..
Rey diconnects the call...
Vicky:sabko ladki mil gayi toh sab dost ko bhool jayenge...
Scene shift
Kriya:kya hua...
Rey:kuch nahi...tum chalo...
Scene shift. Sharon Swayam still working...
Swayam:I don't think hum party mein jaa payenge...
Sharon:hmm..main Vicky ko bol deti hoon...(she gets a flashback of the scene after the pre breakup fiasco when swayam tells her he would move on...if he gets a suitable girl)...Swayam:tum chalein jao...main reports bana lungi...
Swayam:yeh hum dono ki reponsibility hai...
Sharon:right...main reports banake tumhe mail kar dungi...check kar lena
Swayam:No hum saath mein bana lenge...I'll just inform Ruhi...
Sharon:stop Swayam Shekhawat...yeh sharon rai Prakash ki orders hai...and you gotta listen to it...
Swayam:kyu??? tum bhagwaan ho??
Sharon:nahi GS hoon...
Swayam:of course tum GS ho...but tum AGS ko apna kaam karne se rok nahi sakti...