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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first on this forum. This is basically a continuation of the current Swaron track.

...after the canteen wala scene
Swayam:yeh Sharon ko kya ho gaya itni wierd behave kyu kar rahi hai?(to himself)
Sharon:guys dhaba chalna hai ki nahi...Vicky yeh look kise de rahe ho? chalo jaldi guys
they all leave
Back at home
Sharon getting ready...she wore a black top with a blue pair of denims and a jacket.
At the dhaba...Sharon fiddling with her phone...when Swayam comes
Swayam:hey Sharon...mujhe tumse baat karni hai...
Sharon:sure go on
Swayam:tum aaj un log ko props...
Sharon:props agar damage hote hai toh tum usski responsibility loge?
Swayam:woh log college ke students hai...props damage kyu karenge?
Sharon: correction I said props damage ho sakte hai naki woh log props damage kar denge..get it?
Swayam: tumhe hua kya hai? i mean..
Sharon:listen..GS main hoon aur main decide karungi props koi aur kissi aur purpose k liye use kar sakte hai ki nahi...
she notices Kriya and moves towards her
Sharon:hey Kriya...hmm pretty huh.. Indian ...acha hai...she looks at Rey and grins
Kriya: hi Sharon mujhe aapse baat karni hai...
Sharon: ha bolo...
Kriya:yaha nahi..akele mein..
Sharon: Kriya is everything fine?
Kriya:chaliye...
They move away...Rey and Swayam are watching them in anticipation...
they see Sharon and Kriya talking and by their hand gestures Rey and Swayam figure out they are arguing..
Swayam (to himself): for once sharon for once mujhe wrong prove karo..ab mujhe tumhari aur Kriya ki dosti ki sachchai pata chal gayi toh tum puraane dino ki tarah ladh rahi ho...
Swayam could see Sharon move out in anger...she comes towards the gang
Sharon:guys... Kriya is pathetic...woh aisa kaise kar sakti hai...weakling thi aur hamesha weakling hi rahegi..
Everybody is shocked.
Nil and Vicky:bu...Shar...
Kriya comes in...
Kriya: maine decide kar liya hai...aur mujhe yahi karna hai...Sharon tum baat samjho...
Sharon:no Kriya you are not understanding...hum sab ki dreams dance se judi hui hai...aur hum mein se aggar kisi ek ka bhi dream poora hota hai...woh humare liye bohot hai...
Kriya: No sharon...main apne dreams ke liye tum sab ki dreams spoil nahi kar sakti...
Sharon: Kriya hum sab chahte hai ki dance academy bane but not at the cost of your dreams...no plaease Kriya
Kriya: Sharon...maine decide kar liya hai...main India chor ke nahi jaa rahi hoon...
Swayam: Kriya tum yeh kyunn..Sharon is right,...
Kriya:nahi Swayam...maine decide kar liya hai...
Sharon: Kriya soch lo...
Kriya: Sharon ..am sure...
Kriya tears off the letter



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Posted: 11 years ago
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This isn't anything great...waiting for your response...will update next part soon...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratz for ur 1st attempt..
Its nice...really well done...
Do continue...but change the title like swaron os or smthing...it will help ppl identify it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nic dear

it aswom update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kriya:Sharon I know tum kabhi nahi chahogi ki tum sab ke liye mera New York jaana ruk jaye...but trust me Sharon main New York jaake tum sab se door...(looks at Rey) main kabhi khush nahi rahungi...
Sharon:hmm I know...it's cool...tumhari life hai...tumahari decisions...I hope tum baad mein repent na karo...
Kriya: I won't Sharon...jisske paas tum jaisa dost ho...woh kabhi repent nahi karega( looks at Swayam)...
Kriya Sharon hug...
Swayam;aarrre chalo kuch khane ke liye order karte hai yaar
Bharat: ha banta..chal kuch khate hai...kuch order kar te hai...
In the meantime
Sharon's driver: Sharon bitiya...mere ghar se phone aya hai meri beti ki tabyat kharab hai...aapko kitna time lagega? main aapko jaldi ghar pohochakar apne ghar chala jaunga...
Sharon:driverji aap chalein jao...mujhe time lagega...aur aap yeh rakh lo...she hands him almost the entire cash that she was carrying...
Swayam watches this and realises that Sharon truly has a heart of gold..
Ther order and have their food...it's time to leave but Kriya is in no mood to leave
Rey:Kriya chalna hai ki nahi?
Kriya:Rey thodi der rukte hai mujhe Sharon aur Swayam se baat karni hai...inn sabko jaane dijiye...
(she goes to Swayam)...Swayam please thodi der aur ruk jao...mujhe baat karni hai tumse...
Simmi:Bye guys...chalo Sharon...main tumhe drop kar dungi
Sharon:yea chalo...
Rey comes running...hey Sharon Sharon...ruko tum maintumhe drop kar dunga...
Simmi:Rey main Sharon ko drop kar dunga...
Rey:nahi Simmi it's fine raat ho chuki hai...tum dono ladkiyo ka akele jaana theek nahi hai...main Sharon ko drop kar dunga...ab meri best friend hai thoda time toh usse mere saath spend karne do...
Simmi: okay okay Rey...then I'll leave..
Sharon:Bye Simmi..see ya...
Simmi leaves...Sharon looks towards Rey
Sharon:ha bolo...
Rey: kya?
Sharon:mujhe roka kyu?
Scene shift
Swayam:Kriya...I am happy ki tum nahi jaa rahi ho...but tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...I mean tum apni future...
Kriya(cuts him):Swayaaammm...tum aur Sharon kitne similar sochte ho...i mean ussne bhi mujhe mere future k baare mein samjhaya...
Just then Rey and Sharon comes...
Rey:I hope hum best friends time mein intervene nahi kar rahe hai...
Kriya:no not at all...aao baitho...
Four of them sit and they are talking about the old days..It has been a long time...Sharon gets up and moves away.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow coll update .. these 4 peeps...
nd frndship... plzz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sharon moves out..she stares at the sky...It's windy and she starts coughing...She realises the deadly asthma will hunt her anytime soon...she thinks to herself...
main apna inhaler bhi carry nahi carry kar rahi hoon mujhe chalna hoga...I'll ask Rey...(saying this she turns to see the three of them having a good time...flashback:Kriya tore off that letter only for their dreams)...Rey kitna khush hai...agar main Rey ko drop karne bolungi toh usska happy moment yahi ruk jayega...kya karoon..main akele hi chali jaati hoon...
Sharon goes to them:guys i am leaving...mujhe jaana hai...
Rey:Sharon main tumhe drop kar dunga...
Sharon feels uneasy as she talks..na..nahi Rey...I..I'll leave main akele chali jaungi...aur ghar pohoch ke main tumhe text kar dungi...
Kriya:Are you sure?
sharon:yea babes...u guys carry on...bye..
Swayam notices this...and..Swayam:guys i'll also leave...Sharon chalo I'll drop you..
Sharon(in diva avatar): u goota be kidding me Swayam...tumhare cycle mein Sharon Rai Prakash...???Dream on...
They are a li'l shocked..Sharon leaves...
Sharon starts walking...few guys stalk her...Sharon is aware of that...she walks even faster...
Swayam catches up with her...
Swayam:Sharon dekho it's not safe tum mere saath chalo I'll drop you...
Sharon:tum mujhe follow karna bandh karo...and please Swayam for God's sake...meri life control mat karo...
Swayam:b..but Shar..Sharon...
Sharon walks...and...she gets a cab...
By the time Sharon is back at home she is almost out of breath...she looks for her inhaler...and now she feels okay...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow next update.. its Sharon astama... beautifully written...next see what happened Sharon in diva mood...
update soon
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Next day...St Louis College..Sharon Swayam enters VP office...
VP:aah Swayam and Sharon...meet my niece Ruhi...
Ruhi is a pretty girl...She is wearing denim shorts and striped shirt...hair tied into a m=neat ponytail...
Swayam moves forward and extends his hand...Hi Ruhi..Swayam it is..
Ruhi:hi
Swayam and this is Sha...
Sharon:Sharon Rai Prakash it is...Hi...
Ruhi: Hello Sharon...nice to meet you
Sharon:likewise...
Vp:So I believe tum dono Ruhi ko campus tour karwa doge...
Sharon:Sure Sir...don't worry...
Vp:I hope it isn't too much I am asking for...
Swayam:no not at all...Sir...we are more than happy...
Vp:thank you...
Sharon:no problem Sir...
Swayam:chale Ruhi?
Ruhi:yea sure...
Sharon:and this is the abandoned corridoor...
Ruhi:abandoned corridoor???
Swayam:yes abandoned..
Ruhi:yaha koi aata kyun nahi...
Swayam:nahi it's not literally abandoned people come here...
Sharon:no Ruhi abandoned ka matlab I believe you know and it's literally abandoned...I think...humein ab class karna chahiye...it's almost time.. baaki tour baad mein...
Swayam is shocked at Sharon's behaviour...
Swayam:tum log chalo...I'll see you guys later...
Ruhi:class nahi karna...bumk huh??
Swayam:no yaa...got some work... main thodi der mein aa raha hoon...
Sharon:Ruhi we are getting late let's move...
Ruhi:yea sure...Bye Swayam...
Swayam:buhbye...see you...
Sharon Ruhi are walking towards the classroom...
Ruhi:Sharon I hope you don't mind me asking...tumne Swayam ko aise ignore kiya jaise woh exist hi nahi karta...
Sharon:Ruhi babes...it's nothing like that...
Ruhi:no I mean jab woh bola ki woh class late ayega...I belive tum log friends ho...
Sharon:look girl...kissi aur ke life mein interfere karna is not Sharon thing...Sharon Rai Prakash I am... babes...
Ruhi:I hope you didn't mind...
Sharon:no not all ...nayi ho seekh jaogi...class cahlein
Ruhi:hmm yeah...
They enter class room...
Sharon:hey guys this is Ruhi...
All one by one:hi Ruhi...
Ruhi:Hi...
Sharon:Ruhi...This is Rey...,Nil, Vicky, Simmi, Rinni, Bharat, Amar, Ashi and that's Kriya...
Vicky:hey Ruhi...welcome to THE gang...
Rinni:Vicky Sharon se bina pooche???
Everybody is quiet and wait for Sharon's reaction...
Ruhi:it's okay...abhi toh aayi hoon...gang mein aane mein time lagega I suppose..
Sharon:No...Ruhi...welcome to the gang..am sure you will love us...
Ruhi Sharon hug...Swayam enters...Prof enters behind him...All sttle down...Ruhi sits beside Simmi...Sharon has no option but to sit beside Swayam...
Sharon:hey Ruhi...1st day 1st seat...chalo sit there...
Ruhi:smart ha...peeche baithke cit chat...cool...
Swayam is surprised that Sharon let go off a chance to sit beside him...
Sharon sits beside Simmi.




Edited by saggitarius687 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its very nic update...
ruhi nd Sharon frnds .. swayam bechara shock lag gaya...plzz update sonn...
nd do pm me

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