Swaron OS: Mera Mann Kehne Laga

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Nila

@Glowing_Star

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazingly written! Awesome job !

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Monidipa konar

@ehmmbhluvr

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Beautiful..soothing..mesmerising..nd mst imp a happy ending..it ws so so needed..luvly piece f writng..

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Beautiful os :)

I loved how you showed Swayam's frustration and the confession

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Amy

@Amy21

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Superb os...
Love sawyam & sharon convo.. 😊

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Reserved

Unreserved

anther continuation by you

i loved it

it was simply amazing.

and the dream 🤣.. shit man! i died laughing

swaron's convo was really beautiful

so well written

loved it

Thanks for the PM

keep writing more 😃

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

this was beautiful and wonderful and amazing os... loved it

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

another great OS by you tanvish..

loved the way you described the hallunication scene and carried your OS from there..dream part was beautifully done..

swayam ne sharon ke chakkar mein aunty ka haath pakad liya..🤣

loved the patch up part..

thanks a lot for writing this OS..

and thnks for the PM

cheers

nishi

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sonali saraswat

@cutelove

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

U do write beautifully ...dis was really awesome..

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swaron2121

@swaron2121

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

too good thanx for the PM

😛

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

res

unres

saying tat l loved it will be an understatement

phele toh pura sequence

jisme swayam is imagining sharon was really cute

yu just justified the line '' yeh dil dharakta hai sharon sharon kehta hai ''

thr were many swayamish moments too

i luved the small dance sequence in between

beechara swayam sharon samaj kar aunty ka haath pakar liya 😆

ab iss majnu ka kya hoga 😉

i liked tat yu gave a perfect ending to tis

very light-hearted , good humored n emotional os

do write more 😃

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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