Swaron OS: Mera Mann Kehne Laga - Page 8

Originally posted by: pratik54000

Its one beautiful work that i would read more than one time...beautifully written and expressed os...

Thank you for pm..

Pratik...

Originally posted by: Thats.me.Guni

Amazing os.
Actually sumthing of this kind ws needed in current d3 track.
Luvd d os.

Originally posted by: navk

lovely os

Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks

Amazing work tanvish :D

firstly loved how u included the canteen scene and then continued it...

Wish d3 ke writers ke paas itni creativity hoti..

The dance was beautiful

Swayam's hallucinations were funny:P totally a treat to read

The emotional part was the highlight for me..Their confession..awesome:)

As a writer u did a brilliant job in combining all these emotions in an os

Keep writing such os's on swaron

-Love Veronica

Originally posted by: taanikapoor101

Very beautiful os!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: freya123

Nice update

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

its such a beautiful os tanvish

loved the way swayam was daydreaming of sharon

Originally posted by: nature2

beautiful one :)

Originally posted by: Death_Memories

since I am not watching D3 anymore I have no idea whats happening but anyways i liked the way this OS progressed.The song selection was very good.I liked the whole song sequence part.The ending was emotional as well as romantic in its own way.I liked it very very much
Sorry for the late review anyways loved it