~~~THE LAST RAY OF HOPE~~~(Swaron SS) *Discontinued* - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept 😊
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Y divorce ?
kyo ?
pls update and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Great start to your SS sandy and I liked the concept..
Sharon and Swayam divorced already??😲.
Aisa kya kiya hai sharon ne which made Swayam take this step??
I liked how you emoted their pain their suffering..
I like how you write..
Swayam going to sydney and Sharon fainted??
Plzzz update the next part soon and pm me when you do..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept...update d next part soon.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the chapter was great... but still i do not get why both of them took divorse...
and what the matter he did not reveal to any of them... and sharon still remember
swayan and think about him she faint... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😭 kya comment karon jj
tumne tu ek dum senti start lia hai
start hi divorce se
ab jaldi jaldi swaron ko milla
zyada rolane ki koshish mat kariyo warna meri beauty kharab ho jae gi 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gud one...
Swaron divorce ...Swayam going sydney...n sharon fainted...
dude u building up curiosity...

cant wait...b fast
do PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys ..I know I am super duper late but kya...was caught up...really really very sorry...here you go...
CHAPTER 2

6 years later...

Ta:hum log kabhi India mein nahi reh sakte kya...har baar vacation pe abroad kyun jaate hain???
Rey:I know taani...but tum jaanti ho na ki mujhe swayam ke b'day pe india mein rehna pasand nahi...
their eyes got wet when he took his name...They hadn't seen him,nor talked to him...since 6 years...they knew he was in Sydney...but he made everyone promise that they wouldnt try to come meet him...all they could do was send him an email...wishing him a happy birthday...and in a reply he would ask them to go on a vacation...Taarey were going to Melbourne...they had just randomly picked up the city...who knew what awaited them...

Sydney

Alicia:Sir,its your birthday tommorow...the staff wanted to arrange a party...if you cou..
No...she was cut by her boss...being a secretary to him was confusing...he was kind hearted but didnt show he had a heart...
Okay ,Mr.Shekhawat...she said and left...
Al:phew...I've got the hang of calling him Mr.Shekhawat..call him Swayam and ...Blow...your dead...

Melbourne

6 long years...6 birthdays...tommorow's your birthday Swayam...and how I wish I could just go hug you kiss you and never let you go...but no...I cant...
I came here after that day when...leave it ...all I know is that I have been living here for almost 6 years...with my only hope being her...

Mumbai

Ta:Rey chodo mujhe ,humein 3 hours mein flight board karni hai...
Rey:accha baba...chalo,airport chalein...

The Next Day
Morning
Melbourne

Sharon woke up early...after all it was a very special day for her.."Happy Birthday Swayam"..she said and then she went to the other room and saw someone sleeping peacefully...
Sharon gave a kiss and said,"wake up ,sweetie"...she heard a mumbling sound and then...,"just a sec Mom...hey wait it's my birthday"
..."Haapy Birthday Saesha"sharon screamed"..."Thank you mom.." Saesha said placing a peck on her cheek...She was too excited on her 5th birthday...jumping here and there was normal...Sharon soon got her ready for school...Saesha was a 5 year old diva but still studious ..."mera gift???"..."Baad mein" said Sharon as she dropped her off to school...

Melbourne Airport

Ta:Melbourne,afterall...
Rey:ya Taani...come on sweetheart ..we've gotta reach our apartment(they had an apartment in melbourne)...
They reach their apartment...freshen up and rest for sometime...
Ta:Rey I am going shopping ...aap chaloge...
Rey:(drowsily)tum jaoo main so raha hoon...
Ta:Aalsi!!!...

Here with Sharon...

Shar:Shit I needa go shopping...saesha waapas aayegi usse pehle I'll come back...

Sydney

Alicia:Happy Birthday Sir...
Swayam:Ya , whateva thanx...Mr.Johnson ka kaam hua?
Al(she knew hindi):Almost...
Swa:Almost...what do you mean by almost...kaam ya to hota hai ya nahi hota hai...as of now nahi hua hai..2 hrs mein ho jaana chahiye...
Al:Yes sir...

Alicia leaves...

Swayam looking at sharon's picture:Kaash aaj tum mere saath hoti...kaash mujhe wo sab nahi karna padta...kaash tumse door nahi...leave it...thanks Sharon...coz I know ki tum mujhe wish kar chuki hogi...

Precap:Secrets start unfolding...


So finally done...hows it guys ...plss like and comment pls...Chapter dedicated to Anmol bhai (swaronlove001) & GlamorousPearl(sorry I dont know your real name)...

Guys please leave your encouraging comments...it means a lot..I know the chap is boring but next one will be full of saesha antics...

P.S~~Anmol Bhai...pls can you promote my story by sending pm's to your friends...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its very nic update loved ...

shyesha nic name nd swayam brthdat...

nic plzz update soon...

nd preacp is amazing

nd i knw 1 secret konsa hoga ...

p.s:- no i m 4rm mobile but chek pm nd send pm 4rm my id
Edited by swaronlove001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful SS loving it continue soon

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