~~~THE LAST RAY OF HOPE~~~(Swaron SS) *Discontinued* - Page 3

Awesome update!!
Thanks for pm!
Can't wait for secrets to unfold!

Awesome update 👏 👏 👏
Waiting for secrets to unfold
Plz give update fast 😛

wow dear, great piece of writing.
loved it.
both swayam n sharon in australia, bt they didn't knew it.
now tarey are here too, hope they will meet soon.

ohh woaah wat a surprise... abeautiful start to my saturday gal ...thnku sooo much...i so liked it and da lovely lil angel saesha touch in it ahh👍🏼mama's angel haan...and damn how soon it ended...n waiting for secret to unveil...damn goooddd👏

thnku so much for da update dat seriously made my day ok now i m much more curious to know...how would swayam react whn he knows abt Saesha...it should be real intnse emotion packed yaar phir maza ayega...

u better update soon...😉

PS : felt very spcl since u mentioned me in der...THNKU dear...

Love
Afii
(Afsha my name)

part 2 was superb... omg means rey and his wife are at melbourne...
and they are in tounch with swayan through email... and sharon had a daughter...
i have a confusion whether rey and his wife know this or not... and swayan is also
miss sharon... and taani is about to go shopping and same is with sharon...
the thing will get reveal of truth out soon... do continue soon and pm me

nice concept..

I am late agin...showwy(puppy face)...bak bak baad mein...

CHAPTER 3

Melbourne Supermart

Ta:huff...its been years since I last came to melbourne...last time to wo thi...iss baar akele hi shopping karni padegi...lemme get some groceries...nahi to roz bahar ka khana padega...
She spotted a girl at some distance and she seemed familiar...she started walking towards her and...

Sydney

Swayam reached his house,he preferred calling it house as it wasnt a home...
Just then the bell rang...
It was Rehaan...
Sw: Tu hai...aur mujhe laga yahaan kaun aa gaya...
Reh:Corect my friend...iss gande se ghar me koi kyun aayega...par mujhe to aana padta hai...Happy Birthday Dude!!!
Sw:Thanks...Chal tujhe kuch dikata hoon...
Reh:Kya???
Swayam switched on his lappy and entered the password...Sharon...
He opened his email Id and as expected there was Rey and Taani's video message they sent every year on his birthday...
Reh:tu kar kya raha hai???
Swa showed him a pic of taarey...
Sw:this is my sis...
Reh:gorgeous...
Sw:Side mein uska husband cum mera best friend hai...
Reh:accha...par tu ye sab kyun dikha raha hai...
Swa:tujhe apni only family se mila raha tha...
Swa started the video...
Ta:Hey bhai...Happy Birthday...kaise ho???
Rey:kis baat ka kaisa hai...har baar isko video bhejna padta hai...kabhi khud bhi baat kar liya kar...abe Saale ...happy birthday...ab ye mat bolna ki saala kise bola...
Ta:bhai we miss you a lot...par iss bar aapke liye ek surprise hai...
Swayam and Rehaan had a smile plastered to their faces while Taarey were continuously chirping telling him about the years hapenings or the gang's happenings...but then suddenly...
Rey:and heres your surprise...a little 4 year old came walking in...
Re:See,your niece,Shanya...
Shanya:hey mama,maine aapko kabhi nhi dekha,sirf photos mein dekha hai,par mom dad say that your my mamu...Happy birthday...aap shanya se milne aao na...mujhe aapse milna hai...plsss ...Bye...luv u...
Ta:see,ab to shanya se bhi baat kar li na...bye bhai...
Taarey:Happy birthday!!!
Swayam had tears in his eyes but he was smiling...
Reh:are u insane...tu sang mein has aur ro raha hai...
Sw:when you dont see your close one for years,when your niece talks to you for the first time...its normal...

Melbourne

With Rey,
On the phone
Re: Arre baccha aap gussa kyun ho rahe ho,Mom shopping karne gayi hai na,main pakka aapki baat kara dunga...thodi der mein...
But Shanya cut the call...

Supermart...

Taani tapped on the girl's shoulder and they both got shocked seeing each other...6 years back they saw each other for the last time...

6 years back...

(refer to chapter 1's end)
Sharon fainted...

Here a car stopped outside Rai prakash house...a girl came out of the car and went to ring the bell,once,twice ,thrice but no one responded...at the end she turned to leave but didnt fail to notice that the door was open...Taani rushed in..only to find an unconcious Sharon on the floor...
Ta: bhabhi...aap ko kya hua???Wake up,dammit...
at the end Taani took help of the watchman and took Sharon to the car,driving off to the hospital...
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Doc:aap itna worried kyun hai Mrs.Singhania,aisi haalat mein sab normal hai...
Ta:Aisi haalat???
Doc:yes...sharon is two months pregnant...
Ta: WHAT????...
Taani rushed in...but before she could say anything...
Sha:Taani,maine aaj tak tumse kuch nahi maanga hai,but plss aaj maang rahi hun...plss Swayam ko,Rey ko ya kisi ko bhi kuch mat batana ..plsss...main Melbourne chali jaaungi...I beg of you Taani...
Tears continuosly flowed out of their eyes...
Ta:I promise Sharon...
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Aage padna hai...to wait karna padega...Chapter khatam...
Precap:A shocking truth,some fun ...and clast of the titans... 😛
Guys many of you might be thinking what was Rey-Shanya talk for...it was to tell that Shanya wasnt in melbourne...kyun nhi thi...mujhe kya pata???...khud socho...
So in short...every boring scene has a connect to the past ,present and future...
As for Rehaan...swayam needs a friend...poore 6 years...You cant live without even one friend...
Suggestion needed...
Should I add some angle like Alicia(swayam's Secretary) falling for Swayam...thoda mirch masala daalne ka mann kar raha tha...
Aur tum sab ko kya laga...saare secrets abhi hi khol dungi...
And sorry this one didnt have Saesha...but next one is full of her...

So
Signing off,
Sanyukta

Awesome update
video part was so adorable
update soon

its awesum
luved the video of taarey

swayam ka b'day
taani met sharon

update soon

Loved the update but small